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anniemay

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  1. Be so imposable that's what.

  2. Yes please Rin-sama!

  3. Why must you be like like that Kid?

  4. I do my best, but all my life I have had bad grammar and spelling.

  5. Only a human would try to act like they can't die and you keep saying you can't die.

  6. I'm still fixing the first on Rin-chan but I almost done.

  7. Yeah you can't eat everything and

    YOU ARE HUMAN!!!

  8. Yeah round two well go better.

  9. And Kid

    yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  10. Okay lets retreat...for now.

  11. Maybe...so what happens to the plan?

  12. What happen to Cindy?

  13. I'm with Rin-chan, you might be a phantom theft but they are human as well.

  14. opps I ment Rin-chan.

  15. The plan sounds good, but I think the long range should come first Cindy.

  16. Lets see we'll some ammo for the guns, a sharper for the knives and a fridge for the yogurt. Did I leave anything out?

  17. Oh no not the yogurt!!

    Need any help?

  18. Oh and why do you wish harm to Kid?

  19. Okay I'll go through it again when I'm done fixing Kid Kloak.

  20. Thank goodness I think I'm finely getting the of it. What you doing?

  21. Rin-chan I made changes to the story.

    Please see if I did it right.

  22. Thank you for the help Rin-Chan, don't know what I would do without you!
  23. May 14,1991 10:50 P.M (heist) unknown target "Hey you stop!" yelled a policeman as he chased me down a long hallway. I turned around and stuck out my tongue. "Why you little!" the policeman growled and then tried to speed up. "Don't let Kloak get to you!" yelled a older graying haired man next to him. Soon I hit a dead end in a large nearly pitch black room. Seconds later the police along with the light came in. "So Kloak what are you going to do now?" the man huffed as he wiped his wrinkled forehead. As he talked the half dozen other police surrounded me. "Lets see... fly I guess," I replied smartly. "Fly?!" the man gasped. "Yup!" I chuckled slyly as I jumped above the circle of police. The police charged at me trying to stop me from getting away. Instead the police missed me and ran in to each other falling to the ground in a huge tangled blue and yellow mass. I landed on top of the pile of police ran toward the nearby window. "See you later Inspector!" I chuckled as I reached the window. As I finished talking I jumped backwards out the window. "Kloak!" the Inspector yelled as he ran to the window. Then he looked up to see me holding on to a helicopter with one of my many scarfs. "Darn it not again," the Inspector growled as he throw his dusty-gray hat on the ground. That night it only took a half hour for me to complete the heist. It would normally take more then a hour, because the Inspector doesn't give up so easy and he always brings an army. May 15 7:45 A.M (home) "Last night around 10:40 P.M Kid Kloak stole the..." a news-reporter on T.V reported and I watched with huge smirk. "That Inspector will never catch this Kloak! No matter what he does," I chuckled to myself. I put on my glasses and fixed my untidy brown hair. "Tomi!" shouted a young girl's voice coming up the stairs as I put the comb down. "Yeah Misaki!" I yelled and turned around to see a brown-haired girl standing in my doorway "We're going to be late if we don't go now!" She yelled once again. "Wha..it's that late already!" I gasped and turned the T.V off. I ran pass her and down the stairs to get my bag and shoes. Seconds later the two of us ran out of the house and down the street. "Why were you watching the news anyway?" She asked as we ran down the street. "I wanted to watch the weather but that was on instead," I told her. "Yeah right! I've seen you Watching Kloak before, so don't lie!" She shouted and stood in front of me and glared. I gulped trying not to look at her, but it was hard not to see her angry brown eyes staring at me. "I'm not lying! I really was looking for the weather," I insisted. She stomped off and I ran after her. 8:00 A.M (school) Lucky for us that we made it on time, that is after trying to get her to listen to me. I had to chase her half-way to school until she stopped in front of a old abandoned building, that once sold fish. I yawned as I sat down and laid my head on my desk. "You should go to bed earlier if you're always getting up sleepy," Misaki told me for the tenth time. "I do go to bed on time even ask my mom," I growled in between yawns. "Hi Akira," Misaki greeted a passing black haired girl with pigtails. "Oh hi Misaki, hi Tomi," Akira replied as she sat down in desk next to a tall but skinny boy. "Hi Akira," I said sleepily as I sat up and yawned again. "You two heard about the Kloak's heist last night?" Akira asked us. "Yeah! It's hard not to with Tomi watching the news every time he steals," Misaki huffed. "I so don't," I growled as I rolled my eyes and put my head down. That's the first part! please tell me want you think and if I have any errors. Sorry for it being short, I promise to make the next part longer.
  24. Welcome Prince! Have fun on the site! Try getting past that shyness so you can meet more people!
  25. so cool! It's full of sorrow and so tense. One question though why did you turn Kid-san in to a killer?
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