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Kiel95

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  1. I just hate when that happens and your friends are always saying that they dont care... and even when someon introduces you to something they get tired of it TT.TT anyways, i'm on the newest episode.. i think its 585 or something like that... anyways...AiCon/ShinShi all they way!!!!!!!!!
  2. Kiel95

    Case Closed on Wii

    CRAZY! japanese better!!!!^-^
  3. oooh... dun dun dunnnnn .... this is where my signature comes in

    There's something worse than being an AiCon!?

    Being a Shinran! (or at least it was something like that :P)

    Anyways read my stories if you don't mind it being AiCon/ShinShi

  4. i dunno, but i know some ppl like that! they is crazy! anyways, are you AiCon or ShinRan?... i have a feeling you're a ShinRan... so... check out my signature hehe ^-^ I'm an AiCon!

  5. Thanks! sorry, i had a tough time trying to portray something that never happened. I mean, we never know how shiho acted as a real child. we only know her personality as a mature adult. Of course i thought about the part where the man in black aimed his gun at the civilians and that Yusaku didn't do anything... but i had a good idea for if they meet again when they are older... i don't know if it will work well so instead of saying it here i think i'm going to send you it in a separate message to see what you think... tell me if that's ok with you... anyways, glad you liked it! ^-^ sorry my stories always lean towards ShinichixShiho, whether thats what will really happen or not (unless i get a request to write a ShinRan story) oh yes and when i made Ran bratty... if you think about it she sort of acted like that in the episode where they wanted him to play hide and seek, but if you think about it, most kids have bratty times, and as ayumi acts like a brat when it comes to conan... she gets jealous when other girls go around conan so i sort of used that for Ran as a child Anyways thank you Kaoko-chan~
  6. I feel your pain, i have trouble with clothes >w<
  7. it's really good! but i do agree with what Akai said...
  8. Hey, welcome! one question... do you watch case closed or detective conan? because if you watch detective conan in english subs then then you can go much farther than episode 130-131 (Don't remember which it stopped on) Anyways, if you haven't made it to ep 129 (In english subbs) then i guess you wouldnt know of the ConAi/ShinShi pairing... well if you need any help just ask!

