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People who overreact to people joking or arguing. 1. It's just a joke. 2. People argue. It happens. :roll: But I suppose I should feel sorry for them. They can't live life to its fullest.

So ummm... this is one of my first works that isn't romantic in any way (save for very subtle hints of fan-characterxfan-character and even then it's more-so friendship... in fact this story is pretty much a crack-fic I thought up... so go ahead and criticize away. I need it to be a better writer. I want to know how I did at a not-so-romantic story ) Please let me know how I did. You're not SUPPOSED to understand much about what's going on, by the way. It's made for you to MAKE your own conclusions and assumptions. And before you ask... Yes. Yes Lucy is from Fairy Tail. Ayumi is from Detective Conan. Kasumi is from Dead or Alive. Yamato is BASED on the Yamato from Maji de Watashi ni Koi Shinasai. Mary is BASED on Mary from Ib, as is the idea of an item being tied to one’s life. The monsters and the castle they were in is based HEAVILY upon Amnesia. Adriade is based on Apollo from Aquarion. Mitch & Mary’s father and Ayumi’s uncle are simply fan-characters made up completely from my mind. I hope you all enjoy the very random one-shot. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lucy fell to the floor, covering her sobs in her hands, her tears pouring out and lashing at the grime around her. She soon felt Adriade’s presence as he bent down next to her, shivering in woe as he wrapped an arm around her shoulder. Kasumi shifted her entire body, taking quickly paced steps away from the scene, the back of her hand to her forehead as she did her best to hold back the tears that were imposing on her eyes. Yamato himself closed his eyes, Mary’s back fighting its way under his arm- a battle in which it won. Her blonde hair rested against his chest. She shook and shook, biting both of her lips. She had brought this upon them all. An older man lay on his back behind them all, both hands placed over his chest with composure. Mitch stared down at the limp, frail body he held in the air, tears pouring at a much more alarming rate than that of anybody else’s. His glasses clouded with the misty salt water as he choked and bawled. Ayumi hung lifelessly in his arms, her ordinarily pink lips formed in a straight, blue line. Her head drooped over his arms and her legs dangled with every shake his body made, reminding him every moment that she was gone. She was never coming back. Well, she was but… Lucy’s wails echoed throughout the room, the blonde not being afraid to cry every now and then. Her breathing was becoming increasingly labored, her breaths short and silent. Adriade silently scooped her upper half into a bear hug, hushing her snivels against his red-clothed chest. “What do we do…? What do we do now?” Nobody wanted to say it. Nobody wanted to admit that this had just happened- that their youngest had given her life by stabbing her stone in an attempt to kill the man responsible for the presence of everyone there. The purple glow that once radiated from her glittery jewel had become a light shimmer when she stabbed it with an arrow that missed its target, slowly fading until it was just a simple purple rock. It almost seemed like something you could get at a dollar store. Secretly they all despised the thought that their lights still burned with a vengeance. Lucy’s orange, Adriade’s yellow, Kasumi’s blue, and Yamato’s pale green. Nobody could have stopped it. Not one person could have done anything to stop Ayumi from doing what she did. Those stones represented their life-force, but if one of them was so selfless as to kill themselves, which the dead man behind them knew they wouldn’t, just one broken stone would take his life as well- unless he himself broke it. Then only the person besides him tied to the stone would die. He was the one who brought the curse. It was his rules. Remind them of how selfish they truly were- every one of them. Play with them. Toy with their minds. It had worked up until now. Ayumi had been protected by the knocked out Mitch as he laid in front of her, shielded from the torture that the rest of her friends were enduring. Lucy was strung to the wall by vines, knocked unconscious from the abuse her body had suffered from the battle. Adriade was lying on his back, eyes closed as he breathed shallowly. Kasumi was on her knees, still fighting for her final breaths in battle before one of those… THINGS, those MONSTERS gripped her neck, robbing her of the little air she still held as she fell to their clutches. Yamato was down for the count on his side, Mary hollering and crying and begging for him to open his eyes and not ‘leave her like this’. The seven-year-old had watched helplessly as Mary was gripped by the man, her wrist being the limb he reached for. She had cried for him to let go, begged him “DADDY LET GO! WAKE UP!” but that didn’t even faze him. Ayumi’s uncle’s grip tightened on his daughter’s arm, growling as he held the knife to her throat, mumbling about her being a sacrifice whether she wished for it or not. His grey mustache scrunched up in anger, his white beard moving with his mouth as his two rows of teeth clashed against one another. The green eyes scanned over Mary’s body, her light pink dress with a gold ribbon around her neck dirty and ripped, giving away her attempts to help the fallen group. At this point, Ayumi had spotted one of Kasumi’s fallen arrows (the man had cleverly, or with a sudden stroke of common sense taken away her weapons and the like- it wouldn’t do to have a ninja have such an advantage) laying on the ground. It was then that the idea had occurred to her. “We have to go, now.” “We have to bury her at least!” “NO!” Yamato’s sudden scream erupted and scared most of their small group out of their cries. “No, you idiots. She’ll just reincarnate in twenty minutes and keep dying the same horrible death over and over again!” “What do we do then?” Kasumi interrupted Yamato’s angered rant, snapping the young man back to the current situation as a whole rather than just 1/3 of the picture- no matter how much bigger and more gruesome and demanding of attention that picture was. He stopped and thought about it for a minute, placing a hand on his head. His eyes trailed from Kasumi to Mary to Lucy & Adriade and finally, to Mitch and the unmoving girl being held tightly in his arms. “We… we need to just set her down and… and get out of here. That’s why she did what she did. So we could go on free.” “No.” Mitch’s soft, calming (sometimes frightening when he’s angered), all-knowing voice finally made itself presentable, although it was still a bit quirky and hard to read- staggering in some places. “I’m staying here.” “Are you crazy?!” Adriade stood up like lightning, his icy glare sending chills down Lucy’s spine. “What for?!” “I couldn’t leave her here alone, even if I tried.” He turned his head, back still facing the group, to Mary. “Forgive me, Miss… I cannot leave with you as I have promised.” He looked back down towards Ayumi, whose rosy cheeks were still fading with each second. “I cannot leave a little girl here by herself- not when she’s so afraid of monsters.” As a group, they decided that they would wait for the little one to wake up from her death, laying her down on the bed that Mary had been sleeping in only that morning, locked away in her bedroom- NOT a tower, mind you. When crescent blue eyes slowly opened, they were instantly filled with tears of fear. She had weeped something awful about being left there alone, but made it clear that she would make the same choice again if given the chance. Mitch had smiled and shared with her that he would forever stay by her side until the day that the twisting old castle was no more. That day would be their last. As the group of 5 walked down the dissipated stone path that lead to the freedom they had wished to achieve for months, Ayumi watched them, slowly smiling harmoniously as she delicately waved her free hand. The other one was grasping tightly onto Mitch’s as he exchanged goodbye’s as well, getting tighter as the figures took one last look back before walking on the track that would lead them home. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And once again, YES. You are to make assumptions about things that have happened and what the story is about. No, you’re not supposed to entirely get it.

