Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 Nice! I'll write Chaos's introduction. Though it has the chance of getting messy. @KKLT- I write on my iTouch too! Right now actually. ^^ ************ "Your turn, Chaos," called Krev, giving the limelight to him. Krev's introduction had been quite short... Just his name, and his age- 16, same as Chaos. Nero and Brise were a year younger. "This is stupid," muttered Chaos, looking away darkly, looking monstrous with his death glare and snarl. Nero looked at him in dismay- he had noticed his friend flinching when Mark's name was mentioned, and had already harbored previous suspicion. He connected two and two, deciding it would be wise to keep Chaos from talking before he either exploded and strangled everybody or simply exploded and had to have Nero pick up the pieces. "He doesn't want to do it," said Nero, giving Aeyra a warning gaze. The girl nodded softly, knowing she couldn't let Chaos see her pity... She'd have to tell the others as soon as possible though. Chaos was a hard person to understand, and if you didn't, life was a thousand times harder with him around. "Why not?" protested LIA, having thought that Chaos's dark aura was related to nervousness. "It'll be fun!" "This isn't fun!" shouted Chaos, snapping. Nero quickly moved to restrain his friend's arms, holding him back as Chaos's eyes flared like blue fire. "What's with all of you? Treating this like it's some game! You don't get it. This isn't a game, if you lose this battle, you hand over your lives to the winner. You don't know how hard the battle is, you couldn't possibly understand how much it hurts! So why can't all of you just shut up?!" Everybody was frozen, except for Nero, who was dragging Chaos to a secluded corner of the spacious van. "Chaos, let me tell them. You can't expect them to figure out why you got so upset by themselves, can you?" "But I don't want to hear a word about her... I don't want to hear a word about him either." "I could knock you out," suggested Nero helpfully, raising a fist. "You look like you need a lie-down anyway." "Please," replied Chaos. He vaguely felt something crash onto his head, having him drift off into darkness... "Oh my god, Nero!" exclaimed Aeyra, staring at Chaos's slumping form. "What the heck did you just do?" "He said he didn't want me to tell everyone about Laela and Mark unless he was knocked out. He didn't want to hear it. Knocking him out will do him good. He's been having nightmares and I think a good punch lessens the chance of that, seeing he's not really sleeping." "Who's Laela?" asked Pyre curiously. "And what does this have to do with Mark?" Nero cleared his throat. "There used to be a girl in our group named Laela, she was about Chaos's age. They used to be arch nemisises, but then they fell in love with each other after Chaos saved her life. I can't even describe how happy he looked then- it was magical to look at really, two people that fit so perfectly together that it was like they were two adjoining pieces of a puzzle. And then," Nero's wistful voice became flat. "There was the mission." There was an eerie hush- it wasn't too difficult for anyone to guess what happened to Laela. "Laela was killed. But she wasn't killed by the enemy- I believe she was killed by Mark, our leader at the time, for being a traitor. I'm pretty sure Chaos witnessed it, and he- he kind of wants to kill Mark for her. You would understand if you saw him," added Nero hastily, defending the unconscious Chaos. "It was so heartbreaking, seeing him there in the heavy rain, sobbing into her hair, holding her body as if he would die if he loosened his grip. He wouldn't eat anything for a week, he didn't talk, he did almost nothing." "I see now," murmured LIA, frowning. "I'm going to apologize once he wakes up." "Don't," warned Nero. "Pity only makes him angrier. Chaos is like a sleeping dragon- harmless unless you poke it. And pity is the equivalent of poking. Same goes for any mention of Laela or Mark. Unless he's in a good mood, or if he's talking to me. Any questions?" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 Nice! ^^ It's great! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 Nice! I'll write Chaos's introduction. Though it has the chance of getting messy. @KKLT- I write on my iTouch too! Right now actually. ^^ ************ "Your turn, Chaos," called Krev, giving the limelight to him. Krev's introduction had been quite short... Just his name, and his age- 16, same as Chaos. Nero and Brise were a year younger. "This is stupid," muttered Chaos, looking away darkly, looking monstrous with his death glare and snarl. Nero looked at him in dismay- he had noticed his friend flinching when Mark's name was mentioned, and had already harbored previous suspicion. He connected two and two, deciding it would be wise to keep Chaos from talking before he either exploded and strangled everybody or simply exploded and had to have Nero pick up the pieces. "He doesn't want to do it," said Nero, giving Aeyra a warning gaze. The girl nodded softly, knowing she couldn't let Chaos see her pity... She'd have to tell the others as soon as possible though. Chaos was a hard person to understand, and if you didn't, life was a thousand times harder with him around. "Why not?" protested LIA, having thought that Chaos's dark aura was related to nervousness. "It'll be fun!" "This isn't fun!" shouted Chaos, snapping. Nero quickly moved to restrain his friend's arms, holding him back as Chaos's eyes flared like blue fire. "What's with all of you? Treating this like it's some game! You don't get