  9. right now this sight is more dominated by its Wiki, Forum, and chat. Right now the videos aren't working, so it would be best if you went to youtube. Or if you can't find it on youtube go to google and type in the episode and see if they have it subbed in whatever language you need.
  10. Shinichi and Shiho’s first meet. (7 years old-for real) “Shiniiichiiii!” called Ran. “What?” he asked as he turned around. “Let’s go to the park!” “No. I don’t want to!” “Meany!” “I don’t care. I’m going to the library.” Ran pouted and then said, “Fine I’ll go with you.” She hurriedly followed him even though he never looked back. When they got to the library Ran kept bugging him, trying to get him to leave with her and go to the park. “Look, Ran, I don’t want to. I feel like reading.” “Please?” she begged. “Later.” “Promise?” “Yeah, yeah, I promise.” Ran lit up and sat down in a chair saying, “When you’re done come here, I’ll wait for you.” “Fine.” Shinichi walked off towards the adult section where he was looking for a science book to read, since he had already read all of the detective books out. There he ran into a girl who was standing next to a man in black reading a science book. The two fell over when they bumped into each other. “Ah, sorry,” he said. He stood up and held out his hand to her and she glared at him. The man in black helped her up even though she tried to avoid him with a scared and angry look on her face. Shinichi pushed her behind him and said, “She doesn’t want your help.” “And who are you?” glared the man. “Kudo Shinichi. Now stop touching her. She doesn’t want your help, you are only a bother.” He turned to her and grabbed her hand. He then said, “Come on, let’s go.” The other man was looking at him and mumbled, “That’s Kudo Shinichi…?” She was amazed that anyone would stand up to him. Nobody had stood up to the man in black before. While they were going Ran saw him and ran up to him. “Shinichi… who’s she?” she asked a bit worriedly. He paused for a second and turned to look at her, “I forgot to ask your name.” “Miyano Shiho.” Shinichi smiled and said, “Good to meet you.” He also grabbed Ran’s hand and then kept walking while pulling her and Ran along. They walked to the park. The man in black shadowed them. “Hey, Shiho, can you play soccer?” “A little.” Shinichi smiled and the three of them started to kick the ball around. Ran was pouty. “Ran, why are you in such a bad mood?” “Why did you bring some random girl to the park, it was just going to be me and you!” “Sorry, someone was following her. Anyways, I want her to stay near me, that guy is still there.” “Eh?” said Ran. She turned to look around. “Don’t worry about it, let’s just play soccer. If he doesn’t leave I’ll ask my dad what to do.” They played soccer for a while. Afterwards when the man hadn’t left, the three of them began to walk home. After walking by Ran’s house and Ran and Shinichi were hit on the head for staying out so late, Shinichi pulled Shiho behind him and they headed to his house. “I’m tired,” said Shiho. Shinichi looked at her and squatted down. “Get on my back, I’ll carry you to my house. You can sleep on the way there.” She hesitantly got on his back. “Warm,” she mumbled as she drifted off to sleep. Shinichi blushed and turned bright red. He carried her all the way to his house, and the man in black was following him the whole way. He couldn’t open the gate since he was holding Shiho, so he rang the doorbell. Yuusaku came out and said, “Shinichi, why are you ringing the doorbell?” He then noticed the girl and said, “What happened?” “Can you let us in first, I want to set her down, and I don’t want to wake her up.” “Fine,” he replied as he opened the gate and held it and then the door open. They walked inside and Shinichi laid her down in his bed and then covered her. “Now explain,” said his father when they had went back down to the kitchen. “Well, I met her at the bookstore and we ran into each other. I was going to help her up but this man in black just picked her up even though she didn’t seem to want him too. It was like a stranger was touching her because she was fidgeting and trying to escape his grasp but he wouldn’t let go. So I stopped him and took her with me. Then he kept following her.” “What if that was her dad?” asked his mother. “If it was her dad why did she have a scared and mad expression on her face?” “Ok, well, let’s ask her about it when she wakes up,” said Yuusaku. “Ok.” “You go get some sleep as well,” said Yukiko. “Ok, goodnight mom, dad.” Shinichi went up to his room and lay down next to her. He immediately fell asleep since he was so tired from carrying her for so long. When he woke up the first thing he saw were her watchful eyes looking right at him. At first he freaked wondering who it was, and then he remembered. After the shocked expression on his face he said with a smile, “Morning, you hungry, want breakfast?” She looked at him with an expressionless gaze and said, “Is it ok?” “Yeah it’s fine,” he smiled. He grabbed her hand and pulled her down the steps with him and into the kitchen. “Mom, Dad, can we have some breakfast?” “Sure, I was making it now; it’ll be done in a little bit, go watch some TV or read.” “Ok,” he smiled. He pulled Shiho into the other room and they turned on the TV. A few minutes later the doorbell rang and Ran was standing at the gate. “Oh, hey Ran! You want breakfast?” “Sure!” she called as she opened the gate. Shinichi yelled back into the house, “Ran’s come over, can you make some food for her too?” “Sure Shin-chan,” his mom replied while humming to herself. Ran came in and saw Shiho sitting on the couch. “Why’s she here?” “Oh, well we were going to ask her why that man was following her but she had fallen asleep so we decided to ask her when she woke up.” “I see…” Shinichi sat on the seat a few inches away from Shiho. Ran seemed to get slightly annoyed and shoved Shinichi over some and sat in between the two. “Ran, what are you doing?” asked Shinichi. Shiho studied them for a few seconds and then said, “Jealousy.” They both looked at her, “What?” “She seemed to be