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LOL! A back up? Hahaha, that's a good one! I understand your feelings my friend , yeah, since it's obvious that Shinichi will end up with Ran in the end, ShinichixShiho will only come true when Ran dies (LOL!). And I really think that Saguru Hakuba will make a good pair with Shiho~ they resemble each other's personality in some way and the other~ I think Gosho had already had this in mind, since he didn't pair up Hakuba with anyone, I guess he attend to pair him up with Shiho for later... it'll be depressing if Shiho didn't end up with nobody

Wow, that's a good one! Yohohohohoh , sorry that I stole you ideas ~ evil laugh , Jyahahahaahaah!

Ayumi, the most annoying girl I see in Detective Conan , and Genta , the most greediest person in Detective Conan, Ayumi and Genta will make the worst best couple ever! LOL !

LOL! :razz:

Here, there's these possibilities: 1. Conan tells Haibara the situation, and she will send an antidote by post. 2. Conan makes a fake passport 3. Haibara hears the situation, takes the antidote (she became Miyano Shiho XD) and went to fix the problem (she makes a fake passport ) 4. Conan met an FBI agent by coincidence, and they helped him~ Hahahaha, well, I think the first one is close to the guess!

Listverse... 10 top list! LOL :grin: ! Well done!

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I totally agree! Japanese voice casting is 100 times better than English one! And I don't really like the Funimation how they changed the characters' names... which wasn't even necessary

Hahahaha! Ah, you are very welcome! I would eagerly read them and gladly give you my opinions ~ but, just to remind you something, I'm not always available, I'm quite of a busy girl you see. Even though I'm always at home, I've got loads to do~ So, if you did send me a message and I didn't response instantly, you would have already know why, okay? Yeah, every kids has their bratty times... but Ran in this FanFic, is too bratty~ I like Ran more than Ayumi, as I already explained why in 'Characters That Get On Your Nerves' topic, {1. Ayumi . she likes Conan, and want him to be all hers, yet she's so bossy to him, and when Conan does something she doesn't like, she will tell him of or shout at him! And, in the movie 5, when she noticed Conan liked Ran, she told Ran, "tell him that you liked a boy called Shinichi!" Those words makes me want to throw the computer out of the window! What's wrong if Conan likes Ran? Conan doesn't have any interest in her, so just leave him be! And sometimes, her sense of justice annoys me too !} By the way, I would like to see Shiho and Hakuba FanFic written by you. If you don't mind, could you make a HakubaxShiho FanFic? I understand if you are not willing, because you are ShinichixShiho fan . But, I would really love to see you how you put them together! With that, maybe I could get some ideas for my next FanFic~ Yohohohoho

Wow amazing! You write well and I liked how Shiho and Shinichi met for he first time! I can see that you didn't characterize the characters the way they are . Shinichi... how can I say... he is a bit childish (although he is a child!), and he wouldn't have stand up to a girl, when someone is offering her help~ (in my humble opinion) I guess, he would have just stand there and watch, and would bravely stood for her when The Man in Black harm her or bully her or something ! And the part when they returns home, after Ran already disappeard to her home, and Shiho and Shinichi remaining, I find it strange, why would Shinichi just take her to his house when he just met her for the first time? Wouldn't he tell her something like, "by the way, it's getting dark now, would you mind telling me where you live? I could walk you home if you want..." Please, I only think he would have said that in his real character, don't take me seriously ! Hahahaha! The way you potrayed Ran in this FanFic almost made me laugh! I would say she's bratty, spoiled, and envious... her character here really blew me off! Especially when she said, "he's MINE!"... my fists were flinching Shiho... how should I put it... like, I don't think she would be so blunt and rude, as to spout of 'Jealous', to Ran as to hurt her feelings. I think Shiho would just ignore Ran, and maybe smile slightly I find it awkward for Shiho letting Shinichi carry her on his back... ah, wait! Since they are children anyway... I guess it's quite natural! And about the Man in Black... I don't think they would carelessly aim a gun at civilllians like that, at least when they meant to really kill them. And Yusaku wouldn't have just stayed still and let things run away like that... he would have act accordingly and maybe call the police But actually, I really like the way you write! And how Shiho was sent to America to study, that's very realistic! I'm looking forward for the next update! And please update as soon as possible! Thank you! I had enjoyed this as much! Next time! Make the story as dramatic, and romantic as much as possible! Good luck, TacticWolf-chan~ My best regards: Kaoko Arai~