I just recently realized that I would probably find it heart-melting if a guy was flabbergasted by my writing. Writing is my heart and if he was to find my writing beautiful... well... >///< I'd like somebody to bounce ideas off of. I'd like somebody who gives me feedback on what I write. They can't just love every single piece because they think that I'm that great. That's not love. It's fandom. I want somebody who will love every work I write because I wrote it but will still give me a heads up if they see something that will make it better and let me do the same for them. I've realized I've never shared a single story I wrote to my boyfriend in the year and a half we've been dating. I... need to do that. It's a really REALLY big part of me. He's always showing me his collections of things and his models he paints and what he's unlocked in video games. It's not fair to either of us that I don't uncover that hobby to him (he knows I write but that's about it XD).

LMAO I'm actually REALLY HAPPY to see somebody obsessing over Ayumi talking about how cute and wonderful she is as opposed to Ran or Ai, just because she doesn't get enough attention.

There was this one fanfic I absolutely loved... I don't remember the name of it or the author- but it was essentially saying DC was all a big mind cluster Conan made up in his head. Conan and Shinichi are two different people, Conan was in love with ran who loved Shinichi so he went nuts and everybody- Ayumi, Genta, Mitsuhiko, Agasa, his parents, Haibara- are playing along PRETENDING he and Shinichi are the same person. It's.... awesome.

Pink!

