Aeyra 260 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 Chelsea: Mark was executed, but we didn't know for certain. We heard news of his 'impending' execution in NYC, and ran off to NJ. I believe I wrote mini ChaosXLaela scene somewhere, and Nero's past has been revealed. When he was little, his parents were slaughtered, and he killed the people who murdered them with a knife. (at age five.) He doesn't like to sleep because the fear and the terror of what he did still haunts him, and he ended up breaking down, but only Chaos saw and heard it. Oh, and @Tsukiko, what are your plans for your flashbacks? I need to know so I'll be able to incorporate hints in my writing. But please don't make Laela's part too big. She's only a martyr. She's not meant to have a role at all really. She just was, that's all. And BTW, Pyre, nice. Ran back to NYC, didn't you? XD I believe you'll be found soon enough.... And now I shall write! ************** "You're not helping?" repeated Aeyra numbly, feeling as if she'd received a hard blow to the stomach. "But we need your help!" "Our point exactly," answered Nero emotionlessly, flicking his hand of an annoying particle of dust. "We're your power. We're your strength. And we're not wasting our time on something as stupid as tracking down a girl that decided to leave voluntarily. Simple as that." "At least give us your tracker," commanded KKLT, fingers outstretched towards Nero, face barely concealing the rage she felt behind it. "We are going to track down Pyre whether you like it or not." "I wouldn't dream of keeping it from you." Nero placed the disk in KKLT's palm. "Have fun throwing yourself into danger and wasting your time." "Who's closest to her then?" asked Chaos, looking tall and menacing compared to the others, glowering down with a threateningly, startling blue gaze. "You'd be stupid to send the whole team. Two is more than enough- ideal even." "I'll go," answered KKLT, not backing up from Chaos's unspoken challenge. "And I'll take Misaki with me. Aeyra- I hope you don't mind." She spared a glance for the younger girl beside her. "No, not at all!" assured Aeyra as calmly as she could, holding her hands up. "I don't really know Pyre all that well. You two know her better, and you're both really skilled in case of attack." "You should leave now," advised Nero, eyeing the alarm clock on the nightstand. "She's in New York City, and if you get a train now, you'll be able to get a hotel and find her in the morning." "Why the morning?" protested KKLT, unable to keep from ignoring Nero's infuriating tips and comments. "Because if she's staying somewhere, you'd be breaking and entering, and attracting unnecessary attention. Do you have the cash I gave you?" KKLT drew ten crisp one hundred dollar bills out of her pocket. Nero was amazing at hacking ATMs. "You'll be able to have a great dinner tonight." "Are you guys staying here?" KKLT looked at them curiously. "I have a- whatchamacallit- an appointment with a few important people in a few days near here," said Nero, smiling. "I'd like to stay here- it's a good place, secluded, low-profile, and there's a convenience store two blocks away. We have a kitchen, and Aeyra says she's skilled at making instant ramen." "That doesn't take skill!" chuckled KKLT, trying not to laugh as Aeyra's cheeks tinged the slightest shade of pink due to embarrassment. "You just boil water and dump in noodles." "No, you have to time it so the noodles cook while the water is warming up, add in eggs while it's boiling, add spice and frozen peas, and serve the moment you think the egg white is cooked. It's not as easy as it sounds," pouted Aeyra grumpily. "Then I'm leaving," said KKLT, leaving the three as she opened the other door. "I'll won't come back until we find Pyre. You can bet on it." ******* While writing the second half, I started to lose the ability to form coherent sentences. I've underslept for all four schooldays so far... Only a perfectionist attitude keeps these sentences pretty. Standard 'how was ir' and good night! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 Great jon Aeyra! ^^ I liked it! Good night, sleep well! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 Yay!! I'm soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo tired right now I can't do anything, but I'll write as soon as I can. Probably tomorrow. *Goes to sleep and is asleep in 0.001 seconds. xP* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 Nice job Aeyra. And yes, I ran back to NYC/NJ because that's the area I'm most familiar with. Plus I have resources there. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 Great job Aeyra!!!!!!! XD and pipichan and tsuki chan!!!! I'll get back to writing as soon as I'm home! XD Anyways~ I'm skilled at making instant noodles Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 @Ayera: Well, there is a point and there is not a point with those flashbacks. The reason I have them is Iram's fault. He used me as a test subject after he had knocked me out with that memory-wiping device. That test is part of organizations plan to take over the world. Get memories from famous and important politicans and use them against them and... plah plah plah... Anyways there is not special reason with them. I just happened to be there and I'm physically pretty similar than Laela was and he propably though that it's easier to move memories between similar persons. Too hard to explain, I hope you get the point... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monsi 51 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 @Ayera: Well, there is a point and there is not a point with those flashbacks. The reason I have them is Iram's fault. He used me as a test subject after he had knocked me out with that memory-wiping device. That test is part of organizations plan to take over the world. Get memories from famous and important politicans and use them against them and... plah plah plah... Anyways there is not special reason with them. I just happened to be there and I'm physically pretty similar than Laela was and he propably though that it's easier to move memories between similar persons. Too hard to explain, I hope you get the point... Oh...okay...I thought you are Laela. *imagination runs wild* I thought that after Chaos left Laela after she died, someone from the org. got her and revived her. After that, her memory was erased, but they've put some info in your brain that tells you that you're Tsukiko...XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 No. Laela is dead, period. She's a martyr. Nothing more, nothing less. Tsuki, how did Iram obtain Laela's memories in the first place? :is confused: Or are they all just fake? (like, 'recreated'?) I think I somewhat get what you're trying to say though. Obtain memories and play them through a different person. Though how you get that person to have flashbacks is beyond me. Because flashbacks are not normal. They just make stories easier to explain. :frazzled: I'd do some research on flashbacks and how to make them happen, but I'm on an iTouch. I can't believe I'm still so damn tired after 11 hours of sleep... And I have to go to my brother's stupid soccer game. Dang it! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 No. Laela is dead, period. She's a martyr. Nothing more, nothing less. Tsuki, how did Iram obtain Laela's memories in the first place? :is confused: Or are they all just fake? (like, 'recreated'?) I think I somewhat get what you're trying to say though. Obtain memories and play them through a different person. Though how you get that person to have flashbacks is beyond me. Because flashbacks are not normal. They just make stories easier to explain. :frazzled: I'd do some research on flashbacks and how to make them happen, but I'm on an iTouch. I can't believe I'm still so damn tired after 11 hours of sleep... And I have to go to my brother's stupid soccer game. Dang it! Well, I'm sorry I can really ecplain this... ^^" I just have crazy ideas and before I have planned them I have already written them. And then I have to plan them afterwards... BTW, you warned me once not to write ChaosXme. Don't worry I'm not gonna do it. But I have to admit... I played with that thought once... @Monsi: Not bad idea, but still impossible. Guess have I thought about it too. Do I have too wild imagination? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monsi 51 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 (edited) No. Laela is dead, period. She's a martyr. Nothing more, nothing less. Tsuki, how did Iram obtain Laela's memories in the first place? :is confused: Or are they all just fake? (like, 'recreated'?) I think I somewhat get what you're trying to say though. Obtain memories and play them through a different person. Though how you get that person to have flashbacks is beyond me. Because flashbacks are not normal. They just make stories easier to explain. :frazzled: I'd do some research on flashbacks and how to make them happen, but I'm on an iTouch. I can't believe I'm still so damn tired after 11 hours of sleep... And I have to go to my brother's stupid soccer game. Dang it! Well...I guess that settles it. @Monsi: Not bad idea, but still impossible. Guess have I thought about it too. Do I have too wild imagination? I wouldn't say "wild", but I think "broad" is more appropriate. BTW, I'll try to think of something to write... Edited September 10, 2011 by Monsi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monsi 51 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 Okay, I have ideas now, so I'll be writing now... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 Yay! Write! \o/ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 Whee! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 I feel like I've disappeared somewhere... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 Chelsea: Mark was executed, but we didn't know for certain. We heard news of his 'impending' execution in NYC, and ran off to NJ. I believe I wrote mini ChaosXLaela scene somewhere, and Nero's past has been revealed. When he was little, his parents were slaughtered, and he killed the people who murdered them with a knife. (at age five.) He doesn't like to sleep because the fear and the terror of what he did still haunts him, and he ended up breaking down, but only Chaos saw and heard it. Oh, and @Tsukiko, what are your plans for your flashbacks? I need to know so I'll be able to incorporate hints in my writing. But please don't make Laela's part too big. She's only a martyr. She's not meant to have a role at all really. She just was, that's all. And BTW, Pyre, nice. Ran back to NYC, didn't you? XD I believe you'll be found soon enough.... And now I shall write! ************** "You're not helping?" repeated Aeyra numbly, feeling as if she'd received a hard blow to the stomach. "But we need your