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Tsukiko    73

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I'll write a bit now. So, anyone can't complain that I'm not following a plot... or writing parts that doesn't fit with others' writings.

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Tsukiko    73

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"We can't just stay here!" Chelsea shouted.

"Shh, we are still in a library." LIA whispered.

"Who cares? Our friends are going to New Jersey and might be in danger there."

"Well, I kind of agree. There is no use of staying here..." Monsi admitted. "If we go now we can catch the next train..."

"Let's go then..." Tsukiko said. She didn't feel like staying in New York anymore.

------

They ran to the railway station and dashed to the first train to NJ.

"We made it. I can't wait of seeing Pyre's face when she sees us." Chelsea grinned.

"Have you thought that they might be in this same train?" LIA asked.

"Good idea. Let's go and find them!" Chelsea jumped up on her seat and dragged other three with her.

-- -- --

Well, I have to go to lessons now. See ya ltr.

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Aeyra    260

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This counts as a flashback, right? I guess I'll edit my previous part later to help this fit in better. :) But dont expect it to happen until I finish school today. XD

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Tsukiko    73

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Everyone! Don't read this! This part is not following the plot but is connected with my previous parts! You can read this if you want to but don't blame me if you'll get confused! I've warned you now!

Well, I'll continue now.

-- -- --

"Well, we are now in the half way of this train. If we go in two groups we'll find others faster." Chelsea said. "I'll go with LIA so Monsi can take care of Tsuki."

"Take care?" Tsukiko and Monsi asked in unision.

"Yeah, if you faint again someone has to be able to catch you that you don't hurt yourself." Chelsea explained like it would have been an obvious thing. "And Monsi is the oldest and strongest of us. Well, I'm not sure about the lastest one but it should be so since he is a boy."

"Fine, then. Let's go." Tsukiko mumbled.

"See you after a half of hour." Chelsea smiled and dragged LIA with her.

"See ya!" LIA smiled before they vanished behind a door that separated the train wards.

"What's with that face?" Monsi asked when Tsukiko glared angrily to the way Chelsea and LIA had gone.

"It's just annoying... It's annoying when others takes care of me when it's not necessary."

"Well, you have changed a lot since I met you at the first time." Monsi smiled. They started to walk to other direction than Chelsea and LIA had gone.

"You know that sounds like a phrase from shoujo-manga."

"Really?"

"Yeah..." Tsukiko mumbled. "And don't worry I'm not gonna faint. Flashbacks are mostly coming when I'm sleeping but when something comes and makes me remember something they'll come too."

"Huh? How do you know that? If I understood right you have had only couple of those... 'flashbacks' you say... How you can already say when they are coming?"

"I like to observe things... and I have pretty good imagination too. So when I have an idea what it might be I'll start to think about it and make it more clear... So, the things I just said about these flashbacks are only assumptions but it's possible that they are true." The girl smiled. Monsi grinned.

"That's the face that had been missing for a days." He said and made Tsukiko blush.

"If you keep saying things like that someone will think that..."

"Think about what? That we are together?"

"..."

"In one point of view we are. We are walking together in order to find our friend from this train. We are also walking together on a path with our friends in order to put an end to this fight against that organization."

"Yeah... Whatever, I wanna find others soon or not find them that I can go back to my seat and sleep a bit."

"And get another flashback?"

"Shut up! I'm just tired."

"But that's true, right?"

"Yeah, I wanna know more about this girl who I've seen in these flashbacks. Those flashes scare me but they also interest me so..."

"You are weird."

"And so are you. Everyone is weird, in one way or an other."

-- -- --

Well, you are welcome. I hope that someone else will write now. And if you are thinking about TsukiXMonsi pairing, forget it. Just for your information.

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Tsukiko    73

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Well, we are going back to NJ to save Mark from his upcoming execution. You could write when Chalsea and LIA or me and Monsi find you.

But I think I'll take care of my flashbacks... I have an idea how and when they are coming.

But you can give some ideas.

