Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 Im er... back? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 1... 2... 3... Write! -- -- -- Tsukiko leaned her back against the wall of the cell she had been thrown in. And she wasn't alone there. "Uh, is someone there?" She asked. "Hey, that voice... Is that you Tsukiko?" The answer came. "WH? You?" "Yeah... Are you okay?" "I'm not sure... I guess I hurt my left elbow again..." "Again?" "Yeah, I hurt for the first time in New Jersey when I got kidnapped." The Finn stated. "And would you please call me Tsuki." "Uh, okay..." WH fell silent as she heard some noises outside of the door. Soon the door opened. Several faces peeked in. "You okay, girls?" Shannon asked. Behind her was KKLT, IU, BK, LIA and Monsi. "You came to save us!" WH smiled. "As you can see." IU grinned and came inside the cell. She opened WH's handguffs while LIA opened Tsukiko's. "Okay, let's go now!" BK said from the door. "Wait!" Tsukiko said suddenly. "I... I can't come." "Uh, why not?" Monsi asked. "I got shot to my stomach and I afraid my wound has opened when they caught me and KKLT." The girl explained. "It can get worse if I run or even hurry. I'd better stay here. Besides, Rin is very curious. If I stay here Í might be able to talk with her." "Oh, this makes things pretty complicated." Shannon sighed and took her phone under her jacket. She dialed a number and waited. "Hi, Crispin! Good to hear your voice!" "Same here, what's up?" A man's voice answered. "Well, you remember the girl we kidnapped in New Jersey? With Rod?" "And?" "I bet you know the situation down here. Kidnapped kids etc." "Go on." "We are rescuing them but this girl, Tsukiko, can't come with us and we are in hurry now." "So she survived in New Jersey? Great! Why can't she come with you?" "She has been shot to her stomach and now her wound has opened. She wants to stay so could you please watch after her?" "Sure, no prob." "Good, I'll call you later." "Bye!" The call ended and Shannon smiled. "It's alright now, my colleague will watch after you, Tsuki." "Good, who is he?" "His real name is Crispin but here he was known as Iram." Shannon explained. BK gasped. "Iram? You must be kidding!" "No, he is an FBI agent like me. Tsuki, he is the person who kidnapped you with me and Rod in New Jersey. And he is also a doctor so he can check your wounds." "Good." Tsukiko sighed. "You better get going now. Thank you all and see ya later." "See you." Others said in unision. "Good luck." Someones added before they closed the door. Tsukiko sighed and sat down against the wall. "At least no handguffs..." -- -- -- Here, you are welcome. It's possible that you'll meet Crispin on a way out. He is in upstairs propably coming to see me soon. And good luck for your escape. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 Wildheart took one last look at the cell she's been in for the last two days. Good luck there, Tsuki-chan. she thought. The group of friends made their way to the adjacent cell, with IU in the front to pick the lock. After a few minutes that felt like endless waiting, they heard a satisfying "click" and opened the door. Sayomi's expression was priceless. "P-Pipi-chan!!" She looked at us. "Wildheart! Monsi! Lia! KKLT! And..." Her eyes widened. "BK-chan??" Then her gaze shifted to Shannon. "You are...?" "Shannon." She replied simply. "Nice to meet you!" We quickly undid Sayomi's handcuffs. Being as quiet as possible, IU leaded the herd to the stairs and began their way down. After a few flights of stairs, we were greeted by footsteps. "W-who is that?" Someone asked. The group tensed. "Hey! Shannon! Long time no see!" We stared at the newcomer. He was taller than most of us, had black hair, and a mustache. (I dunno what his description is so if it's wrong then I'll fix that. x) ) "Crispin!" Shannon welcomed him. "This is Crispin, guys." She introduced. "This is IU, KKLT, Monsi, Lia, Wildheart, and Sayomi." She pointed at each of us in order. Then she nodded to Crispin. "Tsuki is just at the top of these stairs, in the middle cell." She paused. "Good luck." She said, before turning and going down the steps again. "Let's continue our mission, shall we?" ------------------------------------------ 'Was that okay? ------------------------------------------ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 Yeah, that's good. ^^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 ARE YOU SERIOUS?! I'M GONE FOR A DAY- A DAY AND YOU ADD ON 20 PAGES!!!!!!!!!! ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! *starts reading* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 Well, for most of it we were just chatting. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 Yeah... BTW, I finished Nero's hair for the most part. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 Yay! XDXDXD By the way, does he have coffee with him? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 Put it in What's on Your Mind. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 Hii! I'm back! x) And yup! One sec, Aka-chan! x) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 S***! I double posteD again! StUpid phoNe! Anyways, I'lL just goNna eDit thIs and write my story here. Continuation: ____ BK walked along the corridor leading to the rooms occupied by her friends. She passed a couple of doors before she stopped in front of door she wanted. She exhaled nervously as she turned the knob, only to find it locked. 'Darn! I never thought of this. How stupid of me.' she thought when she suddenly heard voices and footsteps from the room heading her way. She immediately ran to the nearest door that she found open and closed it. Luckily, there was noone there. She opened the door a crack and peeked. She saw Misaki, Chelsea and Aeyra together with Brise. She saw them walk away but suddenly Chelsea stopped and said something to the other three before going back to their room. The other three continued to walk away. Seems like Chelsea left something and went back to get it. 'Chance!' BK thought as she walked out the room she's in and followed Chelsea. Once inside, she closed the door slowly. She saw her looking for something in the drawer. Her back was facing her so Chelsea didn't see her. Chelsea sensed someone is in the room so she turned around to find BK looking at her. They stared at each other for a while before Chelsea looked away and head to the door. "Chelsea, wait! Let's talk." BK said as she blocked her way. "Chaos told us to avoid you. And my name is not Chelsea. It's Jun." Chelsea said and tried to push her aside. "Wait! Take a look at these first!" she said as she waved the print-outs in front of her. ---- i'm goNna cuT this short firSt. . I'm running ouT of sPaces. CoNtinuatioN below. . . Mmkay... I shall begin writing then :3 Sayomi woke up from a not-so-fitful sleep and found her hands bound by cold metal handcuffs. Her eyes widened and she desperately started twisting her hands, trying to get the uncomfortable things off her wrists, which appeared to be extremely bruised up. "It's no use. We've already tried everything." A male voice said from her left. "I'm Monsi, by the way." "Hey, I'm Sayomi. I'd say it's nice to meet you, but I don't think it's appropriate to say that stuff in this situation..." "Don't forget about me!" A girl on Sayomi's other side said. "I'm Wildheart." "Hi, Wildheart." Sayomi greeted. "Hey, are you a DC fan?" Monsi asked. "Hell yeah!" Sayomi grinned. But then she frowned. "How did you know that?" "Oh, DC fans are being targeted around here by this Organization. We're being rounded up." Monsi answered. "Wait... you're the Sayomi from DCW, right?" Wildheart asked. "Yep!" Sayomi exclaimed. Then it hit her. "So you're Wildheart888 and Monsi from DCW!" "That's right." Wildheart replied. "So... anyway, do you think she's also a DCW user?" She tilted her head towards the girl lying bruised, bloody, and unconscious on the opposite side of the cell. "Maybe. There's only one way to find out." Sayomi managed to get up from her sitting position (with difficulty because of the handcuffs) and crouched down next to the unconscious girl. "Hello? Are you awake?" Then she felt incredibly stupid. This girl was beat up and looked like she'd been tortured, and Sayomi was trying to make her wake up. But to everyone's surprise, the girl opened her eyes and blinked a few times before focusing on Sayomi. "I am now." "What happened to you?" Wildheart asked. "I think I was beaten up by some creepy people... then I just woke up and found myself here." the girl answered. "Where am I anyway?" "You've been captured by the Organization. We were captured the same way... except not injured as extensively as you have been." Monsi explained. "Wait a sec! So are you guys Sayomi, Wildheart, and Monsi? I heard that you'd been captured by the Organization!" the girl said. "Yup, that's us." Sayomi nodded. "Oh, that's great news! You guys are still alive! And mostly unharmed..." "Yeah... but the question is, who are you?" Wildheart