V.B Rose- AgehaxArisaka ATLA- KataraxAang, TophxSokka Sonic X- AmyxSonic, TailsxCream, ShadowxRouge, PPGZ- PPGxRRB TMOHS- KyonxHaruhi, ItsuckixMikuru Negima!- AsunaxNegi OHSHC- HaruhixTamaki, RengexKyoya Pucca- PuccaxGaru, ChingxAbyo Moonphase- KoheixHazuki Digimon- Not sure is KarixT.K or DavisxKari, GatomonxPatamon Inuyasha- KagomexInuyasha, SangoxMiroku DC/MK- AyumixConan, AixMitsuhiko, KaitoxAoko Fairy Tail- NatsuxLucy, GrayxJuvia, ErzaxJellal

I like guys who are sweet and gentle and well-manured... I especially love it if they always surprise me whether it be with a kiss I didn't expect to get or him offering his hand to me without warning... But the one thing they NEED to be is smart. I can NOT stand an idiot as a friend let ALONE a romantic interest. ... Man I am lucky. x3 As for appearances I suppose I prefer the princely hairstyle like Prince Charming from all the fairy tails.... ^///^

.... Conan screams practically every time.

Although both character's personalities are overused... I prefer the quiet girl who reads books all the time over the Unicorn who's annoyingly "perfect". XD

His sentence was in response to what you said about Ran, though. He'd probably want to go back and fix it then if THAT were that case. xD

An actress or teacher sure. Fighter... to a certain extent. But it would kind of merge with teacher. The most I could see out of her with fighting is teaching karate. But any of the rest of that? It's just not Ran. 1. Business... woman? When did-? Huh? I'm just curious as to what gave you that idea for her? I'm actually genuinely kind of wondering what made you say that? XD 2. Pro poker? I don't know about that. She has the luck for it but she's too classy for that. She hates when her Dad gambles as it is. Why would she choose it as her job? 3. When the HECK did RAN ever want to solve a CASE? (And no. Trying to figure out Shinichi's secret doesn't count. That's something she would want to figure out because it hits close to home.) Not to mention the girl still screams at dead bodies. There's no way in heck she can walk onto a crime scene without ripping apart everybody's eardrums. 4. Soccer coach? Why? Because Shinichi's into soccer? Ummm.... I don't think she's really... interested in that. 5. *Points at #3* 6. Ehhh... she hasn't really expressed a need to be involved in anything like that. Sh'es too "innocent" for that. 7 & 8. *Points at #6* 9.

I liked the music this time around. It was actually kinda well done. The animation... Well I always hate it that they use clips from the episode. But the stars was cute and Conan hanging off of the moon was ADORABLE! x3 I would like the ending to be FULL, though... for there to be no clips from the episode and for it to just be a full-blown ENDING!!!

Dear anonymous, Just got home from a birthday part for my BF at his house. There was a... and no I'm not exaggerating, creepy guy in the bushes watching us and crouching down. (One of my BF's friends even walked right up to the first fence, this guy was hiding in the bushes right outside of the second fence, with a freaking BRANCH in his hand, looking for him!) It was to the point where somebody got a gun and a flashlight and went out there and went to the look for the guy. By then he had realized that we saw him and ran off and hid somewhere. Besides that my night was cool, easy, and fun. Sincerely, Yes. I had fun. But i wish you had been there. I was looking forward to seeing you! D:<

Then perhaps Ran and Shinichi will develop that same trait? O_o Maybe they'll be just as bad.

Really? Because after living with it for 10 years or more Shinichi still hasn't added it to HIS dictionary! XD (Granted that's his friend and not his mother but I suppose that wouldn't make it that much of a difference. In fact, it would probably make it scarier for him. Friends can hit friends and get away with it. Parents can't hit children and not care if the bruises show.) Why would they be? Yukiko, in her own way, is a helicopter mom. Literally speaking she isn't, but I think it's pretty Helicopter-Mom like to follow your son around in disguises and buy a house across the street to spy on him (SUPPOSEDLY to get more pictures of little Shinichi. ) even if he is being followed by an organization. Most mothers would probably just buy and house close and go to visit every day. Yeah... I agree on that. Heaven knows she isn't strong enough for a job like that. At least not yet. I mean, half of the time she'll probably either have to throw an innocent man in jail or a guilty man free depending on which job she takes. Most people couldn't handle that. I know I couldn't. I... doubt she knows how to use emotions against anyone but people she knows. She's not Haibara. She's not... devious and cynical enough for that. xD She may know how to provoke those close to her but that's because they're close. LOL

God let's hope she does become a lawyer. I personally think she'll be a Helicopter Mom from h#((. XD LMAO (She'll probably have to be if they end up being Shinichi's kids. Those little suckers won't have the term "sit still" in their dictionary.)