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Aeyra    260

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Sorry, but now I'm completely confused. Right now Nero and Chaos are breaking into the jail where Mark is supposedly being held, and we're all watching them on a screen from bugs Nero planted on himself. I'm pretty sure Chelsea was with us then, and therefore you all are. I simply can't change all of my entries that much, Tsukiko. I was planning to just take a few names out and replace them, but now this is straying a bit too far. The flashbacks aren't really too necessary... What's important is discovering Mark's death and the message he left behind. And earlier when you said nobody can challenge you, I felt that was slightly rude. We're just trying to help you write a piece that fits in better with the others. All of the entries that came before were laid in stone, and you shouldn't be knocking them down. Read them carefully, if you're confused, ask what's happened, and try to make your storyline fit in. For example, you could have edited your library scene to make it on the train. I don't mind your flashbacks, I'm just hoping you're not going to have Chaos fall in love with you or vice versa. Chaos is the kind of guy who can only love one person their entire life. As that probably was not your intention, I'm sorry if that insulted you, but I wanted to tell you to try to make your additions match up with the rest of the story, because lately, they feel out of place. :(

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Akechi    1

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Reading the first few pages and the last few pages, it seems that this would be a lot of fun to follow. Since it's a bit difficult reading over 100 pages with more than a few off-topic posts, would any of you be oh-so-kind enough to briefly summarize the plot of this story so far, :D?

I'm beyond impressed with all your collective writing skills and ability to cooperate already, though, :o. Pretty much every other RP I've seen online seems to have had a completely incoherent plotline with its characters and such a jumbled mess.

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Aeyra    260

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Reading the first few pages and the last few pages, it seems that this would be a lot of fun to follow. Since it's a bit difficult reading over 100 pages with more than a few off-topic posts, would any of you be oh-so-kind enough to briefly summarize the plot of this story so far, :D?

I'm beyond impressed with all your collective writing skills and ability to cooperate already, though, :o. Pretty much every other RP I've seen online seems to have had a completely incoherent plotline with its characters and such a jumbled mess.

Okay, it goes like this. We all met up in New Jersey with innocent intentions. (excluding Mark.) The events that happened before Mark came in and decided to destroy us are kind of blurry, and besides, they're not important. Mark came in with the intention to kill us, I forgot why, but he attempted to murder all of us multiple times, we escaped, met up with everyone else, Mark saved me and Chelsea while our plane crashed on the way to Canada, and everyone else wasn't on the plane, they were on a van or something of the sort. In Canada, we had epic battles, we believed Mark dead, and so on, so on, blah, blah, blah, most important things you need to know now are the newest characters, Chaos, Nero, Brise, and Krev, Organization members who've joined us, Chaos has a girl he loved named Laela, but she was killed by Mark. Nero has a hidden secret he's never told anybody, but it's really dark. (I'm planning on revealing that... tonight.) Brise and Krev like each other, but are too shy to try and date in case it hurts Chaos. Right now, Mark has been executed, but we don't know that for certain. We're going to 'rescue him', and Chaos and Nero are doing the rescue because Nero literally forced us to stay behind or run to our deaths. dry.gif Nero... sigh, what are we going to do with you? XD (BTW, Nero loves coffee, loves it, loves it, loves it.)

If you're planning to add yourself in, here's a method you could use. Nero is recruiting teenage Organization members from over the world, so if you're one of them, we could meet you somewhere. Just use the name Akechi and you're set! But wait for a good moment, or tell someone and they can write you in. ^^

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Aeyra    260

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*****

"Nero, was it really the best choice to just run off and leave them like that?" asked Chaos dubiously, matching his sprinting friend stride for stride. "They'll be pissed as hell when we get back."

"Doesn't matter, I'm the one who knows how to use that credit card correctly. Therefore, if they are pissed with me, I shall simply refuse to help, and use all the money to buy Starbucks. You hear that?" snickered Nero right into the bug, causing everyone on the other end to either roll their eyes or glare. Glaring seemed to be the popular option.

"Sometimes I wonder if he's just trying to annoy us," muttered Misaki, grumbling under her breath. She liked Nero fine, but he was starting to get a bit too bold and daring. Nope, the funny, whiny, overly dramatic, happy-happy Nero was more to her preference. It was like he had taken over in less than a week.

"He's just trying to lighten the atmosphere... I think," said Aeyra unconvincingly, drawing a small chuckle from Chelsea. "I wish he'd worn an earpiece though.. So we could talk to them."

"I'm guessing he didn't want to listen to our complaints," sighed Pyre, who was tense waiting for the news on Mark. "He'd just turn the stupid thing off."

"Perhaps..." said Tsukiko, peering over Chelsea's shoulder to watch the prison appear closer and closet on the iTouch screen as Nero approached. "He must be pretty desperate to go alone with Chaos though... Why else would he voluntarily use bugs? They're like an invasion of privacy."

"He could turn them off if he wanted to though," noted Aeyra, recalling Nero's words. "He said he can disarm them at will." As if at her command, the screen suddenly went black and everything was silent. "Please tell me all that happened was that he disarmed them."

