HaibaraDaiFan 0 Report post Posted March 25, 2011 A Quick Note: This story is for the random purpose of writing a fan fiction on a forum board, thus it's not going to show up on my fan fiction account. Tell me what you think. One shot. Kind of CoAi, kind of ShinRan... (Also, I obviously don't own Detective Conan, etc.) The Real Traitor This entire time… you must’ve called me a traitor in the back of your mind. You knew that was what I was. You acted as if you were better, as if you were the very symbol, the very meaning, of justice. You are a traitor too, Kudo-kun. Just as bad as I was. Haibara Ai walked the silent street. Her breath was visible in front of her face, and the cold air bit at her skin. At this point she didn’t care. She couldn’t care. Why would she care in the first place? No. No, there was no reason to care. No one would care about that. No one. Especially not her. She sighed, a large puff of white appearing in response. Her eyes wandered up to the sky. “Haibara, I really do. I mean it! This is really weird for me to say, so please, believe me!” The girl’s eyes returned to the road in front of her. Japan’s weather had been rather cold and now ice covered many streets. Such an inconvenience. Her mind attempted to press away the words he had spoken. Haibara continued to walk forward, careful not to slip and fall on the ice. “Wouldn’t that be ironic.” She spoke out loud to herself. “I promise to never leave you. I’ll protect you, forever.” Haibara stopped again, her hand reaching out to the brick wall beside her. “Liar.” She hissed softly, his words finally evoking a response. Her fingers withdrew from the wall slightly, reacting to the chilling feel. She hadn’t worn gloves or mittens today, she had forgotten them. She had forgotten them at Hakase’s place as she quickly ran out the door. Once again, the child clenched her teeth. “I don’t care.” She said aloud, trying to drown out the words echoing in her mind. “I was so scared you wouldn’t return my feelings, Haibara. You wouldn’t believe how relieved I am right now.” Haibara hit the wall next to her. She had revealed her feelings to him that day. That day when he said so many lies. He said it, he convinced her! It was his fault, that traitor’s fault! “No, I don’t want Ran! It’s you that I love, Haibara! I’ve gotten over her! Please, don’t reject me because of her.” “Shut up.” Haibara once again retorted to the empty space around her. No one else was on this road. No one else but her. Just her and her thoughts haunting her, the feeling of betrayal fresh inside of her. “This is the antidote? Permanently? Thank you, Haibara! You’re a genius!” “Tch.” She muttered, forgetting why she was even walking anymore. She pressed her back against the wall. Her tiny hands pulled a small red and white pill out of her pocket. She looked down on it, pain evident in her eyes. “So you’re going to take it in a few days? That’ll be great, Haibara! With the Organization gone, you’ll have nothing to fear, and I’ll be right there with you. We can enjoy high school for a change.” “Empty promises.” She whispered, her vision blurring as tears threatened to fall down her face. Haibara swallowed several times, stopping any tears that dared to come down. “I don’t care.” She said aloud again, convincing herself that it was true. She closed her hand around the pill. “I’ll say good bye to Ran today for good. She’ll be sad, but I can’t just leave her hanging. After that, you and I can be together.” Haibara slid down, sitting on the cold and frozen road. She pulled her knees up to her chest, then pressed her forehead against her knees. “It all sounds so stupid. Why would I have believed such an obvious lie?” Haibara walked into the room, just waking up from a catnap she had taken. She was finishing some research on things that had nothing to do with the antidote for once, and it was rather enjoyable to her mild surprise. However what met her sleepy eyes came as a very unpleasant shock. “Ran… I’m sorry.” At first, Haibara figured that she had stumbled upon what Kudo-kun had promised. That he was in middle of telling her good bye. She felt wrong for listening in on it, but she couldn’t help herself. The girl hid in the shadows, watching intently. Suddenly, she saw Kudo-kun reach and gently take a hold of Ran’s arms. “I’m sorry for leaving you for so long. I.. I almost did something I’d regret today. So instead… I want to let you know… That I…” Haibara felt something turn in her stomach. It sounded like… like he was going to… say something that she didn’t want to hear. “Shinichi…” Ran-san whispered. Kudo-kun looked her in the eyes. “I love you, Ran.” Haibara immediately felt the need to find a toilet to puke in. For a few moments she tried her best to calm her nerves down, to evaluate the situation. She waited for the “but” or anything that would counteract what he had just said. “I love you too, Shinichi.” Haibara stared as the two drew closer, sharing a kiss. Haibara felt lightheaded and she began to quietly and quickly make her way back down the stairs. Her mind wouldn’t think straight and she only managed to get her heavy coat and her shoes to exit out the back door that few people knew about. After walking around for awhile, she found herself on an icy street. Reliving the moment that brought her to this very place caused a new attack of tears to come, this time they came pouring out of her eyes. She began to sob, alone on the street, in the cold, where no one could find her. Where she belonged. “Kudo-kun… you’re the traitor. You’re the traitor.” She yelled between sobs. This would be the last time she cried. The last time something could make her cry. When she went home, she’d be ‘herself’ with no emotion to be seen. She’d be her cynical self, Haibara Ai, forever stuck in elementary. In her hand, she squeezed the pill until it became a powder. She then opened it and watched the pieces fall onto the ice, disappearing. This is the last time. Haibara promised herself, then buried her face in her arms and let the exhaustion of everything overtake her. Sayonara, Edogawa Conan. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Detective Kudo 28 Report post Posted March 25, 2011 very well written Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted March 25, 2011 Was this the piece you were talking about? But it's so sweet! A bit short, but sweet. I feel like murdering Conan/Shinichi now...even though I'm not a ConAi fan... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HaibaraDaiFan 0 Report post Posted March 25, 2011 Detective Kudo - Thanks IdentityUnknown - Yes, it is the piece I was talking about XD Glad I invoked a response then Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted March 25, 2011 3 more posts (I think) and you'll be an advanced member!!! Wait...I have a senpai who is less advanced on DCW than I am? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HaibaraDaiFan 0 Report post Posted March 25, 2011 Hahahaha, well I've been here longer, but my rank isn't any good 'cause I never made a habit of talking on forums.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SSJBowser 13 Report post Posted March 25, 2011 Good story, It was a good read. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HaibaraDaiFan 0 Report post Posted March 26, 2011 SSJBowser - Thank you Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted March 26, 2011 Why don't you publish it on FF.net, senpai? It's a great story, and more people would read it. I'd review it as well. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HaibaraDaiFan 0 Report post Posted March 26, 2011 I suppose I will... just 'cause you suggested it XD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted March 26, 2011 I know, I'm important like that. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted March 26, 2011 It's very good! I love this kind of Haibara angst, but right now, I really feel like killing Shinichi for ever saying he loved Haibara. Not because I feel bad for Haibara, but because i hate AiCon and would like to smash the entire fandom to pieces. I loved the ShinRan though... I heart ShinRan forever! You should put it on fanfiction! I'll review it! Just tell me when you post it, because otherwise I don't really go on ff.net anymore. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HaibaraDaiFan 0 Report post Posted March 26, 2011 XDDD Thank you I put it on fanfiction last night Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted March 27, 2011 XDDD Thank you I put it on fanfiction last night I reviewed it! BTW, could you read my fanfictions? (and review them plz?) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xenonkid 2 Report post Posted March 27, 2011 i feel so sorry to ai-chan but i also SO want to choke shinichi to death after telling her those lies.... that was indeed my case w/ my kouhai friend Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted March 28, 2011 oh geez... it was a sort of conai and a shinran.. i'm actually crying... damn you shinichi you lying f****** b******!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i may be a conai but if you had said waht you did to haibara and were real, i would've killed you and then NOBODY WOULD EVER KNOW, AS THE GREAT KUDO SHINICHI WOULD BE DEAD!!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HaibaraDaiFan 0 Report post Posted March 28, 2011 Aeyra - Once I get done with my school workload, I'll go on a marathon reading (and reviewing!) your stories Thanks for the review! Xenonkid - Glad I invoked a response like that from you XD Ah, I sound like a Shinichi hater o.o Kiel - o.o'' I feel some scary murderous aura >.>;;; XD You rock, just so you know Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted March 28, 2011 Kiel - o.o'' I feel some scary murderous aura >.>;;; XD You rock, just so you know why thank you if shinichi is going to harm my ai-chan, i'm going to harm him >=D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HaibaraDaiFan 0 Report post Posted March 28, 2011 You're welcome Agreed!! (says the author who wrote about Shinichi hurting her haibara...>.> Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted March 28, 2011 You're welcome Agreed!! (says the author who wrote about Shinichi hurting her haibara...>.> hahahahaha XDDD <3<3<3 but you're a really good writer! i suck >w< Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HaibaraDaiFan 0 Report post Posted March 28, 2011 Aww, thank you >.< You don't suck!! I absolutely adored 'Downfall of the Syndicate'! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J3nny 22 Report post Posted April 10, 2011 HOLY! I wanna kill SHINICHI so bad Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xenonkid 2 Report post Posted April 10, 2011 why thank you if shinichi is going to harm my ai-chan, i'm going to harm him >=D indeed! hurt haibara-san i hurt you, holmes freak! XD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dw5chaosfan 8 Report post Posted April 13, 2011 Please continue this story. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted April 14, 2011 Aww, thank you >.< You don't suck!! I absolutely adored 'Downfall of the Syndicate'! hahaha, i'm glad <3 but i mean, the meanest reviewers are the authors themselves... sometimes i go back to read what i've written, and holy s*** i HATED my style of writing when i wrote that... i'm definitely thinking of editing it.. cuz that version right now is making me mad >w< so if i get the time i'll edit it... but recently i've been straying from fanfics and moving on to romances and such... god... i'm so pathetic... i mean, i'm a COMPLETE HOPELESS ROMANTIC... but i don't believe there's a thing such as true love (ironic no?)... man i want to, but seriously, love can be considered overrated... love doesn't last forever... friendship might, but lovers at one point will grow apart to when they are either completely against each other, acquaintences, or friends... only true love exists when two people love each other forever, and i've never seen it exist... sure there is a FORM of true love... but that's a different kind... its like when two people are madly in love at a point, and one of them passes away... that moment where the two were actually 'in love' is the peak of their romance, and also the end, so it would be the memory remembered... oh geez... i'm given a friggin speech here... anyways, i love you're work, i feel like killing shinichi, and i hope ai-chan the best <3 good luck on your next works! <3<3<3 (i've already forgotten how i got off topic and i'm too lazy to go back and read what i've written XD yippeeee <3) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