questioned. The girl struggled to sit up. "I'm KKLT." ^Is that okay? I don't know if I got the plot wrong or the character traits wrong... feel free to criticize :3 Okay I'll try. >__< (Though Im still out.) I think I will wake myself up then -------------------------------------- KKLT groaned as she woke up. "NGhhh..." She winced from the pain all over her body. Suddenly a terrible sting spread from her shoulder. "Argh!" "Oh... yea...." KKLT thought to herself, "I have been shot too... Hahaha... What have I done to myself??? Its the first time I've done something like this..." She grabbed her left shoulder and tried to sit up. Suddenly, she felt someone grab her. "Eh?!" Startled, KKLT opened her eyes and saw a figure beside her. "What are you doing trying to sit up! You should be lying down!" KKLT found out that the person who supported her was Monsi. "How... I... " KKLT tried to say something but she could not find the words. "What have they done to you?!" Monsi yelled at KKLT. "Why did you end up like this?!" "I...ngh..." KKLT couldn't find the strength to speak. "... Misaki... Misaki... She..." "Mi-Misaki?? Misaki did this to you?!" Monsi asked. "No... No... Misaki... Did not... Misaki..." KKLT struggled to get up. "Okay okay... I understand." Monsi tried to stop KKLT from talking and moving. "You should just lie down." *scratch* *scratch* "What?!" Monsi stared at the door. KKLT turned her head to the door as well. Someone was at the door. *Tsk Tsk* *Scratch* *Scratch* *CLICK* The door slowly opened. Monsi and KKLT stared at the opening door. "Who-Who's that?!" Monsi asked. "Shhhh its me." Lia popped her head in from behind the door. "...and Pyre too. She's guarding outside." "Li-Lia!" KKLT choked. "Legen-LEGEND!" Lia rushed in immediately after seeing what had happened to her friend. "Legend! What happened to you?!" "Nothing... Just some... minor... injuries." KKLT managed a grin. "How's everything?" "Minor injuries?! DOES THIS LOOK LIKE MINOR INJURIES TO YOU?!" Lia pointed at her shoulder. "Nevermind me." KKLT continued. "Let's get outta here now." "But you can't stand up like this?!" Lia told KKLT. "I can... I've only got a- argh.." KKLT slumped down again. It looks like she's twisted her leg as well. "Legend!" Lia grabbed KKLT's arm. "*sigh* Leave it to me then." Monsi suggested and pulled KKLT up onto his back. "Monsi..." KKLT mumbled. "Wow you're light..." Monsi commented after lifting her up. "Don't worry about it." "You're okay Monsi?" Lia asked. "Yea." he replied. "Legend. Brace yourself. We're going to escape now." "Thanks guys..." "Let's save that for later..." "Let's go!" --------------------------- XD XD XD I edited my double post above. Here is the third part of my flashback. ---- "Wait! Take a look at these first!" she said as she waved the print-outs in front of her. Chelsea just watched her curiously but she continued anyway. "Look! This is you. And here is KKLT, IU, Misaki, Aeyra, Cure-kun, Monsi, Sayomi, Tsukiko, LIA, Mark and me. We are all friends." she said as she pointed at the pictures. "See? We are all friends!" she said as she eyed Chelsea hoping for a flicker of imagination in her eyes but Chelsea just watched the pictures with amazement. Suddenly the door opened behind them revealing a very worried Chaos. "Jun, what took you--" he started to say but stopped midsentence when he saw BK. "What's going on here?" he asked. "Skye here suddenly went in and said that my name is Chelsea. Them she showed of this pictures---" Chelsea started to say but was stopped when Chaos suddenly grabbed the pictures from her hands and looked at it. "Where did you get these?" he asked BK. "What a stupid question. In the electronic archives, of course." she answered sarcastically. "Jun, please go now to the training area. I'll deal with her." he said to Chelsea in a calm voice, trying to hide his anger. Chelsea nodded hesitantly before going out of the room. "You have the guts to betray us the second time." he said as he ripped the pictures into pieces and threw them on the floor. "How dare you!" Chaos grabbed her hair and pulled her to him. "For that, you'll pay!" he said then dragged her out of the room. He dragged her in the corridor and stopped to unlock a door. When it was opened, he literally threw her on the floor. She looked around and saw a pole in the center. Chaos dragged her to the pole and handcuffed her there. "That's what you get when you betray us. I'll make sure that you'll be killed this time." he said and laughed as he walked out of the door. *END OF FLASHBACK* ---- okay, there you go. I borrowed cHelsea and chaos. I also madE it a drug, nOt maChine. And it's name. . .oh weLl how was it? 1... 