jealous that you were sitting next to me.” Ran turned red and Shinichi said, “Why?” completely uncomprehending. “U-umm, that’s because…” she stammered. There was a few seconds of silence and then Yukiko called, “Breakfast is ready!” Shinichi hopped up and ran into the other room to get food happily, the two girls followed him. They sat down and this time with Shinichi in the middle. He ate as if there was nothing wrong, but there seemed to be a bit of tension between the two girls. Yukiko and Yuusaku were laughing to themselves, understanding that both of the girls liked him. “So anyways, do you know who that man in black was that was following you?” asked Yuusaku. Shiho was silent for a few moments and then said, “My escort.” “Eh?” they all said surprised. “Then why did you want to avoid him.” “I didn’t say he was a wanted escort. Wherever I go… they always follow me. I can’t do anything without them following me. It’s very annoying.” “Then you should hurry back to them.” “No. Today they were supposed to ship me off to America to study. I want to stay with my sister but they won’t let me.” “Who won’t let you?” “The sy-” she was cut off as the front door was busted open. “Give me the girl,” said the man in black fiercely. Shinichi immediately shielded Shiho and yelled, “Why should we?” “She has a flight to catch to America. We are spending a lot of money for her to go.” “Did her parents approve?” asked Yukiko angrily. “My parents are dead,” replied Shiho, “I think that they killed them!” she yelled. “Give us the girl and we won’t kill anyone,” he said as he pulled out a gun. After Shiho calmed down she said, “Let go Kudo-kun.” “Shiho-chan?” “You need to let go, he won’t hesitate to kill you all.” She removed his hands and pulled on a sad smile. “Thanks anyways.” She got up and walked over to the man in black. “Do I get to see my sister before you send me away?” “Yea, she will see you off at the airport.” “Don’t hurt her.” The two left with that. Shinichi slunk after them, following as discreetly as possible. When they made it to the airport he watched as Shiho hugged a girl that looked to be a teenager at the time. Shiho was crying. Shinichi ran up to them as Shiho let go of her sister. “Shiho-chan, don’t leave!” he yelled as he hugged her tightly. “This brat again?” growled the man in black. He kicked Shinichi away. From behind the man Ran came up and kicked him behind the knees yelling, “Don’t hurt Shinichi!” Shiho ran over to Shinichi as Ran kicked the man in black until he fell, and then continued to kick him. “Are you ok Kudo-kun?” asked Shiho as she bent over him. “I’m fine, don’t go…” “Sorry, if I don’t they might hurt my sister.” Akemi walked over to them and said, “This is the boy you told me about?” “Yeah.” “He’s cute,” she said with a smile, “Your first boyfriend!” Both Shinichi and Shiho blushed and then Ran went up to them and grabbed Shinichi’s arm, “He’s mine!” she said with a determined look. Shiho grabbed him and whispered in his ear, “Told you it was jealousy.” Then after giving him a hug she said, “Sorry Kudo-kun, I have to go to America, I don’t want them to hurt my sister. When I turn 18 in 10 years… I’ll have returned to Japan. When that time comes… find me ok?” she asked with a smile. “I’ll keep this hairstyle so you can always find me.” “OK,” he said as he looked down with a saddened smile. Shiho walked over to her sister and gave her a hug. Then she walked into the crowd and disappeared with the man who had finally stood up. Akemi started to cry. “Why are you crying?” asked Shinichi. “My little sister is being sent off overseas for about 10 years. Of course I’m going to cry.” *Now Shiho is returning* “Sherry, it’s good to see you again,” said an older man, dressed in all black. “It’s been 10 years since I last stepped foot in this place, and if I remember correctly you were being beat up by a little girl,” she chuckled. “Why you,” he moved to grab her. “Don’t touch me. You know you’re not allowed to. If I’m hurt at all you will be blamed.” He stopped. Turning around he said, “Let’s go, the car is waiting.” “Fine.” She slipped into the car after the man and she was driven off to the lab where she would live and work. She was remembering the time right before she left with a smile. Sadly she couldn’t remember his name or face. Even though she had a dream of the event over and over again, whenever she woke up she could never remember his name. For the first half year she was working she dreamed about it often and thought about it often, but soon it stopped coming to her and she forgot about it. -Shinichi had thought about her often when she had first left, but as time went on he had forgotten as well. And when Shiho had returned he had a dream reminding him of her, but even though he searched he never found her. Finally he as well forgot about her completely, again. ~Later the two would meet again under the guise of Conan and Ai at the ages of 7 and 8, just like the first time they met, but they wouldn't know that they had met before...... Please tell me what you think! I am thinking of making a story to come after it for when the black org has been taken out, ai disappears and makes an antidote, and then one year later she comes back~this time they find out that they had met before meeting as Ai and Conan.... ^-^ ~TacticalWolf~
  11. Welcome! i know the feeling of not having any friends as interested as me... i think i'm actually a pure detective conan addict... its not a good situation anyways, if you ever wanna talk about somethin, i'm here ^-^ until school starts in about a week, i will most likely be coming on every day like usual for practically... 12 hours... its sad, i know... but anyways, i'll still come on often once school starts, i just won't be on early in the mornin like usual! anyways, just wanted to say welcome! ~tacticalwolf~
  12. Definitely better! i would say don't make her stutter, since she isn't the type to stuter, but i guess it would be strange if she could just say it like that when she was just made a part of the family... so i think its pretty good ^-^
  13. Kiel95

    Who you choose?

    I'm close to agreeing with you, but I want Kogoro and Eri to get back together... so i would want it to be one of the Shonen Tantei (Ayumi, Mitsuhiko, or Genta)... or maybe one of those stupid police officers that r continuously chasing after Sato hehe, i don't think it had to be a main character did it?
  14. I really think that the unhappiest part for me... was just that Shiho's character didn't have her personality... i mean, i was unhappy that Ran and Shinichi ended together, but i fully expect that in the series as well, so i've already braced myself for that sad ending... anyways, i think that whether u continue on in the after battle with Shiho's love life (definitely wanted) or whether you start a whole different story is really up to you. if you decide to make a new one, people may wonder what happened with Ran and Shinichi, but if you continue from here, there is already a conclusion with those two and so the background for the rest of the story of Shiho's love life is already in place. Also... since she has taken the pill (thank god) she can't be with mitsuhiko (Hallelujah). If she were to be put with somebody i would think that Hakuba or Kaito kid would work well, like having her be Kaito's accomplice or something, (i have no feelings for Aoko) in fact... if you were to make it so both of the guys liked her, you could have this huge love triangle going on between her, hakuba and kaito... 2 enemies fell for the same girl ^-^ i love complicated and less likely relationships compared to the childhood friends forever sort of thing... sometimes it just works better! anyways, if you are going to write about Shiho's love life in the next chapter or in a different story i will be sure to read it...I was only disappointed a bit with her personality, don't worry tho, we didn't create her personality and trying to copy one can be hard... i know because the stories I've written don't exactly portray her personality either... but when you try to make something that has never been written before in the actual series... it sort of stumps you on how to write it... well, anyways, good luck! ~Kiel~ (P.S. Shinichi also wouldn't laugh at Shiho for something like that, he might possibly look at her maybe shocked or release a smirk... but i don't think he's the type to laugh at ppl like that)
  15. ok it is written well... but now... i have officially decided to stop reading them... :'( sorry, usually i'd be fine with it but.. i don't like the thought of them being brother and sister... i want them to be lovers... brother and sister is big no-no (sorry im bout to talk really bratish) i want them to be lovers... brother sister is a big big no-no... its like trying to add a triangle to a family of squares... the square and triangle can marry, but they can never be a family... but when you put together a square and triangle you get some strange shape.... and thats ok, its a shape. but if you stick it in a family thats like having a turtle in a chipmunk family... IT JUST WON'T WORK! it's like creating some strange green and brown family... at least if they married they could be more of a family as long as there is at least a churtle born... sorry... unless he dumps Ran and goes to Shiho... i can't read this anymore.. sorry.. you've broken my heart... (and her personality changed too much) P.S. it should be The After Battle IV (thats 4 in roman numerals) oh yes, if you ever give her a lover tho... that i might approve of, i'll read it again, just don't make her call him brother ok? i find it awkward... unless she treats him like the younger brother he would be. then i might read it...
  16. Kiel95

    Ai x Mitsuhiko

    O.o are you trying to send me to my grave? at least try for a NORMAL couple... (as in characters in the BOOKS AND EPISODES!)
  17. i'd be pissed at him for doing so
  18. ah ok well mine is just a rough one if its not exact, but it sounds like it i also know a few more cell phone songs like the mcdonalds theme song, ode to joy, mary had a little lamb, uh... crud i forgot wut the other is called..
  19. Kiel95

    Ai x Mitsuhiko

    they don't go well together... it just... is almost worse than aixmitsuhiko
  20. i dont think he's that weak, if anything he'd force ai into it though for her protection...
  21. dang, then no matter what i may be short a number... cuz it could be a random number added at the end well, when i looked up the sheet music those 3 notes were used in the first part 0585, so i just had to come up with the other two on my own, so i think it is 2 then 4... so the whole thing should be 0858 05254 (don't know what the 10th number would be)
  22. I think its a good idea, ok your voice really surprised me ... anyways i think it will go well! New chatroom sounds good!
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