dw5chaosfan 8 Report post Posted April 18, 2011 The thing that is bothering people about this story is the really bad broken promise, right? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted April 18, 2011 Sí, I think thats it Vero. I thought it was good, but I hate ConAi so I personally quite enjoyed that broken promise. Don't get me wrong; I like Ai, I just dont like her near Shinichi. luckily my beta agrees, cept she absolutely hates Ai. First thing she tells me is that she hates her. That's LostInTheDreams for you! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Forever Lost 55 Report post Posted April 19, 2011 Somehow this is expected of Kudo. I mean, in a sense. Because he's supposedly liked Ran since he was a kindergartner, so if he were to realize he liked Haibara (or if he really did, I don't get the feeling that you intended for him to have some evil plot or anything..) it'd be hard for him, and face-to-face with the person he wanted to be with all this time, to say goodbye while in that body would probably be too impossible for his mental capacity in the 'love' area. Also, as expected of you, good job with your writing. When are you going to update the HakuShi fanfic? I don't normally review stories but I really liked that one.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Alleangean1412 2 Report post Posted April 28, 2011 Such a awesome betrayal story this is but really Kudo should drug himself for violating Haibara's trust like that This reminds me of a song check it out http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EQ8lCoOAY4U Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted April 30, 2011 This is great Senpai! Good job! Full of angsty goodness... :3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