it. This isn't a game, if you lose this battle, you hand over your lives to the winner. You don't know how hard the battle is, you couldn't possibly understand how much it hurts! So why can't all of you just shut up?!" Everybody was frozen, except for Nero, who was dragging Chaos to a secluded corner of the spacious van. "Chaos, let me tell them. You can't expect them to figure out why you got so upset by themselves, can you?" "But I don't want to hear a word about her... I don't want to hear a word about him either." "I could knock you out," suggested Nero helpfully, raising a fist. "You look like you need a lie-down anyway." "Please," replied Chaos. He vaguely felt something crash onto his head, having him drift off into darkness... "Oh my god, Nero!" exclaimed Aeyra, staring at Chaos's slumping form. "What the heck did you just do?" "He said he didn't want me to tell everyone about Laela and Mark unless he was knocked out. He didn't want to hear it. Knocking him out will do him good. He's been having nightmares and I think a good punch lessens the chance of that, seeing he's not really sleeping." "Who's Laela?" asked Pyre curiously. "And what does this have to do with Mark?" Nero cleared his throat. "There used to be a girl in our group named Laela, she was about Chaos's age. They used to be arch nemisises, but then they fell in love with each other after Chaos saved her life. I can't even describe how happy he looked then- it was magical to look at really, two people that fit so perfectly together that it was like they were two adjoining pieces of a puzzle. And then," Nero's wistful voice became flat. "There was the mission." There was an eerie hush- it wasn't too difficult for anyone to guess what happened to Laela. "Laela was killed. But she wasn't killed by the enemy- I believe she was killed by Mark, our leader at the time, for being a traitor. I'm pretty sure Chaos witnessed it, and he- he kind of wants to kill Mark for her. You would understand if you saw him," added Nero hastily, defending the unconscious Chaos. "It was so heartbreaking, seeing him there in the heavy rain, sobbing into her hair, holding her body as if he would die if he loosened his grip. He wouldn't eat anything for a week, he didn't talk, he did almost nothing." "I see now," murmured LIA, frowning. "I'm going to apologize once he wakes up." "Don't," warned Nero. "Pity only makes him angrier. Chaos is like a sleeping dragon- harmless unless you poke it. And pity is the equivalent of poking. Same goes for any mention of Laela or Mark. Unless he's in a good mood, or if he's talking to me. Any questions?" I see! XDDDDD I was lying on my bed typing. Else... usually I don't like typing on iphone... >__< I keep missing the keys... and the italics... and stuff... and.. AWESOME! XDDDDDDDDDD I don't know why but I started laughing when Nero punched him out I know its wrong to laugh but... It was so sudden and the reaction was... unexpected. to me. ... ROFL. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 Grrr.. I'll have to go now... iPhone out of battery. Reply you later. Oh, you're on your iPhone. That's understandable, then. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 Oh, you're on your iPhone. That's understandable, then. Eh? Explain? >__< *confused* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 IdentityUnknown was quiet. She had forgotten that Mark had had a life in the Organization and had done work there. She shouldn't have been too surprised that he had done something like this, though she couldn't help feeling...off. "Alright, enough," she said, standing up, preventing her group from getting too hyped up about the former Organization members. "We need rest and need to move out. So go. Now. Sleep. I want 2-3 people on guard, switch every 2 hours. For tonight, let Chaos get his rest. There's no need to mention any of this to him." Everybody settled down and nodded. IdentityUnknown took first watch, insisting that the others needed more rest than her. Aeyra quickly stood up, saying she'd join her. IdentityUnknown nodded and hustled everyone else off to bed. ------ Brief, but we need to start a new day somehow. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 IdentityUnknown was quiet. She had forgotten that Mark had had a life in the Organization and had done work there. She shouldn't have been too surprised that he had done something like this, though she couldn't help feeling...off. "Alright, enough," she said, standing up, preventing her group from getting too hyped up about the former Organization members. "We need rest and need to move out. So go. Now. Sleep. I want 2-3 people on guard, switch every 2 hours. For tonight, let Chaos get his rest. There's no need to mention any of this to him." Everybody settled down and nodded. IdentityUnknown took first watch, insisting that the others needed more rest than her. Aeyra quickly stood up, saying she'd join her. IdentityUnknown nodded and hustled everyone else off to bed. ------ Brief, but we need to start a new day somehow. You're right... We need some sleep... Especially after going through some ordeal... XD Nice! XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 I see! XDDDDD I was lying on my bed typing. Else... usually I don't like typing on iphone... >__< I keep missing the keys... and the italics... and stuff... and.. AWESOME! XDDDDDDDDDD I don't know why but I started laughing when Nero punched him out I know its wrong to laugh but... It was so sudden and the reaction was... unexpected. to me. ... ROFL. I've obviously been reading too much of the Draco Trilogy... About 350 pages a night... Draco and Harry seem to have that kind of relationship (and it's not a Drarry fic! It's HarMione, but I swear it's an amazing story nonetheless)... And I unconsciously inserted it. And about the iTouch thing... My best writing comes from when I'm typing on my iTouch while lying on the bed. I can't multi-task or start playing games as easily as with a computer so I get through it easier. :3 Spend enough time typing and you'll never miss a key. It'll just be instinct. XD @Pyre- Nice! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 I've obviously been reading too much of the Draco Trilogy... About 350 pages a night... Draco and Harry seem to have that kind of relationship (and it's not a Drarry fic! It's HarMione, but I swear it's an amazing story nonetheless)... And I unconsciously inserted it. And about the iTouch thing... My best writing comes from when I'm typing on my iTouch while lying on the bed. I can't multi-task or start playing games as easily as with a computer so I get through it easier. :3 Spend enough time typing and you'll never miss a key. It'll just be instinct. XD @Pyre- Nice! XD the thing is, I type faster on the keyboard. Not so used to typing without the "feel" on my fingers and the keypad on iphone is small! XD I still prefer computer keyboard. XDDDDDDDD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 XD the thing is, I type faster on the keyboard. Not so used to typing without the "feel" on my fingers and the keypad on iphone is small! XD I still prefer computer keyboard. XDDDDDDDD I type slower on the itouch but it feels deeper... Like I can't concentrate with a computer. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 I type slower on the itouch but it feels deeper... Like I can't concentrate with a computer. I see Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 "I have had a vision." The eldest man was sitting cross-legged on a simple mat on the floor. Ares and the other man walked in the room. "And what is that...vision?" Ares inquired. The eldest man took a deep breath, then said, ominous shadow hanging over each word, "The shinagami will rise again." "That is impossible! He is dead!" "Or perhaps...that is what he wants you to think." This remark immediately shut up Ares. "If he," placing disgust on the pronoun, "returns to fight us again...there will be major consequences on our side. We cannot afford this." "Then what should we do?" the other man spoke. "Of course, we will place a tail on the DCW members. As for him..." the man paused and thought for a moment. Then he spoke. "Mark will find him. We simply need to find him, and follow him." "That...may prove harder than expected. He escaped our organization, he won't be sloppy as to get himself followed." "We know this. What we need to do is..." Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 Nice! XDXDXD It's awesome! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDD Wait... Shinagami? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 I thought it was shinigami. That's how it's spelled in Death Note. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDD Wait... Shinagami? XDXD @KKLT's expression. Nice job, Mark. *has one more thing to consider now* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 What? Why don't I get this at all?!?!? O.o And hi!! I'm back! For longer this time! xP Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 XDXD @KKLT's expression. Nice job, Mark. *has one more thing to consider now* I thought I read Shinigami... but then I reread and saw shinagami. What? Why don't I get this at all?!?!? O.o And hi!! I'm back! For longer this time! xP XDDDDD Neither do I XDDDDDDD JUST PRETEND YOU DO! XDDDDD YAY! WH-CHAN! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 (edited) Oh. Okay... Mark, you're confusing us with your story..... But...okay...*pretends to understand* :V And I know what a shinigami is....If u want a (brief) explination...xP Edit Ahhhh sry sry sry this wasn't supposed to post!!!!!! DDDDx Edited August 23, 2011 by Wildheart888 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 Oh. Okay... Mark, you're confusing us with your story..... But...okay...*pretends to understand* :V And I know what a shinigami is....If u want a (brief) explination...xP And Hiiiiiiii KKLT-chan!!!!! xDDDDD Aaaand...I'm on my iPod...xP Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 Oh. Okay... Mark, you're confusing us with your story..... But...okay...*pretends to understand* :V And I know what a shinigami is....If u want a (brief) explination...xP I'm not confused. I'm intrigued. :V Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 Oh. Okay... Mark, you're confusing us with your story..... But...okay...*pretends to understand* :V And I know what a shinigami is....If u want a (brief) explination...xP And Hiiiiiiii KKLT-chan!!!!! xDDDDD Aaaand...I'm on my iPod...xP I know what is a shinigami. Do you know what is a shinagami? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 I know what is a shinigami. Do you know what is a shinagami? The misspelled version of shinigami? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 (edited) I THINK so.....it's like a death god or something like that right? O.o Or it's a person who helps the dead pass on。 EDIT: facepalm. I read ur post wrong kklt chan!!! DDDx sryyyy! No I don't. xP Edited August 23, 2011 by Wildheart888 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted August 23, 2011 The misspelled version of shinigami? :V I only want to know what that man was going to say... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites