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Have you noticed the similaraties between Magic Kaito and Detective Conan? 1. Ginzo Nakamori and Kogoro Mouri: • They both looked alike (beside the hairstyles [and their moustache style]). • They both have somewhat similar second name 'Nakamori', 'Mouri'. • And they both have daughters that looked identical to each (except the hairstyles). • Both had someway related to the police: Kogoro use to be a police officer - Ginzo is an inspector. 2. The Pairings: • Akako Koizumi [cool type (Megumi Hayashibara)]-> Kaito [protagonist (Kappei Yamaguchi)]-> LOVE <-Aoko [similar look to Ran]<-Saguru [Looks a bit similar to *below*] • Shiho Miyano [cool type (cast: Megumi Hayashibara)]-> Shinichi [protagonist (Kappei Yamaguchi)]-> LOVE <-Ran [similar look to Aoko]<-(?) Dr. Araide [Looks a bit smilar to *above*]/ Eisuke Hondou 3. Akako Koizumi and Shiho Miyano: • Both mature (Akako [not really]) and cool types... • And both of them are somewhat... EVIL...! Shiho: Ex member of the Black Organization - Akako: Witch. • Both of them had someway to do with poisons... Shiho: APTX4869 - Akako: Liquids and witch's ingridients. • Share the same seiyu (Megumi Hayashibara). • Both had no parents... I don't know about Akako, really... but they did not show she had any... • Akako had feelings for the protagonist (Magic Kaito), Kaito Kuroba... while Shiho had feelings for the protagonist (Detective Conan), Shinichi Kudo. And both protagonists (Shinichi and Kaito) share the same seiyu as well (Kappei Yamaguchi). • Both are loyal to the protagonists (of each manga). • I don't know how to say it, but... Shiho and Agasa... Akako and the evil butler... someway similar... 4. Ran Mouri and Aoko Nakamori: • They looked identical, except for the hairstyles. • They both know fighting skills: Ran with her Karate, Akako with... mops and fish (fish only to Kaito). • Both scared of ghosts... (Really? Kaoko...uhm! I mean Aoko...) • Their father had someway to do with the poice... Kogoro Mouri: Ex police officer. Ginzo Nakamori: Inspector. • Both their fathers looked somehow similar (look above), identical to be more precise. • Both Ran and Aoko have love interest with the protgonist: Ran -> Shinichi. - Aoko -> Kaito. Whom again share the same seiyu: Kappei Yamaguchi. 5. Shinichi Kudo and Kaito Kuroba: • Both are protagonist... • Both looked so identical, except for the hairstyles. • Share the same seiyu: Kappei Yamaguchi. • Both had old man as their partners (or rather assistance) which in some kind of way are similar: Shinichi Kudo - Hiroshi Agasa. Kaito Kuroba - Konosuke Jii. • Both have love interests with their childhood friends (look above)... ahh, okay, okay! Shinichi Kudo - Ran Mouri. Kaito Kuroba - Aoko Nakamori. • Both their fathers are famous: Yusaku Kudo as a famous mysery novelist, while Toichi Kuroba is a famous gentlemen thief (or rather, a famous magician). • Both Shinichi and Kaito are similar to their father: Toichi used to be a unbeatable oppenent for Yusaku... and now for the second generation: Kaito is an unbeatable oppenent for Shinichi... (I wrote it rather lame there...) • Both are rather popular in their school: Kaito with his magic, and Shinichi as a famous high school detective. • Both had an 'organization' to deal with: Kaito and Snake... Shinichi and the Black Organization. • Both have secret indentities. Shinichi Kudo -> (secret [same person]) Conan Edogawa. Kaito Kuroba -> (secret [same person]) Kaitou Kid. • Both are targeted. • Both are famous. • Both are clever... and both of them are very... sly...! • Both are rather popular with girls. • Each have a well known unskilled-something: Shinichi - deaf tone... Kaito - very sucks at skating. Haha, I hope you all enjoyed reading this 'useless' list...!

By the way, that doushinji you mentioned in the podcast, I’m really so curious, what IS IT!? Can you show it to us (or rather share it with us), please~ ? P.S. And thank you very much for mentioning and remembering my name... I was surprised for a second there… thank you CarpetCrawler-san! I owe you one! …THANKS AGAIN!