Tacticwolf: I edited the part you find it awkward, please review it and tell me what's else that you think is strange~

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Yo Tacticwolf! Thanks for the review! Umm... yes, now that I think about it again, Shiho's character really did come of the hook at the end ... I'm really sorry that the story dissapointed you as Shiho x Shinichi fan. Well, since you tire yourself and bother yourself as to bring yourself to say what was in your mind... I guess I'll re-edit this chapter... Yeah, I really think that this chapter, some of it, is kind of fishy... Umm, yes I'll think about it. Uh, did you say that you don't mind if I gave Shiho a lover? Oh, I already thought about that, and do you want to guess who it will be? Do you want to read that for the next FanFic I will make? To tell you one thing, I may re-edit this chapter if I find other's comment think I should. Second, I'll continue the storyline with different title, and it'll be about Shiho's love life. How is it? Which one would you prefer? Of course, I'll take other's opinion too , so, what do you think? I really consider your feelings, and it sadden me to find my readers didn't like something in the story Thank you very much for the comment! I'll try my best to fix things up !

N/A: Hello everyone! Sorry, I did some mistake I realised in chapter 4, and I corrected it, if you already read it before, then it's up to you if you want to read it again and see what changed~ The After Battle; Chapter 4 Then next day, Shiho was released from the hospital… although now that Agasa's house is not available… where is she going to stay? "Is it really ok? For me to…" Shiho asked Shinichi. As he was pushing the wheelchair she was sitting on. "It's alright! It's alright! You don't have to worry about it!" He said with a grin. As in no time, they already had reached the front gate of Kudo's house. Shinichi gently opened the front gate, and drove Shiho's wheelchair to the house's front door, he then opened it and went inside. Inside was pitched dark, they barely could see anything. "Hey, could you t least turn on the light?" said Shiho to Shinichi; she was annoyed at his weird behaviour. He ignored her and kept pushing the wheelchair. "Kudo-kun?" Shinichi suddenly stopped at the living room. "Eh?" Shiho was confused. She couldn't see anything, because it was dim black. As someone flicked the switch and the room suddenly went bright! She was overcome with the light she covered her eyes with her arm. "CONGRTULATIONS ON YOUR RECOVERY!" They all said it together! In the living room there were 3 persons, it was pro. Agasa and Shinichi's parents, Yusaku and Yukiko Kudo… they were standing beside a large hilarious table; on the table there was a beautiful chocolate cake, a large bowl full of fruits, and a soda with 5 cups… and some other treats~ Shiho was stunned; she was speechless, loss for words… Shinichi pushed the wheelchair towards the table. "We all planned this when you were in the hospital," Shinichi explained to her. "Sorry, Ai-kun." Said Agasa, "I planned to visit you, but there were just so many things that I need to attend, I couldn't find the time to go to the hospital…" "Na, Shiho-chan~ are you feeling better now?" said Yukiko beaming at her. "E-ehh…" nodded Shiho uneasily. "Don't be shy Haibara!" said Shinichi facing her, "just feel like you are at home!" Shiho turn up to him and then looked away quickly, not knowing what to say. "Why don't you show her 'that thing' first? And tell her about what were you discussing about the other day…" said Yusaku coolly to Shinichi, "maybe then, she will feel more relaxed…" "Yes, Shin-chan!" agreedYukiko excitedly. "Mah, I guess we will have to save up the party for later…" said Shinichi with a sigh. Shiho had no idea what were they talking about; she just sat on the wheelchair, watching them silently, confused and puzzled. Shinichi took out a black cloth from his jeans' pocket, and went towards Shiho. "Well, if you'll excuse me, Haibara. I'll be covering your eyes with this cloth." "What are you planning?" she