yungching 24 Report post Posted October 16, 2011 I just started reading this. I'm up to page 28 now, and I have to say, you guys are amazing writers! I'm just wondering, is the story you're writing now continued from the beginning? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BK201 31 Report post Posted October 16, 2011 Yep, although i just joined recently... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted October 16, 2011 I just started reading this. I'm up to page 28 now, and I have to say, you guys are amazing writers! I'm just wondering, is the story you're writing now continued from the beginning? Yep you're right. The story progression is just amazing... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
yungching 24 Report post Posted October 16, 2011 Really? Wow! 246 pages! (Including this one) I'm up to page 41. Sometimes I LOL and my mum keeps asking me what I am laughing at Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted October 16, 2011 Really? Wow! 246 pages! (Including this one) I'm up to page 41. Sometimes I LOL and my mum keeps asking me what I am laughing at Have you reached the kidnapping yet? :V Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
yungching 24 Report post Posted October 16, 2011 Which one? There's so many... Btw, I don't really get what this --> :V means if someone could possibly explain (which I doubt),sorry for my ignorance Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted October 16, 2011 Which one? There's so many... Btw, I don't really get what this --> :V means if someone could possibly explain (which I doubt),sorry for my ignorance Means you're there already :V From then on, the entire storyline turned dramatic. :V It means... :V Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BK201 31 Report post Posted October 16, 2011 *facepalms* i wondEr if i should add something to the plot... Tsuki hasn't beEn here lately. . . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
yungching 24 Report post Posted October 16, 2011 Ok, I know which kidnapping you mean now :V Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted October 16, 2011 Of course you do :V Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
yungching 24 Report post Posted October 16, 2011 LOL :V This is going off topic... But I'm very bad at writing and I'm not up to this part of the story so I don't think I can write, plus I don't know many of you here Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted October 16, 2011 LOL :V This is going off topic... But I'm very bad at writing and I'm not up to this part of the story so I don't think I can write, plus I don't know many of you here It's kinda many of us. Let's see... The first ones were IU, Chelsy, Aya, Cure-kun, Saya(Sayomi), Misa, KKLT Then came Mark-the-kidnapper I appeared a bit after. Wildheart and BK came to the story. And Samantha and Hajime Kindaichi wrote only one posts(maybe some others too)... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted October 16, 2011 It's kinda many of us. Let's see... The first ones were IU, Chelsy, Aya, Cure-kun, Saya(Sayomi), Misa, KKLT Then came Mark-the-kidnapper I appeared a bit after. Wildheart and BK came to the story. And Samantha and Hajime Kindaichi wrote only one posts(maybe some others too)... :V :V :V Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted October 17, 2011 LOL :V This is going off topic... But I'm very bad at writing and I'm not up to this part of the story so I don't think I can write, plus I don't know many of you here Don't worry, at least half the pages has to do with us getting off topic. :V It's kinda many of us. Let's see... The first ones were IU, Chelsy, Aya, Cure-kun, Saya(Sayomi), Misa, KKLT Then came Mark-the-kidnapper I appeared a bit after. Wildheart and BK came to the story. And Samantha and Hajime Kindaichi wrote only one posts(maybe some others too)... XDXDXD Lol. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted October 17, 2011 LOL :V This is going off topic... But I'm very bad at writing and I'm not up to this part of the story so I don't think I can write, plus I don't know many of you here Being bad at writing is no problem. I'm not very good myself. No one seems to be complaining about my writing skills yet and when they continued from my storyline, somehow I feel pretty happy I think you should try writing as well. It gives satisfaction. XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monsi 51 Report post Posted October 17, 2011 Recap: *Ringggg....