Kiel95

Maybe they are both having a bad day, and then their bad days intertwine to make either an even worse day for the both of them, or when the two clash their days get better... that would be cool

Wow, this was great! Poor Conan, getting in trouble for things that he didn't start! Also since Ayumi was saying she will wait for Conan, there is going to be a lot more trouble when he rejects her again. This time... it will probably turn out worse! well if you are going to write another part, i can't wait! Keep writing, i'm dying to read another story!

I wish that somehow there could be a shinichi and a conan... but i guess that won't happen... usually i am one that wishes for the childhood friends to be together... but i like Ai better.. her personality is more developed... and also... i think ran's character is a bit too childish still.. she is like 17 or 18... why the heck is she so.. so.. kiddish... Ai at least acts like an adult... but Ran freaks out about the littlest of things... oh well.. i always wish that an author would make more than one ending... cuz then depending on which character you are a fan of ... that would be the ending you bought... y'know? ... ah well.. its just me wishing here anyway, loved the story, can't wait for the next part...

please come out with the 3rd part soon >w< im dyin to read it... although i really wish shinichi would end up with shiho... pleaaaase make them get together and make ran fall in love with someone else... make shinichi have started to fall out of her heart so that they slowly distance from a romantic relationship.. bring on the shinichiXshiho pleaaase!

it was amazing! keep writing stories like this! i can't wait to read more >w<

It was amazing. the story was well thought out. I love writing fanfiction too. of course unless a story has ended i dont write an ending myself, i just add in a chapter or wutever. I'll try posting one of them sometime. (just so you know im a conanxai/shinichixshiho fan so there is a great chance that ran will end up with someone else

I read the manga and watch the anime. i guess reading the manga has its ups, like there are a lot more chapters and cases... but in the anime there are many more reactions that become more realistic than when drawn. currently i have read every single chapter that has been posted on a scanlation website, and i have watched every single episode that has come out in english subs, and i have watched every movie and ova subbed. I really don't know which i like better. either way, it's a great series, and i hope it stays great from now until the end.