hopes 237 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 Whatever age is reasonable. XD ...Did he drive a car? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 Or we make Nero 18? adulthood. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 I'm writing, but stuck.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 Write!! Gogogo!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 Nice!!!! Another betrayal? XD I'm not betraying anyone! I just... I feel I have betrayed you even though I haven't... Am I right? I don't know what will be your opinion about it... AND I changed the Lunam and Laela pic in DA. Laela's clothing has a bit different color... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 I'm not betraying anyone! I just... I feel I have betrayed you even though I haven't... Am I right? I don't know what will be your opinion about it... AND I changed the Lunam and Laela pic in DA. Laela's clothing has a bit different color... I like the drawing. Its awesome Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 I like the drawing. Its awesome thank ya! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 Nice nice nice!!!! But where is pipichan now??? :/ I'm...here? In the story I'm in my room... ------ Name: Jean/IdentityUnknown Age: 16 (A/N: Again, I'm 16 in this story. It may or may not be true IRL) Background: Chinese Nationality: Chinese (green card holder) Hair Color: Dark-brown. May be mistaken as black. Eye Color: Dark brown. Basic Info: Is fairly active, but seemingly lazy at times. Adept at scuba diving. Above average in running speed. Basic skills in technology. Advanced in Math, but does not hold any appreciation for it. Good language, communication, and speaking skills. Seems to frequently take leadership roles. Values friendship more than anything. Loves Mark. IdentityUnknown clenched her teeth as she read through it. She moved past the basic information to the more significant details about her personality and background. She resisted the temptation to rip the papers up and kept on reading. Context: Basic Information Background Personality Habits Strengths Weaknesses Hobbies & Interests Past Experiences Relationships Notes By the time IdentityUnknown had finished it all, she was unsure if she was angry or stunned. Silently, she opened up her computer and the scanner, scanning all of the documents in, and sending them to C for examination and storage. Then, she took the other files BK had taken from the missions section and looked over them. Out of all of the neatly filed documents, there was really only one that interested her. The DCW Mission IdentityUnknown stared at the folder. Perhaps this would be the end to all the mystery. Perhaps it would hold the one answer she wanted to know -- and had been wanting to know ever since she was first kidnapped. Why? ------ Debated and edited, redone and rewritten at least 4 times. I'm glad it's done. I need to get back to writing. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monsi 51 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 (edited) Beautiful. I shall continue. ------ "Is it..." Wildheart began. "No...it couldn't be," Monsi whispered. Lia simply stood there with wide eyes, looking at the sheet apprehensively. "Yup. We'll begin briefing and planning tomorrow." IdentityUnknown put the paper away. "Get some rest. We'll all need it." (A/N: Not sure what you want me to do with the note, WH, so I'm going all out on vagueness) ****** IdentityUnknown followed her own orders and slept, but an hour later her troubled dreams woke her. Disturbing images of all of her friends and family, sprawled on the ground in a pool of blood, had haunted her. No, not all. Three people weren't dead. They were holding guns that had obviously been just fired and smirking. Chelsea. Misaki. Aeyra. Or rather, Rin, Jun, and Nyx. Unable to sleep, she slipped out of her room, double locked it, and walked down to check on KKLT. She was sleeping peacefully and seemed to have recovered and woken up at least once. However, she twitched occasionally and once IdentityUnknown thought she heard her say something. IdentityUnknown went out of KKLT's room and into her own, locking it again. She opened the safe in her bedroom and took out a sheaf of files. She flipped through the folders until she reached the one with her name on it. The name 'IdentityUnknown' had been written on it neatly with faded black marker, then hastily crossed out with a fresher marker and next to it was written 'Jean'. Curious, she opened the file. The first sheet was in pristine condition, typed up neatly and with basic