* Suddenly a phone started ringing. Misaki squirmed around her seat, feeling around for the phone. "Hello..." Sleepily, Misaki answered the phone. "Misaki? This is Chelsea! I called to tell you that Tsukiko decided that we should split up and one group looks for the FBI the other group will stay behind..." "*Yawns*...Split up to look for the FBI...?" asked Misaki while yawning. "Wait what...?" KKLT pulled the phone over. "Hello? Hello? This is Legend." "Legend? This is Chelsea..." "Chelsea, tell me about it. What is it about splitting up and the FBI?" "Ah... Tsukiko was saying, we should split up into groups of 3 or 4 and some of us should either go to search for Pyre or the FBI and perhaps a small group should stay behind at base..." "What?! Hold on! Where is Tsukiko now?! Let me talk to her!" KKLT yelled into the phone. "Okay.... I think she's around... I'll look for her... hold on..." sounds of panting and running footsteps were heard in the line. Chelsea must be running around looking for Tsukiko. It seems like Chelsea was secretly calling them. "What the h*** is going on?! Why did she make a decision without informing us first?" KKLT was a little agitated with the sudden plan. "...pant... uh tsukiko! Legend wants to speak with you..." Chelsea must have found Tsukiko. "Hello? Legend?" Tsukiko answered the phone. "Tsukiko! You'd better explain to me what is going on?!" KKLT spoke with much force. "Why didn't anyone tell me about the decision to split up til now?" "Oh Chelsea must have told you?" Tsukiko paused for a moment. KKLT presumed Tsukiko must be glaring at Chelsea now. "I was planning to inform you when we are going to set off." "You should have discussed with me first. Making decisions like this is without informing us is a little rash." KKLT sounded a little annoyed. "I didn't think this needed your approval. Besides it was one of the best strategies we can adopt for now." Tsukiko rebutted back. "If we could find the FBI, we can actually be safer there and might also get the information we need." "..." KKLT breathed a heavy sigh. "Stop the plan and stay at base. I'll be coming back." "What? Aren't you supposed to search for Pyre? Why are you coming back?" Tsukiko sounded a little shocked and at the same time a little annoyed as well. "Change of plan." KKLT replied. "Your plan is not going to work as well. The FBI has no intention of helping us at all. At least for now." "They don't? How do you know?" questioned Tsukiko. "We've been approached by them. They told us." KKLT replied back. "Now just remain at base until we return. I'll tell you about the plans when we return." KKLT hung up the phone without waiting for the reply. She was a little too exhausted to deal with arguing with her own team mate. And she knows she is a little too worked up and might break into a fight if they continued. "What happened?" Monsi asked. "They wanted to split up into groups and set off to search for us and FBI... Its alright now. I've stopped them." KKLT closed her eyes to calm down. "I see..." Monsi nodded his head. "Why don't we rest for a while... You must be tired Monsi, Legend. We've been driving for 3 hours straight now..." Misaki suggested. "Yea... That sounds like a good idea." KKLT agreed. "Let's take a short break." "Actually I can still hold on. But I think it would be good to have a little break." Monsi agreed to the plan. "Another 2 hours and we'll reach base, I think." "Okay." KKLT nodded. "How about we have a drink somewhere as well?" "Drink? Ah... There's a place close to here..." Monsi suggested. "I'll take you girls there." ---------------- Okay~ Its up to you to go ahead of the plan or not~ Let's get this thing going. ------ IdentityUnknown walked out of the building, clutching a small notebook. Inside, she had written down everything she had learned. John had also put his contact information in there. She felt like throwing it away. IdentityUnknown was surprised when she saw she was crying. She hated that fact. Quickly, she wiped it away and walked a few more blocks, taking random twists and turns, blindly walking around. To where, she wasn't sure. After 15 minutes of walking, she took out her phone and hesitantly, dialed a number. I'll try to add a little bit... And, FYI, I haven't been in the US, so I don't have any idea where is this or that located... --------------------------------------------- After another hour of driving, the team of Monsi, KKLT and Misaki have finally arrived at McDonalds' located somewhere in New Jersey. After they got their seats... "What do you guys want? I'll order for all of you.", Misaki presented herself. "No no...I'll order for everyone...", Monsi rejected her offer. "You've been driving for hours now. You deserve some rest. I insist that I should order." "Well, if you insist. Then, I'll have a Big Mac and a large coke." "Just cheeseburger, fries and iced tea.", KKLT said. "Okay, got it.", and Misaki left for the counter. Few moments later, Monsi received a call. "Hello?", Monsi answered