Anyway, you guys were totally awesome! I like the way how you folks talked about Detective Conan, and how the first time you’ve seen the series, how you got hooked into the show, and how you’ve become crazy fans ! Really, it was just so cool! And Carpet-san, is your brother a fan of Detective Conan? I guess the answer would be ‘no’, hehehe, my sixth sense… And… umm… I really liked the MegureXAgasa pairings (Heck no!)… I would like to uhm… suggest some topic ideas if you don’t mind. It is just some suggestions; I wouldn’t be upset or anything if it weren’t taken. What about discussing some unsolved mystery in Detective Conan ? Like: • Shuuichi Akai’s Death Theory: Is Akai-san really dead? If he was still alive how’d he got away from the incident? And if he is really dead, then who is the Scar Akai? • Okiya Subaru: Do you really think that Okiya Subaru is a member of the Black Organization? And some people think that he is actually Akai in disguise… • The Secret behind Vermouth’s Youth: What’s the secret behind Vermouth’s youth? Masaka… APTX4869!?? • The connection between Gin and Sherry: What’s the connection between Sherry and Gin? Could it be… could it be… her real father?! • The connection between Haibara and Akai Shuuichi: Nah… I don’t know… Or talk about members in DCW and DCTP... I’m sure that will get everyone (here) hooked . Haha! Or talk about Gosho’s life and history, how he became an artist and all that? Some of Detective Conan fan I know, they don’t even know DC author’s name is! They just watch and read having no idea who made it! Or… umm… your favourite characters in Detective Conan… And why you like them and stuff… And umm… talk about your (CarpetCrawler, Southpaw, Skye-chan, etc.) hobbies, habits, what do you do in free times, your talents, your careers, etc. Hah~ I’ll suggest more ideas later when I have some lamp-pops in my head~ Jaa naa!

Comment for the second episode of DCW Podcast: I just listened to DCW Podcast ep 02. And it was… AWESOME! But before that, I would like to point out something… from episode 1 of the podcast; I actually mistook Southpaw for CarperCrawler…! …Uhm! I mean I mistook Skye-chan for Southpaw! Oh my god, I’m so sorry! I was going to edit my feedback up there, but it’s too late since I think you’ve already read it. I really thought that Southpaw was Skye-chan, because I ridiculously thought that the moderators would speak the most… and I wasn’t really paying attention at the first bit (when you were introducing yourselves), oh my goodness… I’m so ridiculous… Ehhh *sigh*¬ I’m so sorry Southpaw-chan and Skye-chan (I know that you wouldn’t have minded anyway)… so sorry, I beg you the humblest apology… Forgive me…! I didn’t mean to be rude… please forgive me…! *sob**sob*

Ehehehe , sorry! Oh, and I wasn’t serious too when I ‘yelled’ at you~ It was just a little joke…! I knew that you weren’t serious, I only said that to… uhm! Yeah, I just like playing around sometimes¬ Ohohohohoho !

Uhm! Hello there¬ sorry for my late reply. The connection had been cut off again (Internet-Wire Thieves again!). And my PC charger had been broken, so I’m using my mom’s PC, and I’m not very comfortable here. Anyway… Bye-bye ! Wait, I’m just kidding! Okay let’s begin with reviewing your awesome story : Wow, this story is amazing; I’ve got to admit that this is much better than your other one! And thank goodness that you separate the chapters. Like your other fan-fic I was like… I couldn’t finish the entire story in one day (because I’m busy somehow), so I decided I’ll read it bit by bit. And then when I was about to continue the story the other day, I was like… “Where on earth am I up to now!” and so… I don’t know and then I discontinued reading it… sorry! I’m glad you divide this in chapters. Wow! Your writing skills are awesome; I wish I could write like you ! I’ve read 3 chapters so far, and I decided to give each chapter its review, so I wouldn’t spoil anything for the readers. Okay, it was very amusing how you made Agasa’s house a resting place for the FBI, haha! Hattori is there too? Nice! In this fan-fic I think you’ve made Haibara-san a bit out of character here, like… uhm! Its dramatic how’ve you made Haibara there… but, I think somehow… it’s unusual for her to be feeling sad like that (I don’t know how to express it by words XD)... and then when Akai-san (wait, is he still alive?) approached her and whispered to her, “You love him,” I think that’s when Akai is totally out of his character (right, Shuuichi Akai (from DCW)?)! I think it’d be better if you made Jodie take that role. And with Shiho’s character, I think she would more likely deny the fact that she likes Kudo. Like this (in my humble opinion): “You love him,” whispered a voice. Ai spun around after pulling on her mask. “Jodie-sensei...!” she muttered, “I- It’s nothing like that…!” she said as she turned her blushing face aside. Jodie smiled at the little girl… her and her love for ‘cool guy’… it’s so romantic… just like in the movies! (LOL! Please don’t take this part seriously… I was half-kidding !) And about Akai-san, it’d be more dramatic if you made Haibara still hated him… like… she couldn’t forgive Akai for using her sister, Akemi Miyano to get the information on the syndicate by pretending to be her boyfriend, and then leading her to her own death. Haibara must ignore eye contact with him, and hate him that she doesn’t even want to be in the same room with the person who tricked her beloved sister! Hahaha, I would have preferred it that way though, yohohoho! And wait, Shuuichi preparing breakfast??!! Mmm…I think you’ve made a mistake here: Hattori poked Shinichi in the ribs and whispered, “Kudo-kun, you’ve got company.” Heiji doesn’t use name suffixes with Shinichi. He calls him just by ‘Kudo’. It made me laugh once how Heiji referred to Haibara as ‘Ano chichai onee-chan (that little lady)’, Ahahaha! It was so funny! Oh, and add ‘Oi’ before ‘Kudo’… no reason… Ohohoho ! Okay… now for the next chapter !

