Aeyra

(Just a reminder, you guys have to end this by TOMORROW! (the latest I'll give is Oct. 2nd... because I don't feel like modding on my birthday the next day. XD))

(sorry I haven't been around to mod for a few days, math competition and the site seemed to be down yesterday when I was on. :/ Now as a reminder, you guys have five more days to wrap this up. For now, I don't want extensions. X) That just gives an excuse for it to trail on forever... but I will give it if it's really needed. Now to screw everything up.) "It's time for you to go," said the man as Aeyra finished putting on her jacket, pulling her hair up into a low ponytail. There was a determined look on her face, because now the plan was entering the final phase and it was all dependent on her to carry it out right. "We're right outside of the hotel right now." "Be careful- I think there are people sniping from the hotel," she warned, making him pull up behind a wall a few hundred feet away. "Do I get any protection?" "They'll know it's you," he said simply. It would be enough. "Now carry it all out." "I will." And with that, she ran off towards the hotel, hoping she would be able to carry out the duty she'd been assigned. (now let's see what happens. >:3 And as always, I'm purposely very, very vague, and the first person to use this in their part basically decides how to interpret it. X) Have fun! And please try to bring it to a conclusion soon!)

(Sorry, I'm at a math competition right now and I'll probably have internet issues for the next two days. ^^" I'm pretty sure you can all manage without me though! I think the plot is interesting enough without me ruining it every two days.)

*Okay! Time for me to screw everything up! Not really, but it's my job. :V* "Looks like there's trouble coming up at the Kurosawa Hotel..." noted the man next to Aeyra, a tinge of worry in his voice. "With that mob in there, they're going to ruin everything. We need to either get everyone else out, or simply eliminate those pesky guys." "Which one is easier?" she asked nervously. She didn't really know much about fighting- only pre-planned events were able to function well in her mind. And this was ruining the plan. "You have to do one or the other somehow." "Then I'm sending in our people. They'll storm the building. It should only take a few minutes for them to get there." (and now it's your choice to decide what's going to happen with the soldiers. :3)

(Hey! Everything looks good right now, and it seems you guys are building up to something yourselves. I'll add something to throw you all off after you guys seem to reach what you're aiming for! I don't want to completely ruin whatever plans you have. X3)

(It's looking fine right now, albeit a bit confusing. I'll give you guys something else to do since I have time. Time to screw things up! >:3) "So... what clue should we leave for them today?" asked Aeyra, looking merely bored as she stared at the carnage on the screen. A month ago, she would have flinched away, but she knew better now. After all, this was all for the greater good. "First we had the website, though, that was only the beginning." "We'll let someone else out," the man informed her, twirling around a pen in his hands. He too looked casual, as if the explosion had nothing to do with him, as if it were just some movie playing out in front of him. "Misaki." "You're letting her join us?" Aeyra's voice was surprised as she stared at him. "I don't think that's the smartest-" "No, I'm not going to. I'm going to send her over there... and she'll have all the information we need to give to them." (Sorry for doing that to you, Misaki, but you can do whatever you want from here! Also, good to see you here, Rye.)

(Whoops... X) That's what happens when you try to do fifty things at once. Just consider it by the end of September, AKA the 30th.)

(Good job so far! I have nothing to type right now, because homework is a killer and you guys are doing just fine. :3 Keep up the good work!)

"How close are they?" asked Aeyra curiously to her kidnapper. She didn't really consider him that anymore, seeing that she wasn't being held captive as much as being made a comrade, but it didn't change the fact that he had yanked her from home at midnight and stuffed her in some van and held her in a prison for about a week. "Are you going to use that now?" "Perhaps," he answered, smirking. "After all, that will stir up quite a fun commotion, don't you think?" He pressed a small red button, and the sound of a distant explosion filled the air. ******************* (Use your imagination folks. X) Sorry it's lame and short for twister... I have a chapter test for AP Euro tomorrow and a bunch of homework.)

(Personally, I'm not too eager with all this FBI stuff (because it's DCW IRL... and I thought it was supposed to stay within realistic limits... woops for me.) and I have no idea what the previous storyline is so I, for one, am extremely confused with all your references. If possible, please try to separate future posts from the previous storyline. I am pretty sure I said that in my last post, but nobody seemed to see it. :/ I don't want to have to bring down my fist, but please try to use your own judgment to what's reasonable and what's not. I personally don't like all of these secret agencies- that's what kind of led the first DCW IRL group to its doom. Too many NPCs, too many groups, and just too much confusion. It's better to keep it so there is only one group and everyone is not trying to come up with some secret Deux ex machina. I don't have time to type up something to mess you up right now, but I will give a deadline. Let's try and finish this by Sept. 30th, okay? That's about twenty more days!)