whispered to him. "Ah, hahaha! Don't worry, we'll let you know in a minute," he said to her comfortingly, and then covers her eyes with the blindfold gently. "I'm not good in this kind of things, so I'll be staying here…" said Yusaku apologizingly. "Then me too…" said Agasa nervously, "it's not something I should be interrupting…" "Sa! Shin-chan, let's go!" "Ah…!" So Shinichi and his mother carried Shiho upstairs, to the second floor. They went through the corridors, and then stopped by a certain door. Shinichi opened the door silently, carefully, preventing from making a sound. After Shinichi opened the door, Yukiko drove the wheelchair inside the room. Yukiko then, untied the cloth that was covering Shiho's eyes, and then she and Shinichi yelled together, "SURPRISE!" Shiho opened her eyes… she gasped in amazement as she saw a large room with a beautiful blue vivid bed at the centre! A big window with creamy coloured curtains, in front of the window, there was a desk and a chair… the carpet were dark blue… anyway, the room was so beautiful! Like a room in the clouds! "From today on, this room is all yours!" said Shinichi with a smile. Shiho turned to him speechlessly. Surely, Shinichi did tell her that she was allowed to stay at his place; she thought that it was only 'temporally'… she had never imagined that they'll prepare her a luxurious room with beautiful furniture. "Are you sure I can you this room?" she turned to Shinichi and his mother. "Why, of course!" said Yukiko, "to put it bluntly, we would like to have you into the family…" "Eh…?" "In other words, Shiho-chan… we want to adopt you…" said Yukiko seriously, but still with a gentle smile, "me and Yusaku had been discussing it in the last few days, and since you don't have a home, why don't just stay with us? I and Yusaku will be your parent from now on, and you will be happy here with us… and we will love you and treat you like our daughter!" Shiho was lost for words. Shinichi knew she was shocked and stunned, he said, "don't worry Haibara, it's only up to you whether you accept it or not. We only wanted you to have a home and be happy with us, of course, no one in this world can replace your mother or father… and-" "No… I…" begin Shiho, she turned her face aside over her shoulder, and looked down, escaping Yukiko and Shinichi's eyes, "I… I…" she muttered, tears begin coming out from her eyes… Shiho at a young year of age had always been alone. She lives at the apartment all by herself, with someone from the Black Organization keeping an eye on her at the next door. And sometimes her sister, Akemi will come sometimes for a visit. She would usually stood by the school gate and watch children greeting their parents happily. Shiho was always wondering what it is like to have a family… she only has a sister, which she barely sees… she spent most of her life with the Black Organization, who was nothing like a family to her… "I… thank you… thank you very much…" she whispered it between her sobs. She wiped the tears with her hands, "sorry… I couldn't help it… I just found myself in tears…" Yukiko beamed at her, as she walked towards her, and gently, embraced her, "its okay…" she said, "don't feel uncomfortable, now… we are family, aren't we?" Yukiko comforted her and then stood up. She said, "Don't hesitate to call me 'Kaa-san' from now on " "You can call me 'tou-san'," said a voice approaching the door, and Yusaku stepped inside the room, followed by Professor Agasa, "he-he-he, you can call me gramps…! Although that I'm not that old, though!" "Everyone…" begin Shiho, "thank you!" "He-he-he, no need to mention," Said Yukiko with a grin, "Nyaa~ I've always dreamed on having a daughter~ never thought of having it come true!" Soon, all of the family, including Shiho and Professor Agasa launched downstairs for the party. Everyone enjoyed it as much! Shinichi telling them the cases he had solved, Yukiko playing her tricks as an artist, Agasa explaining his new inventions… Shiho, who was sitting in the wheelchair, enjoyed the party as much as everyone! This was one of the best