yes, its me, the criticizer again *sigh* (i hate doing this, especially to you)
so um, akai's position is kinda awkward, but then you didnt have a reference so yeah
but akai's jacket should be a darker color, and the hat didnt have the rim
i really liked gin, however, his hands are not bold enough
someone like him would have rougher hands than what you drew
im sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry for this cuz i do it every time TT~TT
anyways, r4u orz