mysterious girl
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great job!! i agree with tacticalwolf about changing the tenses but that didn't stop me from reading ur story! anyway gud luck in writing the 2nd chapter!!!!
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well read version a and b and compare which 1 is better then i think u might choose 1 i don't know it 'sometimes' work with me! =)
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take ur time in doing ur homeworks i don't want u 2 fail(i want u 2 pass with high marks) cuz of the story.
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ya i agree with shuuichi! it wasn't expected and tyt in writing it but make it awesome(all ur chapters are awesome so just make amazingly awesome as wat shuuichi said)
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u know ur right! im dying now!! i need chapter 10!! hope it releases fast I CAN'T WAIT 2 READ IT!!
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so excited 'something bad is gonna happen' i can't guess this time will waiting 4 the next chapter P.S hope it releases fast cuz i don't think i can stay more than 3 days(or less) without knowing wats gonna happen
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funny chapter! ''my place'' shinichi said i started laughing from there!
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is shinichi going to take shiho to his house or agasa's i don't know but chapter 6 will answer my question! oh and nice moment between them! hope there will be more in the other chapters!
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hey!! how are u??
i wanted 2 say that ur story is amazing although im in chapter 4 now its amazing that i can't stop reading. I have homework but ur story is interesting that i can't stop reading it.
GUD JOB!! =DD
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i guess the man who spoke is Gin well i will c who in the next chapter!
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now i can't go 2 sleep unless i finish the story i mean till i read chapter 4
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wow!! amazing chapter!
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don't be mad at me im telling the truth!!
i just wrote it cuz i don't think if in my other message it was shown!
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hey!! i have news about the trip that simran and the guy went 2 ok here it is:
Simran and the rest went 2 bowling city and sega republic.
bowling city is in city center, sega republic is in DUBAI MALL.
I KNOW I KNOW IM THE SAME AS U!! THEY WENT TO DUBAI MALL IM SERIOUSLY REGRETTING NOT GOING WITH THEM!!
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don't be mad at me im telling...
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ow molly i saw what ur talking about and as i told u in class ok don't get crazy and say crazy stuff!!
oh and about Dubai Mall plz tell me when im really bored and i want 2 go out with u thx hf in the weekend! =DD
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I will defiantly read ur stories i never get bored of them!! ya ur right if i knew who will die i wouldn't feel the same way i felt before knowing who will die (excited is the word im searching 4) so ya gud luck in writing the story and.... CAN'T WAIT TILL IT COME OUT!!!