his phone. "Hello Monsi. Wh--" "WHERE IN THE WORLD ARE YOU NOW, IU???!! WE'VE BEEN LOOKING ALL OVER FOR YOU!!! WE'RE SO DAMN WORRIED!!!", Monsi shouted out loud, which literally made everyone's attention to focus on him. Feeling embarrassed, he apologized to everyone and calmed himself down. He continued talking to IU and said, "Sorry about earlier. We've been so worried about you and this was the first time you've contacted us since you ran away again. Where are you?" IU answered, "Sorry...it's just that...I don't want you guys to get into trouble..." "Well...sorry but we're all involved now whether you like it or not. And you haven't answered my question yet: "Where are you now?" " "I...um...I'm sorry...but I couldn't tell you..." Frustrated, Monsi covered his cellphone's microphone with his hand and told KKLT in an angry tone, "IU still doesn't want to tell us where the hell she is. YOU TALK TO HER!", and he angrily hands over his cellphone to KKLT. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
yungching 24 Report post Posted October 17, 2011 Being bad at writing is no problem. I'm not very good myself. No one seems to be complaining about my writing skills yet and when they continued from my storyline, somehow I feel pretty happy I think you should try writing as well. It gives satisfaction. XD First, I'll have to catch up. I'm still on page 42 ( I got tired of reading yesterday ). Then only I might give it a second thought Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted October 17, 2011 IdentityUnknown held the phone away from her ear. Note to self, she thought, never call Monsi when you have a different option. As she waited for someone to pick up again (there was some clutter in the background), IdentityUnknown glanced through the notebook, or perhaps a better word would have been analyzing. She felt...empty. Blank. Almost robotic. It reminded her of when her friend had joked she was emotionless...was she really all that...? Snap out of it. IdentityUnknown shook her head. She listened to the phone again. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted October 17, 2011 I'll continue now so I think I'm allowed to double post. -- -- -- Tsukiko ran as fast as she could. She didn't want that others follow her and drag her back to the base. This was something she wanted to do alone. She took her phone and dialed a number. "Hello?" A female voice answered. "Shannon, I have a few quetions to ask." "Tsukiko? Are you okay? I have to tell something to you..." "No time for that. I need some information from you." "Well, I don't promise anything..." "Do you have any information about Mark's death?" "Everything... Why?" "Was there anything weird in his dead?" "Well, yes. A lot ofwriting all over his body." "Would you teel me all about it?" "Very well then..." Shannon told what was written in Mark's body and Tsukiko wrote tham to her notebook, in Finnish. "Thanks Shannon." Tsukiko said shortly and hung up. She looked at the writings in her notebook. On his chest was written: Sininen, musta, ounainen, vihreä ja keltainen näyttävät viimeisen taistelun paikan. On his right leg was written: Heidän johtajallaan ei ainoastaan ole savea jaloissaan, vaan saviset jalat. On his right arm was written: Sankari makaa omenapuiden katveessa leväten ja odottaa taistelua. On his left leg was written: Iso ryhmä pilaa metsästyksen. Pieni ryhmä on siis paras. On his left arm was written: Joskus kaksi ON parempi kuin yksi. Tsukiko frowned. The translations weren't very good but were enough. It was good that she had them and it was even better that outsiders couldn't know what she had written. -- -- -- Well, I have to go now. I'll edit this ltr and translate into Finnish the writings. After this part Rod will find me. Okay, I edited my previous post. And now I'll continue. -- -- -- Tsukiko sat in a cafeteria her notebook on the table in front of her. She sipped some tea and smiled. "So, that's what you wanted to say, Mark. I knew you wouldn't get caught without a reason. And you even managed to warn and advice us behind the gates of hell..." She closed her notebook and went to pay her tea. ------ Rod sat in his van and looked outside, to a cafeteria where one of his targets sat. He smiled. The girl were alone. "Good that she hadn't found the tracker Iram placed. Must be in a good place. Even I don't know where it is..." He opened the door of the van and stepped to the sun light. ------ Tsukiko heard a quiet sound outside of the cafeteria. Someone closed a car door. Carefully she took a peek above her shoulder. "Rod... How did he find me?" She thought while taking her notebook and cell phone. "Excuse me, miss..." She said to a young cashier. "Yes?" "I afraid I have to go before I meet my friends