moments she had in her life! Shiho was looking at the full moon, with the stars glittering at the night beautiful sky. She was in the balcony of the second floor, viewing the beautiful sight of the night. She smiled, "Nee-chan… Kaa-san… Tou-san… if you were watching me from somewhere… as you can see, I'm very happy now… I had a place to go to after all… a place where someone except my existence… the syndicate had already been taken care of, and I'm… free now… even though that I'm living with Kudo and his parents as an adopted child, I would always keep remembering you… forever…" As she was about to say something, she saw figure of her beloved sister standing right before her eyes. She was smiling gently at Shiho. After Akemi, appeared another figure from behind, it was Shiho's mother, followed by her husband, Atsushi. "Nee-chan! Okaa-san… and… Tou-san…?" blurted out Shiho. She was stunned and couldn't bring herself to say anything. Her family right before her eyes, with faces that as bright as sunshine and a smile like angles… But the illusions suddenly seemed to fade one after another… with one of them smiling brightly to Shiho before disappearing. "… Ah wait!" but her shouts didn't reach them, since they all disappeared under the moonlight. "Yo, Haibara! What's up!" interrupted Shinichi. "Ku- Kudo-kun…!" "Viewing the night?" "E-ehh…" she nodded. "Beautiful, isn't it?" "Yes…" There was a sudden silence. They were both viewing the sky silently. Shiho coughed as a strong breeze of wind making itself past them, blowing itself gently. Shinichi went to her, and handed his hand on her forehead, "Ah-le-le! Your forehead is so warm; you yet haven't recovered from your fever. Are you sure that you should be staying out here?" "I'm fine," she snapped, removing Shinichi's hand aside. Fever? Maybe her sister and parents were just an illusion her mind had developed from the fever. After a few seconds, Shinichi's phone rung, as he then picked it up. "Moshimoshi? Ah, Megure-keibu…! A case? Yeah… okay… unh… the address? I'll be there soon! *click*" "Another case?" asked Shiho. "Ah… I'll tell you the result when I return! Okay, see you later!" "Good bye… and… er…" "What?" "I wanted to say… go- good luck, Shi- Shi- Shinichi-kun!" she turned her red face quickly, escaping his glance. Shinichi was stunned for a moment, but then he smiled and said, "Thanks Shiho! Have a good sleep!" With that, he waved at her and disappeared like a puff of smoke. Shiho smiled as he left. Shiho's daily life as a member of the Kudo family had barely just begun! To Be Continued In the Other Title Author's note: Hello everyone! Did you enjoy the story _? Hahaha ! Sorry that it came out a bit late (too late !), because I was very busy in the last few days. It was a bit hard, and I frequently meet some dead ends! Just to remind you something, here in this FanFic, Shiho and Shinichi did not end up together, but they did in some way or another Just to tell you something, my FanFic had just barely begun! And this was the first FanFic I ever made! Although that the 'After the Battle' is already finished, I'm still going to write more, and of course, continuing the 'After the Battle' storyline! But since I'm very busy right now, it'll be quite some time before I wrote another title~ Also, those who likes my FanFic, please tell me, what you like about it and tell me where did I go wrong, so I can learn from the mistakes and correct them. And please don't worry about my feeling~ and, also, please REVIEW! It'll encourage me to write even more! Thank you very much for reading my story My best regards; Kaoko Arai

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Woah! You think so too?! Me too! When I watch the drama, the part when Ran-san and Haibara-san met, my heart were pounding! I wished it would had been anime instead well, I hope they are going to animate it¬ Nah... I don't think that would ever happen Why don't any of you make a comic of it? Someone with great skills in drawing, hehehe... if I was an artist, I would have made a made-fan-manga of it, then share it with you guys¬