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Conan in Hollywood

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Hello everyone !

I'm working on a Detective Conan fan-fic right now that I'm planning to release parts after parts, but I need someone with a good comprehension of french to translate it into english (I'm glad you're able to understand me in normal discussions, but I don't think I'm able to write an entire story in a correct english).

If someone is able and patient enough to do it, thanks ! I'll inform that person when I post the following parts.

The link for the first part of my fic:

http://www.cinefeeling.net/t2303-ma-fan-fic-detective-conan

You're also welcome to make commentaries and critics.

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I can translate it! I'll give it a shot

t kept running through my mind for a moment, that desire to make a fan-fic on a possible crossover between the world of Detective Conan and the animated world of Warner Bros, and now I'm starting bah!

Just to clarify, I would do my fic in As, which will allow me to develop the story and try to recreate the suspense of the original manga, but I already have the main elements of the whole story .

"I am the high school detective Shinichi Kudo! One day I was having fun in an amusement park with my childhood friend Ran Mouri, I caught an illegal transaction made by a man in black, Vodka. While j discrete observation, I have not seen his accomplice, Gin, slip behind me and knock me back. It made me absorb a strange substance, and the next moment I was ... again small.

So I explained the situation to my neighbor, Professor Agasa, I was surprised by the arrival of Ran. When she asked me my name, I improvised Conan Edogawa. To trace the men in black, I moved in with Ran in the detective agency of his father. But Kogoro Mouri Detective is a failure who owes his sudden popularity to ... Finally you understand!

To my great misfortune, my investigations alongside Kogoro and Ran have captured the attention of three of my classmates (Genta, Ayumi, and Mitsuhiko) which, on a whim, decided to form the group of Detective Boys . Not that it pleases me to pick up children in dangerous business, rather they are the ones who shipped me strength. Finally ... They are still good job.

Amidst all these cases, I ended up tracing the men in black. Where, following a case, the culprit Akemi Miyano was murdered by Gin, her sister Shiho rebelled against the organization and was convicted. Creator of a deadly drug, it absorbed to end his life and rejuvenate in turn, allowing him to escape the vigilance of Gin. Since become the schoolgirl Ai Haibara it invaluable to me in my struggle against the dark organization.

The influence of the organization extends far further than I thought and, with the days, the number of members continues to grow. But I would never stop fighting. I would expose every last one and I would find out the identity of the person who pulls the strings.

Even if I became a little, I still have the mind of an adult. Solving all the cases one after the other, there is only one truth and the name of him who is prodigal Detective Conan! "

Chapter 1: Conan in Hollywood.

Hollywood. The last time I came was a few years ago. I was still Shinichi Kudo. My mother, Yukiko Kudo, a former actress, we had Ran and took me to meet her old friend Sharon Vineyard. She died not long ago. I discovered that shortly after her daughter Sharon and Chris Vineyard was in fact a single person who has mastered the secret of eternal youth. In the black organization, it is known as Vermouth, master of disguise. And she knows my identity. That of Haibara well.

So I was not playful when Kogoro received the call of famous Japanese idol Yoko Ogino to join in America, on the filming of a super-production which is the main entry. Not that it surprised reaction Kogoro said! It would cross entire oceans to see the Pacific to be more precise.

I was no more surprised by the reaction of Ran who believe doing good, we had brought me, Haibara and children. The professor is in the journey of course. Bah, I understand that Genta, Ayumi, and Mitsuhiko were looking forward to meet Bugs Bunny, and I confess that I was tired of hearing the theme of Kamen Yaiba sang all the time.

And here we are, Haibara and me to pay even the price of our appearance of young children of 7 years. As if the cartoons I was interested. Nothing pleases me more than a nice survey. Moreover, as Holmes said to Watson, just before the Reichenbach Falls ...

"Conan-kun ... The aircraft will soon arise."

Eurrrh ... I will speak again.

"Yes, Ran nee-san!"

And here again to take my tone nice and innocent child to use language normally attributed to older people. In normal times, it was the same age. Damn, this game's exhausting. This eventually he would one day?

"Hey, Conan-kun!" You think we're going to talk to Bugs Bunny? "

It was Ayumi. A nice girl, but I wish she shook me under close a few times.

"I do not think so. After all, it's a big star, and the potential attraction of the big stars is also due to their inaccessibility."

Well done Mitsuhiko! But you should assume your age a bit at times. Children 7 years need dreams.

"Hey You dare contradict Ayumi?"

It was Genta.

"Come, children, calm down! Take a little example on Ai."

Of course it's difficult to make wiser. The thing is that this time it was not.

"Professor, I hope you've thought about taking your rations. I do not think your stomach can handle the local food."

Ah, ah ... What I said! Not so good, the good little girl!

"Hey, A little silence behind!"

And voila! Kogoro that rattle. He is sitting two seats from me, Ran separating us.

"-I swear! What you had to tell them about the trip? Basically, it's me that Yoko had invited.

"But then Dad! We would not let Conan-kun alone. And children are happy. Not true, kids! "

"OUIIIII!" cried three interested parties. Ouch my ears!

And here we landed. An agent from Warner waiting for us to get off the plane to take us to the studios. The car was really luxurious. You can imagine the enthusiasm of children.

"Charming attention from the producers!"

The driver threw a moment, a glance at her mirror.

"Excuse me, but would you by any chance the famous detective Kogoro Mouri?"

It is unclear who should lead it? Seriously?

Mind you, it's true he must see the beautiful world!

Kogoro took his tone and said the most solemn.

"" Himself! "

- Wow! I am one of your biggest fans!

Oh! You embarrass me! "

God knows why, I do not believe a word. The one that seemed really embarrassed in history, it was rather Ran. Who would have imagined that the reputation of Kogoro exceeded the borders of Japan (something that never happened to Shinichi, I say!)? Gone are the days when everyone Kogoro confused with a famous astronaut.

And what irritates me the most, I think the story is that it's ME who has solved all these investigations. These men in black ... One day I would make them pay for everything by which I had to spend to get to them ...

While discussing Kogoro and the driver, Ran interrogating officer of Warner. Much to the delight of children (under two), we learned that we could rub Bugs Bunny and Daffy Duck as Yoko shooting a film in their presence. I've always wondered how many teeth carriées could have the rabbit to talk incessantly of her doctor.

And we have come to the studio ... I could not imagine even the sordid story that would take place there.

Preview:

An actress's growing reputation! A rabbit cartoon superstar! A duck jealous of the popularity of his rival! A dark tale of murder!

In the studios mythic figure, without scruple has violated the first rule of thumb of toons, and here we are with a corpse on their hands. The attitude of Bugs Bunny becomes suspect. And shadows of a forgotten past coming back.

Who could freeze and laughter in a macabre silence? While a mythical figure made its appearance, the mystery thickens by the minute.

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ok well, there are definitely a few grammatical errors which made the story slightly confusing, but i think i was able to get the outline ok <3 can't wait to read more :)

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ok well, there are definitely a few grammatical errors which made the story slightly confusing, but i think i was able to get the outline ok <3 can't wait to read more :)

I'm sorry, Translating was tough and frustrated! After translating, I haven't edit it yet!

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I'm sorry, Translating was tough and frustrated! After translating, I haven't edit it yet!

hahaha, i can see why you'd be tired of it! i remember when i would have to translate latin for homework... that was torture!!! i mean, i would translate to the best of my abilities, then i'd go back and edit so that it sounded proper, and then i'd usually have most of it right!

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