so... would you please take care of these two?" Tsukiko showed the two items. "Well, sure..." "If my phone rings, would you please answer to it? Ask who is calling and if it is some of my friends tell where she can pick these up?" "Very well then, but how do I know who is your friend?" "If the name she says is some of the names in my notebook. I also left a message to them." "Okay, I think that is something I can do." The cashier smiled. "Thank you very much." Tsukiko left the cafeteria. Rod stood at the other side of the road, leaning against a black van. Tsukiko weighed her choices. She didn't have many of them and all of them had the same end: getting caught. She made her choice and crossed the street. "Well, this was unexpected." Rod smiled. "And makes the things much easier for me. May we talk more inside?" He asked and opened the van door. Tsukiko nodded quietly and climbed to the van. Rod went to the drivers seat and dorve some blocks forward. Then he moved to the backside of the van where Tsukiko sat. "What do you want?" The girl asked. I smile spread across Rod's face. "Nothing special. Right now keep you in safe." The man stated while rumming a briefcase. "And I should believe you?" "Yes, how's your head?" "What?" "How is your head?" Rod repeated. "Fine..." "Empty?" "Well, yes... But what is the meaning of these questions?" Rod smirked. "It seems I have to remind you a bit." He injected Tsukiko with a needle. "Ouch! What the hell?!" "This needle contains a drug that makes you remember again those memories Iram placed to your mind. It might hurt..." Tsukiko felt dizzy. Her whole body shaked and she wasn't able to talk. "Oh, my... you fainted." Rod mumbled as the girl fell from her seat. He lifted her back and plucked her seatbelt. "Hmm, let's see what Iram wrote about that drug..." He took a paper. "The person who will be treated with this drug will see memories over and over again. S/he will be 'trapped inside his/her mind'. Later reactions are unknown... If the test work properly the testsubject should..." Rod frowned. The rest of the paper was in a mess. "What ever, I can use you as a bait to lure those four betrayers out from the hole where they are hiding..." -- -- -- Was it complicated? I hope not. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted October 17, 2011 IdentityUnknown held the phone away from her ear. Note to self, she thought, never call Monsi when you have a different option. As she waited for someone to pick up again (there was some clutter in the background), IdentityUnknown glanced through the notebook, or perhaps a better word would have been analyzing. She felt...empty. Blank. Almost robotic. It reminded her of when her friend had joked she was emotionless...was she really all that...? Snap out of it. IdentityUnknown shook her head. She listened to the phone again. Let's assume you're calling Monsi since you mentioned him~ @Tsukiko: Wow. Complicated :V Didn't understand much~ But I guess its not that important for MY SIDE of the story. ------------------------ KKLT grabbed the piece of note given by John tightly. She continued to stare at a specific sentence in the note. "... and then two keys appeared... but there can only be one..." KKLT frowned. "What does that mean?" She thought to herself. She wished she could understand what it meant so that she knew what she could do. Suddenly from beside her, she heard a loud yell. It was monsi. Kklt immediately turned to the frustrated monsi who shoved her the phone saying its Pyre. Confused, she picked up the call. "Uh..." KKLT sighed. "...Hello?" --------- Yea so I picked it up~ okay edited. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted October 17, 2011 Uh...according to Monsi I already called him and he shoved the phone to you. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted October 17, 2011 Yay~ People are writing a lot! \o/ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted October 17, 2011 \o/ I'm just reading, since I have no idea what I'm doing and where I am. xP Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted October 18, 2011 @Tsukiko: Wow. Complicated :V Didn't understand much~ But I guess its not that important for MY SIDE of the story. I knew it would be complicated. I'm not good at explaining things... Anyways, now I can write more about Shannon and Rod. And I hope you'll try to call to me and get my cell and notebook from that cafeteria. I left you a message. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted October 18, 2011 Uh...according to Monsi I already called him and he shoved the phone to you. Oh I didn't see the one Monsi wrote... hmmmmm........ I'll get to changing it soon then~ Edited. take a look. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