information. She took it out and began to read. ------ Sorry...way too tired...I'll continue this later. And sorry for the double post if that happened. *yawns* I can't seem to think right now. See you guys. After going inside his room, Monsi received a call. *cellphone rings* Hmmm...this number isn't registered. Who could it be? "Hello, who is this?" "Hey, Monsi. It's D." "..." "Oops, sorry about that. The password is "Nandito na ako sa bahay mo sa New York. May mga pabor ka pa bang gustong gawin ko?" (Translation is at the end of this part. ) "Okay, you're D, indeed. I assume that you're already there in my aunt's house in New York, aren't you?" "Yes, and thank you for the experience. Anything else?" "Actually, there is. You know the place where we stayed at after CCCC Hospital?" "Yep. Why?" "Well, I left my laptop there and I... I mean, we badly need it. Can you bring it here?" "No problem. Where are you guys now?" "I'm not sure. Ask C or H." "Got it. Have to go now." "Okay, bye." After that, Monsi thought of the plan and he has second thoughts on it. Do we really have to do it? Is there any other way that won't endanger Misaki, Aeyra, or Chelsea's lives? After those thoughts, he fell asleep. But an hour later, he woke up due to hunger. He decided to go to the kitchen, but he saw IU's room with the light on. He knocked on it and entered. Monsi saw IU reading her files from the org. "Can't sleep, right?", Monsi started the conversation. "Well, I actually had a terrible nightmare and unable to go back to sleep, so I decided to read my files for a while. You?" "I'm just hungry. By the way, can I have my files?" "Sure." Monsi took the folder and went straight to the kitchen. While eating, he opened his folder. Name: Monsi Age: 19 Birthday: August 19, 1992 Status: Not yet recruited Nationality: Filipino (currently holds a working visa) Weight: 90 kilos Height: 5'4" Monsi was an excellent programmer in his company. He can make a program that usually takes a month to finish in just about a week, whatever programming language it is. Because of that, he was taken by the parent company based in New York to work for them. Aside from programming, he's an amateur guitarist that plays songs during a mass during his high school days. Though he doesn't have a good singing voice, he has a perfect pitch. One of the his notable skills is that he can drive almost anything, except trailer trucks because they are the hardest ones to maneuver. Monsi is a member of Detective Conan World (DCW), a website that strives to be the number one Detective Conan resource on the Internet. He joined on August 28, 2009 but wasn't that active due to few active members to interact with. But, recently, he became active again due to a topic with the title "DCW...IRL?", wherein members can write a a story about what would happen if members of DCW meet in real life, provided that the story can actually happen in real life. After reading his files, he thought, "Man, how could they have known so much about me? It's not like I have an online diary." He went back to IU's room and gave her back his files. ----------------------------------- Translation: "Nandito na ako sa bahay mo sa New York. May mga pabor ka pa bang gustong gawin ko?" ==> "I'm now here at your house in New York. Do you have any more favors you want me to do?" I'll be back on Monday. Good night, guys! Edited August 20, 2011 by Monsi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 @PIPICHAN: Dont stop there!!!! >__< XD XD XD I wanna know what happened!!!! >__< I wanna know the reason!!!!!! *thinks* Do I have any skills at all? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 @PIPICHAN: Dont stop there!!!! >__< XD XD XD I wanna know what happened!!!! >__< I wanna know the reason!!!!!! *thinks* Do I have any skills at all? :V I stopped there for a reason, KKLT. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monsi 51 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 (edited) XD XD XD I wanna know what happened!!!! >__< I wanna know the reason!!!!!! Could it be this? Monsi is a member of Detective Conan World (DCW), a website that strives to be the number one Detective Conan resource on the Internet. Edited August 20, 2011 by Monsi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BK201 31 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 Nice work guys! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 GREAT JOB! AWESOME JOB! Pipichan!!!!! You're making my heart itch... >__< Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 I'm gonna write now! I got an amazing idea! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 GO TSUKIKO GO!!! XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 Okay, now I'm gonna continue a bit. But you didn't throw any guesses who was that who were there with me! T.T Anyways I'll put a link to my Lunam and Laela pic. Here. And Lunam is still me. -- -- -- Tsukiko woke up. She had slept well in piano room's sofa(Crispin allowed her to stay there) but yesterday's happening bothered her. Who had been with her? The girl rubbed her eyes when the door opened. Crispin stepped in. "I brought some breakfast to you. It's better that you stay here." "Why?" "No one visits this room and if someone sees you it can cause some questions. After all you are an enemy to us." "Us? To you mean that you don't work for FBI anymore?" "I gave up. I didn't return my reports and here I can be a doctor. And after my colleague died a year ago I 'quited'. But the ppeople in HQ might think I'm dead..." "Colleague? Who?" Tsukiko asked. "Don't care about that. She did her job well and had pretty good life." The man smiled. "Okay." Tsukiko took a sandwich from Crispin and started to eat it. "A-... Didn't you say that no one comes to this room?" "Yes I did." "No-Nothing..." The girl mumbled. She wasn't going to tell anyone that someone had come there. "Well, I'm going now. My patients are waiting. See you again at lunch time." "I have given up." "Sorry?" "I'm not trying to return their memories anymore. I noticed it's not working. And I can't see my other friends either. I betrayed them when I said I'm gonna stay." Tsukiko said quietly. "I understand." When Crispin had left Tsukiko started crying. She was more alone than ever. -- -- -- Bit sad yes... And I don't know that Misaki and Ayera already have their memories. Okay! Let's start! -- -- -- "Knock knock..." Someone knocked to the door. Crispin stepped in. "Uh, you came again..." Tsukiko mumbled. Crispin smiled at her. "I got an idea." The doctor said. "..." "You want to stay here, right?" "And?" "What do you think about joining?" "WHAT?!" "C'mon. It's the best way to keep you safe right now. And you can't stay in this room forever." "...I don't really like about that idea. I don't wanna lose my memories." "You don't have to." Crispin smiled. "Really?" "Yeah, leave it to me." "Okay..." "Hmm... You see that closet next to piano? There is some clothes. You should change yours to others. I hope there is some of your size." "Why?" "Because your clothes belongs to Tsukiko who is an enemy. Now you will be 'Lunam' who is one of us. Besides, there is blood in your clothes." "Oh, okay..." "See you in two hours." Crispin smiled. After he left Tsukiko walked to the closet. She hesitated a bit but opened it. She took a black shirt with 3/4 sleeves, a forest green tunic and black jeans. She changed them on and sat down to wait Crispin. whe he finally came he was grinning widely. "Everything is organized now, Lunam." He said. "Thank you... Iram." Tsukiko said quietly. ~~~ ~~~ ~~~ "Hey, did you already hear?" Nero asked to other members of his team. "We are getting a new member." "Again?" Brise blurted. "I heard she is replacing Aria who disappeared yesterday." Krev stated. Nero gave him an annoyed glare. "What is her name?" Jun asked. "Lunam." Krev answered. Nero glared at him. Krev ignored him and continued: "She is spending her time in piano room right now and Iram had taken care of her." "When will we meet her?" Rin asked. She was curious to know who this mysterious Lunam was. "This evening." Chaos said when he sat down between Nero and Brise. -- -- -- I'm gonna write the part when I will meet them too. But this is enough long for one part. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BK201 31 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 Great job, tsuki! I knOw i pRomiseD i'd write buT soMethIng cAme up a whIle ago and nOw it's 12 in the midniGht and my eyes are getTing heavier so maybe i'll write toMorrow. Sorry guys! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 See ya tomorrow! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 GREAT JOB TSUKI!!! XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 Thank ya! Should I continue it? Or should I wait that someone else continues first? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 If you wanna! XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 Yeah, I do wanna continue(I'm surprised for that) but... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 THEN WRITE!!! GOGOGOGO! Tsukiko! XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 Okay... I just watch OP episode. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