help!" "Our point exactly," answered Nero emotionlessly, flicking his hand of an annoying particle of dust. "We're your power. We're your strength. And we're not wasting our time on something as stupid as tracking down a girl that decided to leave voluntarily. Simple as that." "At least give us your tracker," commanded KKLT, fingers outstretched towards Nero, face barely concealing the rage she felt behind it. "We are going to track down Pyre whether you like it or not." "I wouldn't dream of keeping it from you." Nero placed the disk in KKLT's palm. "Have fun throwing yourself into danger and wasting your time." "Who's closest to her then?" asked Chaos, looking tall and menacing compared to the others, glowering down with a threateningly, startling blue gaze. "You'd be stupid to send the whole team. Two is more than enough- ideal even." "I'll go," answered KKLT, not backing up from Chaos's unspoken challenge. "And I'll take Misaki with me. Aeyra- I hope you don't mind." She spared a glance for the younger girl beside her. "No, not at all!" assured Aeyra as calmly as she could, holding her hands up. "I don't really know Pyre all that well. You two know her better, and you're both really skilled in case of attack." "You should leave now," advised Nero, eyeing the alarm clock on the nightstand. "She's in New York City, and if you get a train now, you'll be able to get a hotel and find her in the morning." "Why the morning?" protested KKLT, unable to keep from ignoring Nero's infuriating tips and comments. "Because if she's staying somewhere, you'd be breaking and entering, and attracting unnecessary attention. Do you have the cash I gave you?" KKLT drew ten crisp one hundred dollar bills out of her pocket. Nero was amazing at hacking ATMs. "You'll be able to have a great dinner tonight." "Are you guys staying here?" KKLT looked at them curiously. "I have a- whatchamacallit- an appointment with a few important people in a few days near here," said Nero, smiling. "I'd like to stay here- it's a good place, secluded, low-profile, and there's a convenience store two blocks away. We have a kitchen, and Aeyra says she's skilled at making instant ramen." "That doesn't take skill!" chuckled KKLT, trying not to laugh as Aeyra's cheeks tinged the slightest shade of pink due to embarrassment. "You just boil water and dump in noodles." "No, you have to time it so the noodles cook while the water is warming up, add in eggs while it's boiling, add spice and frozen peas, and serve the moment you think the egg white is cooked. It's not as easy as it sounds," pouted Aeyra grumpily. "Then I'm leaving," said KKLT, leaving the three as she opened the other door. "I'll won't come back until we find Pyre. You can bet on it." ******* While writing the second half, I started to lose the ability to form coherent sentences. I've underslept for all four schooldays so far... Only a perfectionist attitude keeps these sentences pretty. Standard 'how was ir' and good night! Let's continued~ Let's not let Pipichan wait too long shall we~ Wait... I have a question... are we in the same room as the rest of the guys? D: If we are, correct me, because it seemed like I left the room alone, so I presume Misaki is in another room... ------------- KKLT walked briskly to the other room with the rest of the team. "Misaki!" KKLT yelled as she entered the room. All heads turned towards her direction. "Ye-Yes?!!!" The girl answered in surprise. "We're leaving to find Pyre..." KKLT told Misaki sternly, before softening her tone, "... if its alright with you?" "Yea I guess..." Misaki answered uncertainly. "But what about understanding what happened to Mark before he... yea... you know?" Chelsea asked. "I'll be leaving that to you guys." KKLT answered without even thinking. " and Misaki... I meant NOW..." "O-Oh o-okay...!" the girl was a little shocked at the way KKLT acted, but she hurriedly jumped up grabbed her stuff. It was probably a little of anger and disappointment that KKLT is feeling right now that is preventing her from acting totally calm. The way Nero had phrased it somehow got to her nerves. It was as if, he did that to anger her on purpose. "Okay we can go now~" Misaki said after stuffing some special defense devices into her baggage. "Chelsea, Monsi, Sayomi... If there are any news, please inform me right away." KKLT continued to turn to Krev and Brise, "I'm not expecting too much, but please help them along the way and..." KKLT paused. "... and if there are any news, we'll try to inform you." Brise answered before KKLT could complete her sentence. "...yea... thanks." KKLT lowered her head in response. "Let's go Misaki." And KKLT left the room in a flash with Misaki chasing after her. ------------ "Where are we heading to? Legend???" Misaki asked KKLT. "Legend!" "To Pyre." "Where is Pyre then?" "New York. We're going back." "New York?! ... Why did Pyre...? Hey wait...!" KKLT had just flagged a cab which happened to pass by. Misaki hurried in after KKLT. "The train station thanks." KKLT told the driver. Sighing, Misaki turned to KKLT. "Now can you tell me what is going on?" SHe looked at KKLT with a serious look. "... Right... You know Pyre's run away...." "Yes I know." "She's now in New York." KKLT whispered. "I presume, that she's gone to look for the FBI." Misaki gasped. "Well..." KKLT continued softly. "This execution of Mark must have something to do with them... Or at least they will definitely have some details of it... was what I thought... so I presume Pyre would be thinking that too..." "I... see..." Misaki nodded. "So any plans yet?" ----------------------------------------- ========================================= Well, I wonder how are we going to meet up with Pipichan... (THERE CHELSEA!! YOU HAVEN'T DISAPPEARED XDDDDD) *EDITS: I changed the weapons to something else because I figured we wont be able to bring them onto trains...) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 We'll find her magically. :V Great job Kid-chan! \o/ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monsi 51 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 I guess I'll have to start over again... BTW, nice job, KKLT! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 Well, I have idea what's going on at all, so... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 We'll find her magically. :V Great job Kid-chan! \o/ I hope that she finds us instead :V THanks! \o/ I guess I'll have to start over again... BTW, nice job, KKLT! How come? D: I knew you were going to write but I didn't think that what I have written will affect too much of it... Well, I have idea what's going on at all, so... Well you're in the room with the others. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 I hope that she finds us instead :V THanks! \o/ Perhaps we'll run into each other. :V You're welcome! ^^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 EDIT: DOUBLE POST WAS ACCIDENTAL!!!! DXDXDXDXDXDXDXDX Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 Perhaps we'll run into each other. :V You're welcome! ^^ Yep :P Anyways, I changed the stuff you bring from Weapons to defence devices. Because I figured weapons aren't allowed on trains :V Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monsi 51 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 How come? D: I knew you were going to write but I didn't think that what I have written will affect too much of it... Actually, it affected everything...but I'll try to write something. It's actually 3 AM here and my brain activity begins to slow down... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 Yep :P Anyways, I changed the stuff you bring from Weapons to defence devices. Because I figured weapons aren't allowed on trains :V Awwww... D: But ok! \o/ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monsi 51 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 (edited) Monsi was just outside his room playing "Angry Birds" on his laptop when he saw Legend rushing inside the room. He was about to ask her but she was way too fast for him to be able to ask her. Hmmm...wonder what happened, he thought and went inside the room. *blah blah blah* (basically the conversation that took place before KKLT and Misaki have left. ) After KKLT and Misaki have left the building, he unconsciously looked at his watch and... "Guys, what time's the last trip for the train bound for New York?", Monsi asked everyone in the room. "11:30 PM. Why?", Krev answered. Monsi looked again at his watch,"Damn, it's 3 minutes before 11:30 PM! They won't make it!" "So, I assume that you would bring the van and you'll be the one bring them to NY instead?", Sayomi butted in. "Well, if it's fine with you guys..." Everyone in the room, except Nero, Chaos, Krev, and Brise, nodded in agreement. "Well...I...should get going, then", he said while still looking at those four, hoping that they would respond. However, they didn't. "Be safe." said Chelsea. "I will.", his final words while grabbing his M-16 rifle, his laptop, and the van's keys. ----------------------------------------------------------- Fortunately, he was able to download the map of the whole USA thanks to Google Maps . Looking at the map, he was able to reach the train station in 4 minutes. When he arrived there, he saw two girls sitting in a bench, with a mark of disappointment completely evident in their faces, mainly due to the fact that they weren't able to catch the last train trip bound for New York. Monsi approached them from behind and said, "Did someone order a trip to New York?" "Monsi, you're here!", the two girls exclaimed in unison. "Let's get in the van, shall we?" At the van, Legend asked Monsi, "How were you able to get this?" "There are people who gave me permission to use the van, though Nero and Chaos weren't aware of this, but Krev and Brise would be the ones to tell those two." "I see... But, why did you decide to come with us?" "Let's just put it this way: "It's a man's duty to protect women from danger." " "Wow...we...we don't know what to say.", Misaki answered. "Thanks for your help, Monsi." "No problem. After all, we're all in this together, right?", he responded. "Yeah, except Nero and Chaos...", Legend added. "Nero and Chaos, say what??", Monsi asked in surprise. Legend related to Monsi and Misaki what took place between her and the two "jerks", as she had described them. "Oh, I see. Well, don't think about them too much. It won't bring anything good.", Monsi advised Legend. "Yeah, we must focus instead on finding Pyre at this moment.", Misaki added. "Okay, guys.", Legend agreed. "Now, where are we going?", Monsi asked Legend for directions. --------------------------------------------------------------- Good night, guys! EDIT: I just fixed some of the dialogues which are confusing...XD Edited September 14, 2011 by Monsi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
