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dear anonymous I'm hungry tsukiko
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Detective Conan: Showdown with the Black organization
Tsukiko replied to DCvsAceAttorney's topic in Stories
I'll read this later but what I noticed in the first chapter you should think about the way you pout the lines. Part from your first chapter like I would put it: "I'm back Ran-neechan!" I called. " Welcome home Conan-kun! Sonoko and Sera will be coming here soon. " Ran replied. " Why? " I asked. I didn't really like the sound of Sonoko or Sera coming here. Sonoko is Ran's best friend but she isn't the brightest person in the world. And Sera's too suspicious. She knew my name and that I was a detective. She doesn't act like an enemy, but I don't feel confortable around her. " Just make sure you don't do anything stupid, you got that? " Kogoro ordered. " Okay " Ran replied. Oh no. It's the drunkard. Mouri Kogoro, also known as sleeping Kogoro. He used to be a great detective, but now all he does is drink, and watch Yoko on TV. I'm not going to say anything else now. I have to read everything first. But this still caught my interest. -
dear anonymous I want that DCWIRL will continue... tsukiko
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went to school
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sure thing!
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I see... Moho should write then I think. Or I don't know... Oh, I can't wait!
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dear anonymous It's great to see you again. tsukiko
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dear anonymous I'm home tsukiko
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two buns and a chocolate cookie
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I like to just relax
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wrote a picture analyse
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Whoa, Aya! That was great! And KKLT... what do you mean by "permanently separated"?
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Oomigosh! *fangirl scream*
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I finished the third page of my cartoon. I just should put it to Dev.
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well, guess so...