Kiel95

lol, you both know i love you ^-^ anyways, thank you for the review Kaoko~chan! i love how you put in the cute lil pics.... ok sorry, not really bout the story... so let's get down to business... truth is, we can't fully grasp ai's personality since she doesn't SHOW her emotions... she never speaks her mind about some things... so i sort of had to guess, and sides, we don't know much about akai but that he says very little and is very smart and handy (with guns and weapons and such ) anyways, sorry for the little errors like the -kun added in when hattori was talking i'm human too (i think) i'm allowed to make mistakes (i hope) and i do make them (obviously) anyways, i needed akai for this because even tho he doesn't have completely major roles... i can't have ai hating him... besides, we don't even know what ai really thinks of shuu... they haven't met since shiho was an adult and her sister was still alive.... an yes, shuu is alive... i'm going with the idea that shuu was okiya, and scar shuu was bourbon... and bourbon has already been taken out... (just kinda skipped) or if you wish, you can believe that i wrote this from a viewpoint of before shuu supposedly died... but i wasn't i just forgot that most people wouldn't know my view on who was who and where i was coming from sorry bout this anyways, love ya both! *hugs* (P.S. about that longer chapter one... hehe, sometimes when i'm writing i don't stop and i don't feel like separating the 75 pages on word so i just post the whole thing in notepad and go, 'screw it, i'm through' anyways, i thought about it this time and cut it into smaller sections, much smaller than i'm used too, but i think that i cut them at pretty good places)

oi oi, don't be mean to my kaoko~chan! anyways, my turn for a review! ok so bout grammar and stuff, not meaning to be harsh, your tenses kept changing, one moment it was in the past, then the present then the past again... it was a bit confusing... anyways, it was def a good story! i luvs it so much! luckily i was able to choke back the tears... TT.TT or not... also, i think that this would have been a better story if shiho was the one to die off... even if i'm a shiho/ai fan, i really don't think that shinichi should be killed off... i mean, i think more emotions can be portrayed by shiho dying then by shinichi dying since he shows his emotions more than she does... she can act impassive about it and i just dont see her... well.... i just dont see her able to act completely heartbroken and torn up in front of others, and it doesn't really say that shinichi loves her... he never says it, even in the end... its more like a one-sided love story since we never found out whether he really likes her or not >.< it was still really really really good! i luvs you for the story! the hakubaxshiho fic should be done soon! just trying to fix it up since its so hard! i just can't grasp hakuba's personality well!!! anyways, keep writing and i'll keep reading! if you ever want me to edit your grammar and such (i may mess up on spelling, but that's cuz i'm not really going over every little itty bitty detail) but if you ever want it done, just send me the story and i'll fix it up, and possibly add in a few adjectives or something and send it back to you for review! anywas, loved it! thank you kaoko~chan *hugs*

i wanna say that's great but i think that after she fainted, conan tells her the truth, but ran also finds out that shinichi is now together with shiho and he loves her only like a sister or best friend now and cant be with ran anymore... thats more my ideal ending... lol

ah, and kaoko~chan, kaito was good at skiing, it was aoko who couldn't ski...

i go with shuu! BOOOOOxinfinity!

oh so true shuu, oh so true!

yep ^-^ thanks for the mention!!!

that a good thing or bad thing???

wow... i love chloe (no idea if she is still on) but she was awesome ^-^

woo ^-^

the part where they are sleeping in the same bed and with the detective boys and conan says "Haibara, there's something i want to ask you." ... ... ... "Is there something on my face?" "huh?" that reminds me... shouldn't that mean that she does like him? cuz that is what his mom was implying...

woo!

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i know, but i wanted to give gin i name and i thought of that name... i was just saying where i first heard the name i suck at coming up with names so i think back to random cases and choose a name that i've heard before ... hehe i cheat

thank you! i try my best, i hope you like the chapters to come!