(Just to let you all know, I completely lost track of the second DCW round and have almost no idea what all you guys are referring back to. :3 I don't need you all to rewrite everything, but it would probably be better for everyone in terms of understanding the plot if we just started this anew without referring back to the old plot, okay? Just read IU's post a few above mine: that's what I hope you guys will be doing. Not everyone was in the last DCW IRL round and they have no idea what you guys are talking about. (AKA me. *cough* ) Now for me to mess things up a little. You guys can do whatever to my character- I'm not actually participating. X) Just don't kill her, okay? Because then I'll have to control one of you. And I'm sure none of you want that. XD) ********************************************************************** "Someone would think they were smarter than that," said one of the kidnappers, smiling. Next to him lay a girl lounging on a couch, stretching and getting herself comfortable. "You made a smart choice, Aeyra." "Of course I did," the girl said smugly, laughing. "Do you think I have a death wish or something? And after all, I think this mission is important. Everyone we need is about to start their hunt for me... And I'll lead them right into this trap." ********************************************************************** (BTW, I'm always very vague because I don't want to be writing the storyline- whoever gets here first technically can interpret it any way they can. Just be reasonable- obviously, none of you heard it. (well... maybe Misaki did.) But some of you could suspect that something fishy is going on... After all, who actually has time to create a website when they're on the run? )

(Okay! Everything seems to be running smoothly so far, but I'd like to repeat what I've added in in my first post (didn't make a post out of it earlier because of school. ). If anyone would be willing to give up their spot so someone new has a chance to play, please make an effort to do so. (AKA Tell me.) Other than that, please continue to write! ;D)

(Okay, I've added the new people to the list and fixed a stupid mistake I made. X) @Akai Sera: My DS is hopeless with the internet... I'm amazed you were even able to type that. XD @Moho: Nice start! @AiSugetsu: Aww... TTwTT Yeah... my AP Chem homework is pretty bad, so that's why I'm a mod. I just have to read stuff and submit every once in a while. XD)

*SIGN UP NOW CLOSED!* I'm really sorry for those of you who just missed the cut-off... Though, if anyone who was in it last time would be willing to give up their spot so someone who hasn't been in DCW IRL yet, please tell me! Some people would be really grateful! RP-ers: 1. Akai Sera 2. Mohorovicic 3. OTTD Player 4. Anime Girl 4 Eva 5. Misaki-chan 6. Wonderstruck 7. Ren-kun 8. The Banana Assassin It's usually no big deal if an internet friend slips off for a day, a week, or even months. After all, people have real lives, and on the internet you can slip in and out like a shadow- and with your disappearance, you become forgotten. But one day, this missing, forgotten person makes a reappearance. It's not a reappearance, really. It's just a single status update, one of those links that everyone posts. It's not a website that you recognize, but you decide to click anyways- maybe it's a funny picture or something like that. What you find is a single paragraph, a plea for help that instantly makes your blood run cold. This is the first day that I've been able to get away, but it won't be long before they catch me. You need to save us, please. I can hear them already- please, you're our only hope. Search the news- it'll tell you everything you need to know. If anyone can help us, it's you guys. ~Aeyra (And that's your plot! I've been missing long enough anyways, it's almost true. :V My AP Chemistry homework kidnapped me... well, not in-story, but that's why I haven't been here. X) Okay people! Now go make up a fun little story for me to screw around with every few days. >:3 I believe the first 8 to sign up get a spot here...? In order to sign up, quote the first part (not the story... just the empty list) and put your name on it. You can (please do) write a story about you personally reading the website. Please tell me why you can't if you can't... It only needs to be like, a paragraph. First come, first serve, good luck! (and apologies to those who missed it this time.) For other rules, go to this thread: http://www.detective...l-info-and-faq/ Or just PM me.) (EDIT: I messed up! XD I forgot to correct the note... it's supposed to say 'us' instead of 'me' and 'our' instead of 'my.' That way, it's more fun! >:3)

While I agree no one should be killed, this kind of makes me think of Facebook where people go 'Like' to help cure cancer! Unless we actually volunteer to go to these countries or donate money (which I wouldn't recommend unless you trust the charity won't use the money for their own selfish means, which unfortunately, many do) to the cause, sitting here on the computer and typing 'I support the cause!' is going to do nothing. Most people already know this stuff after all. Unless you go sponsor a program that delivers speeches talking about these topics in poorer areas where things like this are more prevalent, I'm going to be honest and say we're not doing anything. If this is a petition, well... you have to be more specific than 'save innocent lives.' From what? I mean, you could start a petition telling NATO to protect children from becoming soldiers in Africa and they would listen if you got a few million signatures. (though... I bet they're already trying.) I think that's probably what Chels was trying to say, though, in less harsh and pessimistic tones than me. X) Words on the internet don't do anything on a small site like this- they only start to take meaning when taken into real life...

I agree completely with Pyre... The only times I'd really suggest posting stuff here is- getting feedback on something you don't really want to put on ff.net, or trying to get someone to look at it (hopefully) before you publish it elsewhere because you don't have a beta. (or you're just really nervous about posting it.) I mean, the story section used to be more active (as well as the drawings section), but now, as Pyre said, the number of active members is pretty low. (and most of those wouldn't bother with this section of the site.) I haven't really looked at your other thread (I'm trying to complete something for a contest) and I just want to say that three sentences isn't really enough to demonstrate someone's writing ability. It sounds more like a summary- and that would probably more fit for a status update. Like asking people "Does this idea sound cool? *insert summary here*" and getting that type of feedback there. If you're going to start a topic, you should at least have a prologue or part of a chapter for people to actually read a story. Sorry if I sound negative, but as Pyre said, posting here gets you about zero attention. I did it when it was more active, and usually just so people who never, ever went on ff.net to read it. (but most of the members who did review.... I haven't heard from a good portion of them in a while.) Good luck with your fanfiction though!

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