Samantha

Toilets flush in the tone of e-flat.

2011. Ice or fire?

An eyeball comes out. Samantha inserts a coin.

Towards the UFO

Uh, high-five I guess.

Sleep for two hours!!!! .....wait, per day? XD Would you rather..... Be able to fly OR Be able to breathe underwater?

Very, very good. Looks like Gosho himself drew it.

Doing something I hate, with a 100% probability. Resolution: To write better and to improve on academics.

There are some spelling/grammar mistakes in here. A few verb tense mistakes, too, but not a lot. The main thing is that it needs to be a bit longer, with more descriptions. Make it so the story is interesting, so the reader will keep reading. Describe Hina more! Maybe you could add a few notes on how she behaves throughout the whole day. We know she's quiet, but what else? What about physical descriptions? She's wearing a dress, but what color hair does she have? Is she tall for her age? Anything about her that seems suspicious or interesting? Hina randomly asking the DB to come home with her seems a bit....well, random. Out of place. It would be best if she got to know them better before she asks them over to her house. And wouldn't Ai at least be a bit uncomfortable? I mean, this new girl just arrives and she's asking the DB, including Conan and Ai, over to her house. They barely know her! Phrasing/word choice could be better, it sounds a bit choppy at times. Good luck.

Dear Anonymous, Why are you so desperate to make my life miserable? Look, you're wondering why I have white hairs? It's called stress. You keep talking about 'self-esteem' and 'high spirits' but you don't notice when I'm really upset. Seriously? I appreciate your efforts, but it's kind of driving me nuts. Oh yes, please stop using other Chinese students/my obviously smarter friends as examples. It's really starting to get to me. Now please cut me a break before I go bonkers. ~Samantha