thanks ^-^

not too much action going on... but anyways, do enjoy! i'm gonna like writing the next chapter ^-^ “See you in a year right?” asked Shinichi with a smile. Shiho hesitated to respond and said with a sad smile, “Yeah.” After her last goodbyes, she was placed in an ambulance and brought to the airport. When she boarded the plane, she looked out the window at the falling snow. Sighing deeply she whispered, “Goodbye Japan, and goodbye, Miyano Shiho.” ~Tacticalwolf~ A month after arriving in America, there was a problem. Her health slowly declined until her death. Apparently, she had received too much blood of the wrong caliber, and her body couldn’t handle it. Since the blood she received had not been acclimated to the APTX 4869 that had taken over her blood cells and filled her bloodstream, her body couldn’t take it. Her heart had been pumping the infected blood since it first received it. When too much clean blood entered her body, it offset the balance, making her condition worse and worse as the two types of bloods fought against each other. If she had received blood little by little, she would have lived, but the sudden large transfusion is what ultimately killed her. At least, this was what Shinichi and the professor were told. Her old class was told she had heart failure during one of the surgeries. 3 years later. ~Tacticalwolf~ By now, Shinichi was finally dating Ran. His brief moments of realization towards his true love, Miyano Shiho, never faded. He had told no one his true feelings, but even when standing at her grave, he couldn’t bring himself to say it. Also, he graduated college in two years and began to work for the Japanese police force. Miyano Shiho was no more, and in her place came Shizuma Keiko. Shiho, having let her strawberry blonde hair grow out, dyed it black. Nowadays she became a well-known actress. Not only was she the most popular and beautiful actress, but no one knew why she only chose bullying roles, or those of criminals. She was nice enough to be herself in so many movies and TV shows that it was ridiculous. Yet she always, always chose the part of a cold-blooded killer first, and she always got the part, playing it beautifully and with a killer’s aura. ~Tacticalwolf~ “Ok, that’s great,” smiled the director. “You can have the part.” Keiko smiled in thanks. Another girl came up to complain, her name, Leah Cornwall. “I’m better than she is! The movies she is in always need to fix her acting to make it seem more menacing! She only said the words correctly without acting for real!” Keiko looked at the girl and said with a smile, “I don’t mind acting. We can even have a competition if you so desire. Both of us can go at each other at the same time.” The girl let an evil grin slip through, “Can we fight for real as well?” The director tried to break it up when Keiko said with her still cheery smile, but a cold and heartless voice, “Of course.” A few staff members on set shivered, but Leah was not going to stand down, not now. The director sighed in defeat, and brought the two girls to the set to fight it out in front of everyone. “Ok you two, here’s the scenario for the two of you to use. For now you’ll be using your real parts in the movie. So Keiko is a traitor of a large organization, and Leah, you’re a member of the organization. You’ve come to kill her.” He pulled out two realistic looking dart guns and handed them to the two girls. “Good luck you two.” Keiko and Leah moved on set and both demeanors of the two girls changed. Leah brought the gun up to the unmoving Keiko. With a sneer she said, “Your time is finally over.” She pulled the trigger, but Keiko was no longer where her bullet was flying. Before Leah knew what was happening, Keiko had the gun to her head.~Tacticalwolf~ “You have a long way to go. I’m guessing you’re a lower member of the organization. I’m not even fully trained but I’m better than you. Any last words?” Leah gulped. “Bang,” said Keiko as she pulled the trigger. The director clamped. Leah grumbled, “Ok, I’ll settle for this part. I guess I don’t need the main role.” At that conclusion, the director called out, “Ok then! Everyone, pack your bags and be here on time next week. We’re going to Hawaii!” The whole staff cheered, and after a while they died down and dispersed in eager anticipation. Keiko tapped Leah’s shoulder. “Let’s go out to eat to celebrate.” “Sure,” Leah smiled, finally accepting Keiko. After they packed up they headed towards a new sushi bar. “So why did you want to be the main character who’s a traitor?” asked Keiko, picking out some sushi. “I mean, she dies in the end.” “I could ask the same of you.” “Personal reasons.” “Well, I’m looking for any lead acting roles. I’ll take what I can get. You’re lucky though, you get any kind of part you want and you can be picky as well,” said Leah as she popped some sushi into her mouth. “I don’t think I can do anything other than criminal roles,” she mumbled. “What are you talking about? You’re an amazing actress. You can portray any character,” she said in protest. “I can portray any character I want, but, as of right now, I don’t have the right to do those sort of happy roles, not to mention they don’t fit me.” “What do you mean?” “I don’t think those happy go lucky roles suit me, my personality is hard enough to pull off.” “I wasn’t talking about that but the part where you said you had no right… and you’re faking your personality?” Keiko chuckled. “You have to fake everything in the business world.”~Tacticalwolf~ “Be real with me then.” “Ok. About the part where I said I had no right, I lied to some good friends. I don’t deserve to be happy when I made them sad. I’m only running away from fate.” At her own words, Keiko smiled ironically, remembering the bus-jacking case. “But can’t you and your friends get past that lie? Then you can move on and be happy again.” “I’m a gloomy person. Besides, could you move on?” “Of course.” “Even if the lie was faking your own death so that the guy you love will be with the correct girl and not the one that ruined his life? No matter what?” Leah thought over the whole baffling situation. “I guess not,” she sighed, “But you have one hell of a past. Is that why nobody can dig up information on you?” “Yeah.” “You sure you should be telling a rival this?” “No, I trust you.” “Why?” “Because, you’re not filled with malice, hatred, or jealousy anymore. As of right now you see me as a friend and only that.” Leah laughed, “So you can read emotions too?” “No,” she smiled, “body language.” “You never cease to amaze me.” “Believe me, I could be a lot more amazing if you knew my past. But that’s just it. It’s my past, and I really don’t want it to come back.”~Tacticalwolf~ “Then let’s drink and screw the whole conversation.” “Yeah.” The two clinked glasses in toast, right before they were surrounded by their fans who had been dying to talk to them for a while.~Tacticalwolf~