phantomlady1101 59 Report post Posted May 24, 2011 Huh..? I can see both yours and the manga.. But the one I'm talking about is yours, and not the manga.. The attach file??? Ak, it's the same, I post it for some people can't see the image post by URL!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
harrieth.dc 2 Report post Posted May 24, 2011 I can see it..!!! I have the same opinion as IU, and the eyes, I know it's kinda difficult/hard to draw it.. but with more practice, you get..!!! go..!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted May 24, 2011 I'll give more tips later, (im in school) but it looks pretty good! Hairs a bit too to the right, same opinion as Pyre and a few other things, but it's fine I guess. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mabel 59 Report post Posted May 24, 2011 It's very nice, the drawing! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
gabapple 27 Report post Posted May 25, 2011 It's quite cute! <3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted May 25, 2011 Tips: Her body is too thin near the bottom... I had the same problem. (until my ultra-artist friend came over and erased it over and over and taught me how to do it right... she found about fifty problems with my drawing. XD) Her arm is a little short. The elbow should be farther down. Measure your own body with your hands for approximations. (that's what I do.) Even though the manga has no mouth, this should have one because the box is too far down to not have a mouth. The hair above her ears is the same shade as the rest of her hair. You exaggerated a little too much. Hand. It's a little thin on the right. They're hard to draw. I found a bunch of tutorials online, but I forget the links. Just search up 'how to draw hands'. Pretty good! (I hate playing critic... But I think people need advice to improve...) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mabel 59 Report post Posted May 25, 2011 i love it! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted May 25, 2011 It came back~! I can see it now. I agree with Aeyra about your drawing. But it still looks nice! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted May 26, 2011 @Aeyra: Thats TOO Professional in your comment! XD I think its awesome! Though of course it cannot be compared to a professional, but I think its wonderful! *If it was me, I'd wouldnt be bothered (lazy) to do elaborate lines and shading XD* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted May 26, 2011 @Aeyra: Thats TOO Professional in your comment! XD I think its awesome! Though of course it cannot be compared to a professional, but I think its wonderful! *If it was me, I'd wouldnt be bothered (lazy) to do elaborate lines and shading XD* My friend attacked my drawing until there was nearly nothing left, and she was being gentle... Tips for perfection might be hard to live up to, but following them can get you higher. That's what I believe. I throw away 80% of my drawings because I can't stand looking at them. But I get better. I don't think my comment was very professional. Lemme post one of my friend's things to my cousin for a drawing: 1) The faces/cheeks/chins are too sharp. In the manga, the facial features appear to be that sharp, but the facial lines do not meet to create triangles. 2) The shape of the heads/faces (particularly Natsume's) are a little disformed. --;; The shape should be symmetrical on the left and right side (not including the face). 3) The hair's lookin' nice! ;D You're really starting to get the hang of making it look soft and flowy. However, as I remember Natsume, his hair is a little longer and flowy. HIs bangs seem to fall in single strand/bunches, and don't all touch at the same place. ;D Great job, though! 4) The shoulders and neck are looking much better, too. However, for Luca's neck especially, the neck is a little too thin - necks don't usually curve/angle in towards the chin! 5) The eyes are a little far apart. In both the anime and the manga (and in real life, for that matter!), the eyes are one eye-length apart from each other. Which also makes making the eyes the right size important! 6) The space between the pupils and the bottom eye lid (Natsume) is a little....well, un-Natsume-ish? When he's angry, it does sometimes look like that, but overall his signature look has all eyelids connected. ;D  However, that's only the first few... (the drawing was of Narsume Hyuuga from Gakuen Alice.) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted May 26, 2011 My friend attacked my drawing until there was nearly nothing left, and she was being gentle... Tips for perfection might be hard to live up to, but following them can get you higher. That's what I believe. I throw away 80% of my drawings because I can't stand looking at them. But I get better. I don't think my comment was very professional. Lemme post one of my friend's things to my cousin for a drawing: 1) The faces/cheeks/chins are too sharp. In the manga, the facial features appear to be that sharp, but the facial lines do not meet to create triangles. 2) The shape of the heads/faces (particularly Natsume's) are a little disformed. --;; The shape should be symmetrical on the left and right side (not including the face). 3) The hair's lookin' nice! ;D You're really starting to get the hang of making it look soft and flowy. However, as I remember Natsume, his hair is a little longer and flowy. HIs bangs seem to fall in single strand/bunches, and don't all touch at the same place. ;D Great job, though! 4) The shoulders and neck are looking much better, too. However, for Luca's neck especially, the neck is a little too thin - necks don't usually curve/angle in towards the chin! 5) The eyes are a little far apart. In both the anime and the manga (and in real life, for that matter!), the eyes are one eye-length apart from each other. Which also makes making the eyes the right size important! 6) The space between the pupils and the bottom eye lid (Natsume) is a little....well, un-Natsume-ish? When he's angry, it does sometimes look like that, but overall his signature look has all eyelids connected. ;D  However, that's only the first few... (the drawing was of Narsume Hyuuga from Gakuen Alice.) Ok I understood. Maybe we see it a little differently I guess it could be because I don't really mind if it weren't perfect, since art is an expression of oneself(Not that I dont think its important). I just feel that looking at the drawing makes me feel happy and thats all it matters to me Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted May 26, 2011 Ok I understood. Maybe we see it a little differently I guess it could be because I don't really mind if it weren't perfect, since art is an expression of oneself(Not that I dont think its important). I just feel that looking at the drawing makes me feel happy and thats all it matters to me That's good. We all have different perspectives. (and unfortunately my own is somewhat perfectionist... I want to erase that part...) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted May 27, 2011 That's good. We all have different perspectives. (and unfortunately my own is somewhat perfectionist... I want to erase that part...) Did that prompt you to change your member title? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hikari4869 8 Report post Posted May 27, 2011 wow, that's a good picture, I also have drew it about 3 years ago plus Shinichi and Conan, and this picture still sticked on the mirror of my wardrobe in my room he..he.. Iam very like the picture and the story about that chapter. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Akazora 293 Report post Posted May 28, 2011 It's a nice picture. Good job! Be careful with the fingers, but otherwise it's pretty neat. Keep up the good work! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
phantomlady1101 59 Report post Posted June 7, 2011 Ta da, finally, I can upload it!!! Ha ha, hope you like it!!! ^^ Sorry, I'm in hurry so I lost the letter "H" -.-". 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kaRAN 10 Report post Posted June 7, 2011 nice Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
phantomlady1101 59 Report post Posted June 7, 2011 P.S: My first drawing about Conan (oi oi, I always draw Kid), and coloring too!!! Don't mind about cookies (if they make u feel...), because you make me remember about cookies!!! ^^ KKLT, again, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kaRAN 10 Report post Posted June 7, 2011 Belated Happy Birthday KKLT Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
phantomlady1101 59 Report post Posted June 7, 2011 I'm late!!! Of cause I knew that... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted June 7, 2011 XD ADORABLE!!!!! This is wonderful!!! THanks!!! *Gives cookies* NO WAIT DONT CATCH ME!!! XDXDXD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
phantomlady1101 59 Report post Posted June 7, 2011 Ask Conan-kun!!! Not me XD!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted June 7, 2011 Conan kun!!! Your artist asks you not to catch me!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kaRAN 10 Report post Posted June 7, 2011 hehe Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
phantomlady1101 59 Report post Posted June 7, 2011 So, don't eat cookie when you do a mission!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