Okay, I read it and PHEW! As Tacticwolf-chan said, you didn’t organize the thing when the characters saying their lines, you don’t put them between “”. So it’s somehow kind of annoying … but I can understand which characters are talking. So I had no problem with that. And the characters are someway out of their personality. It’s hard to explain but… just a piece of advice, when you want to write, you have to put your soul inside their skin and suggest what the characters would do in the following situation . For example, Sonoko… when Ran and Shinichi met and were acting kind of lovy-dovy stuff … Sonoko wouldn’t have stayed silent, she would have teased them. And Shinichi wouldn’t have invited Ran in front of Sonoko. I think he would have at least whispered to her instead of saying it out loud. Uhm! I have a lot to say but… I’m too lazy to list it all down! But actually, despite the plot your English is quite amazing (for having English as the second language )! There are some grammatical errors, but its okay since I screw up too in my Fan-Fic sometimes I think you had rush in writing this Fan-Fic. For your readers to enjoy your story, you must take your time and do it smoothly without hurry . And then when you finish writing your story, reread it again and examine every single word and think how your readers would feel and think when they read it themselves (would they enjoy it this way? Would they find this interesting? Will they get hooked? Etc.). I like some of your way of writing, and hahaha, the code really excited me for a second there! Cool! And nice thinking! I hope my review wasn’t too much. But I like you compare to other Fan-Fiction-Authors… since most of them mostly write nasty and dirty stuffs . When you write another Fan-Fic, I will be delighted to read them! So I can tell you what I think again ! Good luck ! And please do not consider me rude or anything… I’m just being honest here 

I'll post my favorite Detective Conan pictures here to share it with you. And some funny fan-doushinji I would like to share it with you folks! They are not mine, just for you to be aware of. Enjoy (sorry for my unusual very short income ) I'll update this as soon as possible...

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Ah, I just listened to the DCW Podcast episode... in the restroom (Ok, just kidding). And it was awesome ! I was totally amazed to hear Southpaw-chan and Skey-chan's voice ! I was like , "So that's her and her voice!" Southpaw: Wow, Southpaw-chan! You speak so smooth and fast! And your voice is like... so feminine and ladylike! I love it! You were so COOL! Skye-chan: Well, you didn't speak that much... but I like your ACCENT! And nice to meet ya! CarpetCrawler: I heard your voice before (in the ep 0)... so I couldn't say I was surprised for the second time! You stutter a lot... and you says 'Ummm' pretty much. But hey, you speak pretty good! And... I have a piece of advice to you say Carpet-san... Please be more gentle with the ladies ! Don't say stuff like, 'bums, jerks, meany, etc.' to them! It's not popular to say those to girls...! I mean I'm not trying to be rude here... When Skye-chan interrupted you one time. You told her that she is mean and rude. She said sorry , but you just ignored her ! Anyway, thank you for all of the effort ! I really enjoyed listening to the podcast! Thank you! [sorry, I can't post anymore images {Onion emoticons}]! My first impression when I heard your voice was, "Wow, this was the guy who answers my questions in Facebook. Cool!"

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74... since only two playing, lady vs gentleman... I doubt it'll make any difference anyway... so I'm going to bed... yeah, I KNOW... no Onion-tou for now... I'm very tired...

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