Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 Thanks. You're welcome~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 BTW, I'm making places up. I'm not taking the time to research here. **********"Krev, you okay?" murmured Brise, squeezing the older boy's hand with adoring concern in her frown. "I'm fine. Just... surprised, that's all. I always knew I got into that Organization somehow, just needed to figure out exactly how," he replied casually, keeping all emotion out of his voice. John ignored them, continuing onto his next story. "Brise, Brise, Brise, how about you next?" She opened her mouth to protest, but he paid her no heed. "You were an orphan at an orphanage the Organization raided. Maria's Orphanage for Young Children in Colorado. Denver. Would you recall the names Mrs. Penfer and Ms. Byer?" "Doesn't ring a bell. I don't remember an orphanage at all," answered Brise, eyes shut, squeezing Krev's hand tight as she tried to remember. She'd always been imagining her past, glorious princess-like visions, of course, once she'd reached fourteen, she'd given them up, but an orphanage was still a bit dull. So dull apparently, that she couldn't conjure a single memory. "I figured that would be the case. The memory flash was much more effective once they got to you- and it's been so long, there's probably nothing left that's salvageable." John shrugged it off as if he were telling someone the time. "Oh well, come tell me if there's anything you remember." Brise nodded nervously, cringing in Krev's protective shadow. "Next up, Chaos." "I don't really get the point if we won't remember anything anyways," snarled Chaos, uttering the first word he had in days, his voice soft and raspy. "Don't bother telling me." "Don't be silly, Chaos!" John gave a grin that annoyed Chaos to the very core. "We won't leave you out of the festivities." Chaos opened his mouth to speak- most likely growl- but Nero stopped him, whispering something like 'just let him say what he wants to say', making Chaos clamp his jaws together reluctantly. "The Organization has an eye on every child in the nation- any child they can steal without raising too much suspicion and has enough skill to be useful is a potential target. You went to a public school in Georgia, and-" Even John cringed. "They kidnapped you. But, you won't be able to see your parents. They were murdered." "Knew it," muttered Chaos, as vapidly as stone. "Pointless, just as I said." "Nero, you know I don't have to tell you your story. It was never wiped from your memory- it's always been there, hasn't it?" Nero shifted uncomfortably, fear shining bright in his eyes. "Most people would have seen you as crazy and locked you away forever, but they took you in. As an heir no less." "Please, stop talking," said Nero, putting his hands over his ears. "I've tried so hard to keep it from coming back, don't make it come back now!" "Well, I guess that is a story you'll have to tell people yourself, isn't it?" Nero gave the man a death glare. "You have to let it out sometime. Better out than in." ************ I'm still trying to figure out Nero's past (specific details), so nobody write it in, okay? He's probably not going to tell us yet, and it's pretty private. He joined the Organization at a much younger age, around five. But I'll reveal details later when I think of them... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 OMG!!!! CLIFFHANGER!!! WHO IS NERO?!!!!!!!!?!?!?!?!?! O______O GREAT JOB AS USUAL Aya chan!!!!!!!!!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sayomi 17 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 *feels slightly OOC* I call Tsukiko...Tsukiko. :V I wouldn't hug Mark under such circumstances since in the story everything is at a different pace. I wouldn't directly ask Mark about Tsukiko with her standing next to me. I'd most likely go in alone. I wouldn't call Tsukiko suspicious right there. I would've either told her to go ahead or I would've asked Mark in private some time later. And...(this might be my neglect) was Tsukiko investigating and how did I know? Not in the mood to murder. :V Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry (x infinity) :( :( :( :( :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry (x infinity) :( :( :( :( :( *does super junior dance* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 I just watched the newest DC episode. The opening was awesome!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 I just watched the newest DC episode. The opening was awesome!!! LOL, off-topic much? XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 Yeah, maybe but I just wanted to say it immediately so... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 WOOO~!!! GO IU-CHAN!! GO AEYRA-CHAN~!!! xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 Yeah, maybe but I just wanted to say it immediately so... I know what you mean. ^^ I've watched the new opening (or at least listened to it) at least 100 times already, no exaggeration. The auto-reply google app for youtube is a wonderful thing. WOOO~!!! GO IU-CHAN!! GO AEYRA-CHAN~!!! xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Thanks! ^^ Would you like to continue? Nero's not blabbing for a while, at least, not to us. Just advance us to the night if you will. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 Hmm..alright..so..John has nothing else to tell us..? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 I'm totally out of ideas so I'm not writing yet... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 Hmm..alright..so..John has nothing else to tell us..? He could help us formulate a plan, or at least show us where we'll be living. I've slept inside buses before, and to be honest, I hate sleeping on buses. They're so darn uncomfortable. I want a room. A room with a big fluffy bed, blankets, and a place to charge my itouch and cell phone before they die. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 I'm way too lazy to re-read. Anyone wanna tell me the situation? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 I'm way too lazy to re-read. Anyone wanna tell me the situation? Ask someone who's not too lazy to give you a re-cap. It'd be better if you read, after all, I did spend a good amount time writing my parts.... LOL. XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 Awesome job kaichou and Aeyra! XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 LOL. Alright. How bout this then.... -------------------------------------------------- Nero shifted uncomfortably from foot to foot. "Umm...ahh...I..." "Come on," John coaxed. "Let it out...it'll be better than holding it all in.." "But.....ah....." Nero stuttered. "I...don't really...want to..." Wildheart looked at Nero, concerned. She had never seen him like this. John sighed. "How 'bout this." He said, smiling to himself. "If you tell us, we'll give you a coffee machine to put in your room.." Nero looked up at the mention of coffee. He took a big breath, before slowly letting it out. "I don't want to." He said plainly. "Not now, anyways." You can imagine the surprise on everyone's face. We all turned to each other, bewildered. He has turned down a coffee machine?? A. COFFEE. MACHINE??? "Now, if you'll excuse me..." Nero started. "Wh-why, of course..." It was John's turn to stutter. He was taken aback. What had happened to Nero? The thought was on everyone's mind. Nero turned and started off to the door. "Can you please tell me where my room is?" He asked quietly. "Ye-yes..It's up the stairs on the first door to your left...." He said. "Thank you." Nero said briskly before exiting the room. The group was silent for at least a minute, before John spoke. "Well.." He was trying to sound happy. "That was...unexpected." Murmurs of agreement echoed throughout the visitors. "It is getting late, isn't it?" He said, changing the topic while looking at his watch. "How about you guys go to bed and we'll disscuss this tomorrow morning, after a good night's sleep?" "Okay.." "Sure.." "Umm-hhmm.." "Sarah!" He called, and the assistant came forward. "I will be taking you to your rooms." She said, leading us out the room. ---------------------------------------- "You guys," She said, pointing to Krev and Chaos, "Will be in the room Nero is in." She said, turning to the first room, labled 201. "Good night!" She said as they entered. Wildheart caught a glimpse of Nero, sitting in the corner of his bed. "Now you guys, over here" She said, leading them to the room across. "Have a good night's sleep, you guys!" She said, before closing the door on the room IdentityUnknown, KKLT, Aeyra, Tsukiko, and Sayomi occupied. 202. "Shannon, and Brise" She said to them, "You guys have a room to yourself. Room 203." She pointed to the room adjacent to Nero's. "Lastly, you guys," She gestured to Wildheart, Akakata, Misaki, Lia, and BK. "This room." She nodded to room 204, opposite 203. "Good night~!: ---------------------------------------------------- "Whoa~!!" Akakata awed as soon as they entered the room. There were five beds, with fluffy pillows, soft blankets, and the comfy mattress. In a corner, a door lay waiting to be opened. "I wonder..." Misaki-chan said, with a smile on her face. She opened the door. A bathroom, with a clean bathtub, toilets, and a glass sink with a shining mirror. "Finally!!!" She cheered. "A real room~!!!!" Lia turned on the TV. It was hung on the wall, above a cabinet. A big sofa sat opposite the TV. BK jumped on it. "Haha, this is awesome~!!!" Wildheart sighed happily. Is this a dream? She thought, as she breathed in the fresh scent of the air. She put her iPod on the charger, took a hot shower, and lay on the bed. "Well," She said to her friends before turning out the lights and drifting off to dreamland, "Let's look forward to tomorrow after all." -------------------------------------------------- How was it? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 ....... We;re at the FBI headquarters. Why are there really nice bedrooms? And also, when did Sarah speak Japanese? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 I think there's enough room for us to be split up into pairs. And Brise... well... she's a girl, and no matter how much we trust those three guys, it just isn't proper to leave a fifteen year old girl with a bunch of teenage boys. I'll write. ********************* Nero fidgeted restlessly on his bed, pressing the buttons of his DS at lightning speed as he played Call of Duty, trying to fight back the demons that threatened to break him open. Damn that man... After managing to forget it for all these years... The feeling of something warm, wet and sticky covering his fingers, the scent of rust filling his nostrils, that foggy red haze obscuring his vision as fear racked his mind, his body, paralyzing him. He could still remember it, he had never truly forgotten. He'd only trapped it, kept it where it couldn't be seen, but now it was starting to exit the darkness. Screams, not his own, but of- them. And then those people, those people who had tried to storm him, the fury, the moment where he lost all control and became nothing more than a wild feral animal, lashing out, and- Nero shivered, clutching his sides as if to keep himself whole. He didn't want to remember, he didn't want to remember it just as much as he knew Chaos wanted Laela to be alive. That memory was the bane of his existence, the thing that stalked his footsteps, threatening to pull him under, knotting his stomach with tight, tight knots. Why did he have to bring it up? Why, why, why, why? ******************** Yep, I've already decided what happened to Nero. But I'm only giving hints. However, I tell you know, if I redrew Nero right now, there would be a whole lot of blood in the drawing.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 Nice job Aeyra! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 Ahhh....sorry sorry sorrryyyyy~!!!! I'll fix that... But it was Aeyra-chan who suggested the nice bedrooms........well maybe I'll make it a bit...un-nice-er.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 Ahhh....sorry sorry sorrryyyyy~!!!! I'll fix that... But it was Aeyra-chan who suggested the nice bedrooms........well maybe I'll make it a bit...un-nice-er.... Yeah, I simply meant nice. I was envisioning my own bedroom... Bed, makeshift night table, iHome, mirror, closet... iTouch. XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 LOL. Okay, then. xS Sorry... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 LOL. Okay, then. xS Sorry... It's fine. Your vision isn't bad at all! XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted August 30, 2011 Thanks.... LOL. Alright. How bout this then....-------------------------------------------------- Nero shifted uncomfortably from foot to foot. "Umm...ahh...I..." "Come on," John coaxed. "Let it out...it'll be better than holding it all in.." "But.....ah....." Nero stuttered. "I...don't really...want to..." Wildheart looked at Nero, concerned. She had never seen him like this. John sighed. "How 'bout this." He said, smiling to himself. "If you tell us, we'll give you a coffee machine to put in your room.." Nero looked up at the mention of coffee. He took a big breath, before slowly letting it out. "I don't want to." He said plainly. "Not now, anyways." You can imagine the surprise on everyone's face. We all turned to each other, bewildered. He has turned down a coffee machine?? A. COFFEE. MACHINE??? "Now, if you'll excuse me..." Nero started. "Wh-why, of course..." It was John's turn to stutter. He was taken aback. What had happened to Nero? The thought was on everyone's mind. Nero turned and started off to the door. "Can you please tell me where my room is?" He asked quietly. "Ye-yes..It's up the stairs on the first door to your left...." He said. "Thank you." Nero said briskly before exiting the room. The group was silent for at least a minute, before John spoke. "Well.." He was trying to sound happy. "That was...unexpected." Murmurs of agreement echoed throughout the visitors. "It is getting late, isn't it?" He said, changing the topic while looking at his watch. "How about you guys go to bed and we'll disscuss this tomorrow morning, after a good night's sleep?" "Okay.." "Sure.." "Umm-hhmm.." "Sarah!" He called, and the assistant came forward. "I will be taking you to your rooms." She said, leading us out the room. ---------------------------------------- "You guys," She said, pointing to Krev and Chaos, "Will be in the room Nero is in." She said, turning to the first room, labled 201. "Good night!" She said as they entered. Wildheart caught a glimpse of Nero, sitting in the corner of his bed. "Now you guys, over here" She said, leading them to the room across. "Have a good night's sleep, you guys!" She said, before closing the door on the room IdentityUnknown, KKLT, Aeyra, Tsukiko, and Sayomi occupied. 202. "Shannon, and Brise" She said to them, "You guys have a room to yourself. Room 203." She pointed to the room adjacent to Nero's. "Lastly, you guys," She gestured to Wildheart, Akakata, Misaki, Lia, and BK. "This room." She nodded to room 204, opposite 203. "Good night~!: ---------------------------------------------------- "Whoa~!!" Akakata awed as soon as they entered the room. There were five beds, with fluffy pillows, soft blankets, and the comfy mattress. In a corner, a door lay waiting to be opened. "I wonder..." Misaki-chan said, with a smile on her face. She opened the door. A bathroom, with a clean bathtub, toilets, and a glass sink with a shining mirror. "Finally!!!" She cheered. "A real room~!!!!" Lia turned on the TV. It was hung on the wall, above a cabinet. A big sofa sat opposite the TV. BK jumped on it. "Haha, this is awesome~!!!" Wildheart sighed happily. Is this a dream? She thought, as she breathed in the fresh scent of the air. She put her iPod on the charger, took a hot shower, and lay on the bed. "Well," She said to her friends before turning out the lights and drifting off to dreamland, "Let's look forward to tomorrow after all." -------------------------------------------------- How was it? There. Edited. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
