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Sorry it's late...

Somebody had to delete it...

well good thing there was back up...

so here is the....

Part 4- False Code

Misaki-chan: Well, who is it Kudo?

Kudo: Hmpf

IU: What’s so funny?

Kudo: HAHAHAHAHA!!

Chelseaj500: OHOHOHOHOHOHOH…oh…ohoho..oh.oho? wait why are we laughing?

Kudo: Yohan’s code was actually so simple.

IU: What?

Misaki-chan: Huh?

Misaki-chan: How is that a “Simple code,” huh?

Kudo: You guys, would you remember what you did today and what you said?

IU: No… I don’t really think about it…

Kudo: Exactly!

Chelseaj500: How’d you come up with that?

Kudo: You helped me.

Chelseaj500: I did? I mean- I sure did!! OHOHOHHOOHOHOHOH~~~!!!(Yawns)

Kudo: Chelseaj500 asked me today’s date a while ago… mean she slept only 10 minutes, but could not think it was the same day, even though she saw we were still here in this room….

Misaki-chan: So you are saying that-

Kudo: Yeah. You can’t possibly remember what you did the whole day… so the codes can’t possibly refer to the conversation/relation with the murderer.

IU:Then what did it refer to?

Kudo: Well… first…. the murderer….

(Turns to the suspects)

Kudo: Is you!

(Points at Grace)(Thud)(Chelseaj500 falls asleep)

Grace: What? Me? How could I…

Kudo: Not you….

(Tilts his hand a to the left a bit)

Kudo: You! Jason!

Jason: What? How can I possibly be the murderer?

Kudo: This is the answer! (Shows the note with 7Bqlov.)

IU: Like I said, how is tha-

Kudo: The Code was on the calendar… heheheh… that made me laugh…

Raoku: Kudo, why is it funny?

Kudo: Have you ever checked your calendar?

All: ??? Of course we do!!!

Kudo: This should be easy then!

Raoku: I’m lost….

Kudo: Look it said 7Bqlov… He was struggling when he was writing….

IU: We know that….

Kudo: Excuse me, Grace, but may I ask….?

Grace: Yes?

Kudo: ….whether Yohan was Lefty or Righty?

Grace: He was ambidextrous…

All: ????

Raoku: Hey, what was the point of that que

Grace: But he use his left most of the time…

IU: Wha-!!!

Misaki-chan: That means!!!

Raoku: Eh??

Kudo: I thought so..

IU: How did you figure that out?

Kudo: Remember, his body when he was found?

Misaki-chan: Ah! That’s why you-

Kudo: Yes. That’s why I was looking for that picture. His Wrist watch was on the right wrist, meaning that he was lefty…

Raoku: Why would he use his right hand to write?

Kudo: Like Grace said, he is ambidextrous, his left hand held the phone up, while right hand was on the desk, which made him use the right hand to write…

Raoku: but he wasn’t holding the phone when we found him…

Kudo: Probably the suspect removed it from him. He must have written right away when he just flipped what ever he had on the desk, his calendar…

IU: Then… what does the code mean?

Kudo: Like I said you all know your calendars…

All: ?? (still no clue)

Kudo: Sigh… January, February, March, April, May, June, July, August, September, October, November, and December….

All: What about it?

Kudo: Take the first letter of each month and see….. It’s J-F-M-A-M-J-J-A-S-O-N-D….

All: …!!!!

IU: Wh- what?!

Misaki: Wh- whoa!

Raoku: N-no way!!

Kudo: Yes. The Code 7Bqlov was actually 7, 8, 9, 10, and 11! He was lefty so he could not write properly with his right hand, not to mention he was struggling from death.

IU: How did you know it was-

Kudo: The calendar? Well, I wondered why he would write B over twice… then when I thought of that he was lefty, he would not write well with his right, causing him to write the circles over again, trying to show that it is 8, but he couldn’t so, we read it as B instead. All the letters had extra strokes and slanted because he was getting weaker from blood loss.

Raoku: You are under arrest for killing Yohan…

Jason: Ow! W-w- wai-wait!!

IU: Officer Raoku wait.

Raoku: huh?

Jason: Before I go,…. I must tell Grace something…

Grace: huh?

---Flash back---

Yohan: Don’t be greedy Jason. You will never gain through greed.

Jason: Gah!.. You…

Yohan: Also… do me a favor…

Jason: Huh?

Yohan: Grace seems to be ignoring me… I think she is mad at me from what happened earlier…

Jason: What is your point?

Yohan: Can you tell her to come by my office once again later?

Jason: Why?

(Yohan opens the top drawer)

Yohan: I wanted to say…. Happy 7th anniversary…..

(Yohan takes out a Diamond jewelry set and drops his tears on them.)

---Flash Back---

Misaki-chan: (Opens the drawer) Ah, this… must be it…..

Grace: No…. Yohan….

(Grace opens the case and as she puts them on, she cries softer and softer, as she finds the love her husband left for the last…)

##---Epilogue(Closing scene Special)-----##

(3 hours of beaty sleep later)

Chelseaj500: OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~~~~ I must have slept..... what happened here...? Hello? anyone?.... when did they leave?

Kudo: We didn't leave yet Chelseaj500. Also we got the murderer, it was Jason(Tells every thing...) and yea...if i'm right the whole thing took about 3 hours

Misaki-chan: Hm? did you forget?

IU: Hey,hey let's finish this already...

Raoku: Yeea.. Time is money....

???: Yea time is money... and before you say anything....

Kudo: Hehhehhe... you know, I pretty much figured this wasn't a murder but test huh?

???: I see, I guess I can't fool you Kudo...

IU: (Whisper->Kudo)Who is it??

Misaki-chan: I am curious...

Raoku: Hey,hey, look we have been here for 3 hours... why did we have to wait 3 hours...

Kudo: That's because.... well, July 6th.

IU: Eh....?

Misaki-chan: If that was the code it must have been a tough one.

???: Hehehe... Please Kudo, explain...

Kudo: Sure. Well, if you read it, it is July, sounds like you-lie.. with a J in front.

IU: What the... that's nonsense...

Misaki-chan: Yea... that alone doesn't mean any thing...

???: HAHAHAH... Like I always say... observation is important....

(Walks out)

Yohan: I'm not dead you know...

Raoku: Eeek! Gohst?

Yohan: No.... That dead body was a fake corpse.... With the help of Mohorovicic, it was created. of course, not to mention the time calculations and the body mass... that was Aeyra...

Kudo: Ha.....haha *Mad Scientist underground...and Mathematician...*

IU: So when did you figure it out?

Kudo: When Chelseaj500 gave you a hint:... the business card....

IU: Hm?

Kudo: She must have been told by Yohan, "Don't act insane, I know you want to,but during the case just give little hints... also use this to confuse people.. I'm sure they can play with this a bit... maybe."

Misaki-chan: H-huh? Really, Cure-chan?

Yohan: Yea.. that business card.... it was to play tricks... Sounds like you've been caught.

Chelseaj500: OHOHOHOHOHHOHOHOHOHO~~! That was a good one too! But Kudo wasn't bothered by it..

Kudo: That business card was a mistake... Yohan...

Yohan: Hm?

Kudo: Look around, there are no business cards around here... meaning that someone has them... which is you.. so that means Chelseaj500 met you before the murder. It was strange how Chelseaj500 took out a brand-new card. If she kept it for long time it would have been folded.

IU: Eh? how do you know? You weren't looking...

Raoku: O_o....

Yohan: AH-hahha;; hahahaha;;; oh man, i did left a really good evidence I was alive...

Kudo: That's not all.

All: eh?

Chelseaj500: I'm hungry... OHOHHOHOHOHOHO~~ who wants-

Kudo: Later Chelseaj500 this 'case' isn't over yet...

Raoku: Hey.... this isn't a ca-

Yohan: "Every mysteries or things that has not been solved". That's what he means.

Kudo: Chelseaj500 asked what time....

Chelseaj500: OHOHOHOHHOHOHOHO~~ Yes! 5 large pizzas! Also....

Kudo:(Ignores) She asked me about the time... I wondered why would she only sleep 10 minutes

Yohan: Oh that...

Kudo: Yeah, 10... in other words.. lo.. If she asked me at the right time,LOL....

Yohan: Hahaha..... Small things are the biggest clue you know. Great job on putting two things separately and solving it at the same time...

Kudo: Heh.. yea. So? what about the suspects?

Raoku: Wait.. then that Jason guy...

Yohan: His name is not Jason. His name is Jonathan. All of them are my friends...

IU: Hey;; that's no fun for Jonathan. He's at the police station...

Yohan: No worries I already told Maurice about it so he will know.

Misaki-chan: M-M-Maurice?

Yohan: Yes the Chief of the police department Maurice, also the creator of DCW.

(Ding-dong)

Chelseaj500: Coming~

Kudo: Hey I thought this was a company?!

Yohan: Well-

???: Here's the delivery... ah wait, no... I have another to deliver...

Chelseaj500: It's ok Kiel.. I'll tell Yohan to give you a big tip...

Yohan: Hey, wait what the...

Chelseaj500: C'mon, this is for the DCW's detectives right?

Yohan: sigh... fine... (Whisper-> Chelseaj500) How much..

Chelseaj500: Let's see.... 5 Large 3 toppings pizzas and 3 bottles of 2 liter soda, Hot wings....

Yohan: Dominoes?

Chelseaj500: No, it's...

Kiel: I-it's round tables that would be $187.52....

Yohan: (Frozen solid) K-Kiel?

Chelseaj500: Well you said this is your house, so i guess you have a lot of money! OHOHOHOHOHOHHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHHO~~~~~~~!!!

Kudo: Whoa, wait your house? Jeez no wonder..

Yohan: Ah-hahaha*No.. it isn't*;;; (Checks wallet) oh man... i need to give you tips also...

Kiel: um.... yea...

Chelseaj500: (Pulls Kiel) Come on! You eat too!

Kiel: Ah-

Yohan: Hey, hey! Wait- *I only have $100... sigh... and this is my FRIEND's house.. not mine Chelseaj500.... you were laughing and didn't listen.... I guess I'll call my friends over*

-End....(for this episode...)-

*Pshh-Chzzztt-kkkkkk-pttt*

???: There we go....

Yohan: Thanks for reading!

Kudo: Am I going to appear in other stories as well?

Yohan: That's my decision. If the character fits, and I thought you left...

Kiel: uh-umm...

Yohan? HM?

Kiel: About the pizza delivery....

Yohan: I know, You weren't Chelseaj500 set it up... You weren't wearing the clothes for Round Table also....

Kiel:...

Kudo: Where is everyone..

Yohan this is Closing special and I thought you left as well...

Kudo: ... well. ok... I thought I would-

Yohan: This episode I mentioned Mohorovicic and Aeyra, but did not show up because

Kudo: *Hey, whoa, don't ignore me* You couldn't think of what to do...

Yohan: Yes. Well Mohorovicic had "Mad scientist underground" and well, to make a corpse, we need mad scientist look real. Also Aeyra is good with calculations, and to make the corpse model, we do need to calculate the mass and all sorts...

Kudo: ah-haha.... can't you just weigh-

Yohan: It's actually not that simple as it sounds... any ways I hope you guys enjoyed it!

Kudo: Also about the fake death-

Yohan: Yea- I know the evidences don't make sense.... anyways Th-

Kudo: (Steals mic) Thanks for Watch- I mean, Reading And he will see you next time! (Runs)

H-Hey! I also have to mention Maurice!!!!

......That shouldn't have happened....

Some times you will see random stuff like these, and about Maurice he didn't show in the story either.

But he will be soon as PD Chief.

I mentioned some characters to tell you who they will be and how they will come out.

Also, I'm now busy because of school, but I'll try to make stories... so....

Kudo: Until-

(Push Kudo and takes mic back)

Yohan: *Yes! I got my mic back..* UNTIL NEXT TIME! *For real... END..huh?* No, Wait Kudo-

Kudo: Bye! (Runs)

Yohan: You!! Stop!!! (Chaseed Kudo)

*ChZzzzzzzztttttttttttttttt*

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I see... Hmm... Time calculations and body mass? That sounds more like plain old logic than math... But, it works. Wonder why I did it though.. *has amnesia of these events* *smiles* That was pretty good, but I'd prefer it to not be in play format. I wonder if I should write a fic for DCW on what happens when the real Conan finds our website.... *grins evily* Hope I get a bigger part next time!

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@Aeyra

It will come soon don't worry.

@Kiel

You will be in the next with Chelseaj500 I've thought of something.

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Ahahahah;;;;

I don't know what I did;; The first version was better;;;;

Sigh my sis had to erase my folder so everything is lost about DC...

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OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO!! XD I LAUGHED SO HARD!! Wow... I gave them important clues? :blink: YAY!! YOU'RE NOT DEAD!! :D OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO!! I wanted to act insane... LOVE IT!! Well, I can't wait for your next one!! UPDATE SOON!! YAY!! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: Wow, you write an AMAZING story!! AND CASES!! :D I interrupted Kudo to buy pizzas... OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO!! LOVE IT!! I'LL BE SEARCHING FOR THE NEXT CASE!! Thanks!!

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When I was thinking of another mystery to post on "Whodunit," I was looking around in my room.

Things I saw that made me write this.

-Detective Conan (forgot which vol./file. the one with a guy murdered in his office by a *Foreign* person)

--Idea for me being businessman in the story.

-Laptop on DCW

--Idea to post

-Calendar

--Looked through it. Noticed the "JASON." (Jul-Aug-Sept-Oct-Nov).

-Alarm clock with $1 bill on it

--Sleeping Chelseeaj500/ idea of buying expensive pizza.

-Megaman Figure playing dead (Laying down with the *broken* sword through chest)

--How I died

-Tactical knife (was wondering why it was there.)

--Weapon, though I just called it 'Knife'

-Evil-laugh doll

--OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~!!

-Broken TV showing *BZZZZZZT*

--Closing commentaries

-Mom's Necklace(wonders why it was there)

--"Anniversary present"

-Rock band microphone

--Item in closing commentaries

-IQ jump Business card

--Idea of Low Q/ Bounder Q

-Old-fashioned telephone

--Murderer cutting phone line.

-Old Picture of me on top of 8ft tall book shelf, crying

--Where I got ripped picture and the line "Don't want to see this again.." but never used it again.. i forgot.

-Bed

--Chelseaj500 sleeps in the story at some point

-Friend Pics

--My friends as characters. (I asked, they said they're OK with it.)

-"For Dummies" book (if you're curious,Anatomy, physiology, AP biology, AP Physics and AP -

chemistry.)

--Where I got Low Q... combined with IQ jump business card

-Pizza

--Chelseaj500 ordering pizza/ Introduction of Kiel

-My sis's Burbe(?) castle thing

--Company = Home, but not mine.

-Flash light

--Flash back

Edited by Anti-APTX4869

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XD Love it! i really am grateful for you adding me in XD yaaaay i get to deliver pizza <3 who wants pineapple and ham?!?!?

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*Gasp* MY FAVORITE HAWAIIAN STYLE!!! *Snatch* *OMNOMNOMNNOMNOMNONMNOMNOMNOMNOMONMNONMNOMNONM* :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

MWAHAHAHAHAAHHAAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAAHAHHA- !!! - HAAAAaaackkkkkk!! *Cough* *Cough* ugh... bad idea..

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Help with the next story!

I will put you on credits (Co-writer)!

Get a chance to be in it(Your nickname on the Cast)!

Who knows, you can be chosen (Might take out someone)!

It's boring when same character appears sometimes so GO GO!!

VVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV

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So very very true...

The thing is, I don't have the money to spend on those boxes and packs. If I did, I would be doing what Seto Kaiba does in the second video of my sig.

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