******

Luckily for everyone, that was the case. Nero's true intentions of bringing out Chaos was to share the secret he'd hidden for ten years, a memory that threatened to explode within him. It was just about impossible to find time alone to talk to his best friend- and even then the chance of being overheard was tremendous. And as for disabling the bugs- who ever said Nero would play fair.

"Nero, did you just turn off the camera and mike?" asked Chaos curiously, neither mad nor happy.

"Yup."

"Why?" Chaos's blue eyes shone with concern. Everything Nero did had a reason- and there was something simply burning behind all that verdant emerald green.

"I wanted to tell you. My past. Ever since John brought it up, I couldn't help but remember it, all that blood, the knife, the guns, the everything." Nero felt tears at the corners of his eyes. I will not cry... he told himself strongly. He blinked hard, clearing his vision of the mist.

"Take as much time as you need, buddy. You asked me out here because I'm your best friend and you know I don't give a damn about rescuing Mark, right?" Chaos gave Nero a comforting smile. Nero was there for all his breakdowns, a solid pillar to lean against. He going to be Nero's pillar asking as the younger boy needed him.

"Well, I've manages to figure out finer details over the years, but here's the deal. I was born to a wealthy family, and my parents were world-class scientists in the fields of weaponry, and essentially physics as well. Apparently, I showed great talent for developing weapons at a very young age, I was also adept at planning, had a very high intelligence, and what was best for the Organization, so, so young." Nero shook as they approached the jail, the memory of blood's rusty scent, the screams, the dark men who charged into his house. "It was just after my parents had tucked me in- I was about to fall asleep when I heard my mother scream, and my father's yell, and the tumult of pained screeching that came after. They were shooting my parents, Chaos. They were torturing them for fun."

Chaos pulled Nero behind a few bushes, hiding themselves from sight. He patted his friend awkwardly on the head, a gesture for him to know he was still there as Nero told his story.

"I got out of bed and headed for the first floor, and in the kitchen were the bodies of my mother and father, both so mauled, mangled, and bloody that I could hardly recognize them. There were men jeering at their corpses, men in black with masks over their faces, sneering as they faced me. Even then, I knew immediately that they had killed my parents. And at five years old, I felt the need to vengeance. And.... I massacred them.

"There was a knife in my father's hand, and I picked it up as one of the men tried to grab me. I stabbed him in the arm, the leg, the stomach, everywhere I could reach, and he keeled over, dying. I could feel that sticky, warm, blood all over mr, my father's blood on the knife handle, the blood splattered all over my body when it spurted out from the man I'd murdered. They were all so horrified. But I didn't stop there. I didn't stop there." Nero saw that red haze covering his eyes all over again, that crimson shroud of hate that told him to kill, to kill, to kill. "I stabbed every last one of them to death. My white pajamas were soaked in red, the tiles didn't have a single spot where blood didn't cover it, the floor was sticky and warm, and I just stood there, looking at what I'd done.

"Then I just broke down and cried, collapsing into that puddle of blood next to my parents, holding their hands until I fell asleep, and when I woke up the next morning, I was at the Organization HQ. I didn't learn until later they sent the people to kill mom and dad. They praised me, and I thrived on the things they taught me. I was just a five year old kid. But I was, and am, a monster, Chaos. I see it in my dreams all the time, holding that knife, every last one of you bleeding out in front me, I see my parents, eyes cold with death, their blood on my hands, and I hardly even sleep just so I don't have to see it." Nero was crying now, holding Chaos's collar, and sobbing into his friend's shoulder. "Chaos, what do I do?"

"I don't know, Nero, but I'm glad you told me. You needed that out of your system," assured Chaps gently, holding still as his friend's trembling rocked through his body. "It's going to be fine. You're not a monster, you just wanted revenge, like I want revenge for Laela. Don't be ashamed, Nero, and don't be afraid."

"But I can't help being afraid," whispered Nero, fingers clenching into a fist. "How could I?"

"Accept it, let your friends help you." Chaos's eyes shone with his own experiences in grief, and Nero looked up, normally bright eyes almost black. "You did it for me, and I'll be here for you."

"Thank you, Chaos..."

********

That's Nero's past for you. Very bloody, very traumatic. Somehow, I don't think Nero'll make it into the jail. Chaos'll probably end up doing it alone while making sure Nero doesn't move. What did you think of Nero's past? Personally, I find imagining it frightens me...

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