Kiel95

just so you know, i did find quite a few grammatical errors which bugged me... like when you were talking about their ages you said what should have been said is "She looked to be the same age as him." the way you phrased it was quite odd. anyways, this story is quite interesting, but i'm not sure if i'll continue... i've never had much interest in stories where people other than conan and ai have been shrunk... i don't like the idea of it... well, that about sums up what i had to say... and your signature kind of goes against how you said not to flame too hard since you're 14, and then your signature says to not treat you like a kid... well... most people flame others, whether you're a kid or not, age doesn't matter, the best you can hope for would be constructive criticism, so i suggest changing what you said in the beginning and say : "Please do not flame, but all CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is encouraged and helpful" You don't need to throw out your age, as it's also in you're signature anywyas, good luck with your story, hope it turns out for the best

heeey, well i read that it wasn't a conai... made me sad, but since it wasn't a shinran i'm ok aaaaanywaaaaays, even tho the words were mashed it was quite easy to read, and pleasant as well ^^ I really liked it! i didn't see too many errors (i would list them but they are so minor i forgot where they are) i definitely think this should go on fanfiction. You're work is quite amazing, and i like your descriptive detail. You're doing a great job! I can't wait to read more and i'm glad you broke ShinRan up even tho you are one and i actually don't mind it ending heishin, but personally... KaiShin is waaaaay better than HeiShin KYAAAAAA~ <3 (whoops... fangirl mode... sorry XD)

sadly that's true... but i usually stay on the stories section, so i usually see more AiCons than ShinRans... and besides... we have so many ppl on this forum, it really depends on how many are online... its really hard to estimate unless someone asked every single member (and somehow got a reply from the dormant members)

<3

yeah, i understand what you mean... i can no longer see a shinran ending, even if i know it'll happen, i just can't imagine it.. >///<

yaaaaay cuz this was epic, and you're a good writer and i'd love to read more <3

not bad ^^ wondering if this will turn into a longer story, or if this was where it ended.. i think it'd be cool to have a bit more going on afterwards... you could write your own ending for the syndicate for us all to read i bet tons of ppl would be happy to get the chance to see another alternate ending thought up by another fellow... err... dc fan XD anywyas, I'D LOVE TO READ MORE! so do think about it <3 and this was amazing

of course

<3 <3 <3

-shrug- i think it'd be a great idea... i mean, some people don't mind a certain set of different couple endings... so if he did different pairs, there's a good chance that many ppl would buy more than one ending which would make him a lot of money and a lot of happy fans

I wish... me and my sequel are having troubles, well... that's cuz i've decided to change it... and the fact that my mom has been forcing me to clean my room ^^' it's kind of a disaster... i'm working on it... and i may do a little bit of editing, but don't expect it to be perfect as once a story is written, i usually just edit while watching tv XD hahaha whoops but i'm going to do my best everyone! thanks for the encouragement!!! hopefully it'll be done by the end of spring break!

hahahaha, yep ^^

thats exactly what i've been saying since the beginning! if he'd just make multiple endings, he'd probably get a much larger revenue and a much more satisfied audience!

not just great, AMAZING

Thanks! <3

hmmm, quite likin that idea

hahaha XD you're doing what i did for sherlock's message or something like that XD i also posted a link to 4 points of the same star in that thread

hahaha thnx, thats just something i threw together on the fly, usually my tenses are off since i get tired of correcting again and again so i just make sure there aren't too many spelling errors and slap it up (ah but uh... it's not gonna end shinran, thatd be torture for me )

-shrug- i'm glad you like em but as you should realize, shinichi and shiho will probably never be together...(tho i hate to admit it) so i have to change personalities to be able to write a fanfic

well... actually umm... i sort of have the next part to this... but i don't know how i got to this strange happening... but i mean... i was bored and it somehow turned into this impossible sort of thing, so don't blame me if it turns weird... if you don't like it don't read it >w< i haven't really thought much on this story for a long while, but i guess i can add in some stuff now... i've gotten slightly better at writing, but the writing i'm going to post is older and i don't feel like editing as it takes too long with only one hand... so i'll post what i've already got soon...