2... 3... Write! -- -- -- Tsukiko leaned her back against the wall of the cell she had been thrown in. And she wasn't alone there. "Uh, is someone there?" She asked. "Hey, that voice... Is that you Tsukiko?" The answer came. "WH? You?" "Yeah... Are you okay?" "I'm not sure... I guess I hurt my left elbow again..." "Again?" "Yeah, I hurt for the first time in New Jersey when I got kidnapped." The Finn stated. "And would you please call me Tsuki." "Uh, okay..." WH fell silent as she heard some noises outside of the door. Soon the door opened. Several faces peeked in. "You okay, girls?" Shannon asked. Behind her was KKLT, IU, BK, LIA and Monsi. "You came to save us!" WH smiled. "As you can see." IU grinned and came inside the cell. She opened WH's handguffs while LIA opened Tsukiko's. "Okay, let's go now!" BK said from the door. "Wait!" Tsukiko said suddenly. "I... I can't come." "Uh, why not?" Monsi asked. "I got shot to my stomach and I afraid my wound has opened when they caught me and KKLT." The girl explained. "It can get worse if I run or even hurry. I'd better stay here. Besides, Rin is very curious. If I stay here Í might be able to talk with her." "Oh, this makes things pretty complicated." Shannon sighed and took her phone under her jacket. She dialed a number and waited. "Hi, Crispin! Good to hear your voice!" "Same here, what's up?" A man's voice answered. "Well, you remember the girl we kidnapped in New Jersey? With Rod?" "And?" "I bet you know the situation down here. Kidnapped kids etc." "Go on." "We are rescuing them but this girl, Tsukiko, can't come with us and we are in hurry now." "So she survived in New Jersey? Great! Why can't she come with you?" "She has been shot to her stomach and now her wound has opened. She wants to stay so could you please watch after her?" "Sure, no prob." "Good, I'll call you later." "Bye!" The call ended and Shannon smiled. "It's alright now, my colleague will watch after you, Tsuki." "Good, who is he?" "His real name is Crispin but here he was known as Iram." Shannon explained. BK gasped. "Iram? You must be kidding!" "No, he is an FBI agent like me. Tsuki, he is the person who kidnapped you with me and Rod in New Jersey. And he is also a doctor so he can check your wounds." "Good." Tsukiko sighed. "You better get going now. Thank you all and see ya later." "See you." Others said in unision. "Good luck." Someones added before they closed the door. Tsukiko sighed and sat down against the wall. "At least no handguffs..." -- -- -- Here, you are welcome. It's possible that you'll meet Crispin on a way out. He is in upstairs propably coming to see me soon. And good luck for your escape. Wildheart took one last look at the cell she's been in for the last two days. Good luck there, Tsuki-chan. she thought. The group of friends made their way to the adjacent cell, with IU in the front to pick the lock. After a few minutes that felt like endless waiting, they heard a satisfying "click" and opened the door. Sayomi's expression was priceless. "P-Pipi-chan!!" She looked at us. "Wildheart! Monsi! Lia! KKLT! And..." Her eyes widened. "BK-chan??" Then her gaze shifted to Shannon. "You are...?" "Shannon." She replied simply. "Nice to meet you!" We quickly undid Sayomi's handcuffs. Being as quiet as possible, IU leaded the herd to the stairs and began their way down. After a few flights of stairs, we were greeted by footsteps. "W-who is that?" Someone asked. The group tensed. "Hey! Shannon! Long time no see!" We stared at the newcomer. He was taller than most of us, had black hair, and a mustache. (I dunno what his description is so if it's wrong then I'll fix that. x) ) "Crispin!" Shannon welcomed him. "This is Crispin, guys." She introduced. "This is IU, KKLT, Monsi, Lia, Wildheart, and Sayomi." She pointed at each of us in order. Then she nodded to Crispin. "Tsuki is just at the top of these stairs, in the middle cell." She paused. "Good luck." She said, before turning and going down the steps again. "Let's continue our mission, shall we?" ------------------------------------------ 'Was that okay? ------------------------------------------ If you need more, just ask. Sorry for double posting. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 I think you missed some. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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