Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 \o/ Great job Monsi! ^^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monsi 51 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 \o/ Great job Monsi! ^^ Thanks...XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted September 10, 2011 Monsi was just outside his room playing "Angry Birds" on his laptop when he saw Legend rushing inside the room. He was about to ask her but she was way too fast for him to be able to ask her. Hmmm...wonder what happened, he thought and went inside the room. *blah blah blah* (basically the conversation that took place before KKLT and Misaki have left. ) After KKLT and Misaki have left the building, he unconsciously looked at his watch and... "Guys, what time's the last trip for the train bound for New York?", Monsi asked everyone in the room. "11:30 PM. Why?", Krev answered. Monsi looked again at his watch,"Damn, it's 3 minutes before 11:30 PM! They won't make it!" "So, I assume that you would bring the van and you'll be the one bring them to NY instead?", Sayomi butted in. "Well, if it's fine with you guys..." Surprisingly, everyone in the room, including Krev and Brise, nodded in agreement. "Thanks, guys! I should get going then. Krev, Brise, you know what to do, right?" "Don't worry, we'll handle it." He grabbed his M-16 rifle, his laptop, and the van's keys, then he left. Fortunately, he was able to download the map of the whole USA thanks to Google Maps . Looking at the map, he was able to reach the train station in 4 minutes. When he arrived there, he saw two girls sitting in a bench, with a mark of disappointment completely evident in their faces, mainly due to the fact that they weren't able to catch the last train trip bound for New York. Monsi approached them from behind and said, "Did someone order a trip to New York?" "Monsi, you're here!", the two girls exclaimed in unison. "Let's get in the van, shall we?" At the van, Legend asked Monsi, "How were you able to get this?" "Krev and Brise would tell the others." "I see. But, why did you decide to come with us?" "It's a man's duty to protect women from danger." "Wow...we...we don't know what to say.", Misaki answered. "Thanks for your help, Monsi." "No problem. After all, we're all in this together, right?", he responded. "Yeah, except Nero and Chaos...", Legend added. "Nero and Chaos, say what??", Monsi asked in surprise. Legend related to Monsi and Misaki what took place between her and the two "jerks", as she had described them. "Oh, I see. Well, don't think about them too much. It won't bring anything good.", Monsi advised Legend. "Yeah, we must focus instead on finding Pyre at this moment.", Misaki added. "Okay, guys.", Legend agreed. "Now, where are we going?", Monsi asked Legend for directions. --------------------------------------------------------------- Good night, guys! Okay, now I hate my iTouch and my laptop. They both just fricking deleted what I had to say!!!!! Twice in a row! (I would curse, but I'm trying very hard not to.) Nice job, but I wanted to point out that Krev and Brise aren't very likely to help you. They're the same as Chaos and Nero, except they're actually more Organization focused than the other two because they didn't have something big taken from them. They're just along because Chaos and Nero are really. I don't think they'd go back if Chaos and Nero died, but they're more absorbed into each other than anything else. And where did you get the van from? :is confused: We took the train to NJ, and the van was probably left in NY. And it was the afternoon, but I guess i didn't state that... And if it takes you only 4 minutes to reach the train station with your van, shouldn't a taxi get there faster because a taxi driver knows the route? Sorry... I like challenging things, force of habit. People should feel free to do that with me too. (in fact, please do. Because I have the personality of a perfectionist when I'm writing... ish.) Oh, and I forget who asked, but there are two separate rooms for the boys and girls. It's just everyone is gathered inside one to keep each other company until bedtime. So the other one was empty, and adjacent.... Oh, and Nero gave you the tracker than keeps track of everyone's location at all times you know. So finding Pyre won't even take a whole day unless she's in a building that you can't enter. AKA her hotel room. (actually... You could stalk her and knock on her door. There's an idea. ) Meanwhile, Nero will be carrying out his secret plan that no one else knows about. XD I'll write that sometime tonight. I shouldn't keep procrastinating with my homework. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted September 11, 2011 I'm about to write (\o/), but I don't know who the search party consists of. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted September 11, 2011 \o/ Yay! The search party for kaichou consists of me and Kid-chan, though Monsi is driving us. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted September 11, 2011 It was about 9 o'clock - 9:15, glowed William's watch - and the night was clear, the moon casting light over the landscape. William took off his glasses, a parting memento from Mark, and shoved them in his pocket. He sighed, then took out a box of matches. His hand delicately takes out a match, and strikes it against the box, causing it to glow with a bright orange flare. He stared at the fire, and felt a tad warmer. His mind faded into a river of memory - one pocket of memory, to be exact: "Have I ever told you about Over Top?" The question came from nowhere. The two were on a beach, accompained by a few others. It was a rest...a chance to rest from the endless chase. "No. What is it?" "Simply put, it removes all physical limitations the body has." The words made William think back farther, to when a drunk truck driver decided to run the kids on the street over. Mark, somehow, managed to stop the truck, and push it backwards. "Your heart starts beating fast. Pain has no meaning. You only feel the rush of speed and blood coursing through your body." Mark looked towards the shore. He took out a pen, and twirled it around in his fingers. His long black hair flew in the wind. "Someday, I'll show you how to do that as well." ...But Mark had died. He made that promise 5 years ago. And whatever William did, however hard he tried to push beyond limits, something stopped him. A wall blocking his path, and a hand pushing him back. "Over Top..." He stared into the sky, where a thin spiral of smoke came from the no-longer lit match. A/N: Just filler. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted September 11, 2011 Nice job Moho-kun! ^^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted September 11, 2011 This somehow doesn't feel irl anymore Great job Moho-chan!!!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted September 11, 2011 Great job Mohawk-kun!!! xD (I've decided to call u that from now..xP) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted September 11, 2011 This somehow doesn't feel irl anymore Great job Moho-chan!!!!!! I saw that as Momo-chan for a second... (Momo-chan-senpai from POT!! XD) It doesn't feel IRL? :3 I don't recall it ever feeling IRL... LOL. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted September 11, 2011 I saw that as Momo-chan for a second... (Momo-chan-senpai from POT!! XD) It doesn't feel IRL? :3 I don't recall it ever feeling IRL... LOL. Oh I call foreverlost momo chan Neither do I. :V Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monsi 51 Report post Posted September 12, 2011 (edited) EDIT: Never mind this...sorry... Edited September 12, 2011 by Monsi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monsi 51 Report post Posted September 12, 2011 Okay, now I hate my iTouch and my laptop. They both just fricking deleted what I had to say!!!!! Twice in a row! (I would curse, but I'm trying very hard not to.) Nice job, but I wanted to point out that Krev and Brise aren't very likely to help you. They're the same as Chaos and Nero, except they're actually more Organization focused than the other two because they didn't have something big taken from them. They're just along because Chaos and Nero are really. I don't think they'd go back if Chaos and Nero died, but they're more absorbed into each other than anything else. And where did you get the van from? :is confused: We took the train to NJ, and the van was probably left in NY. And it was the afternoon, but I guess i didn't state that... And if it takes you only 4 minutes to reach the train station with your van, shouldn't a taxi get there faster because a taxi driver knows the route? Sorry... I like challenging things, force of habit. People should feel free to do that with me too. (in fact, please do. Because I have the personality of a perfectionist when I'm writing... ish.) Oh, and I forget who asked, but there are two separate rooms for the boys and girls. It's just everyone is gathered inside one to keep each other company until bedtime. So the other one was empty, and adjacent.... Oh, and Nero gave you the tracker than keeps track of everyone's location at all times you know. So finding Pyre won't even take a whole day unless she's in a building that you can't enter. AKA her hotel room. (actually... You could stalk her and knock on her door. There's an idea. ) Meanwhile, Nero will be carrying out his secret plan that no one else knows about. XD I'll write that sometime tonight. I shouldn't keep procrastinating with my homework. I know the thing you mentioned about Krev and Brise, but I think you missed this: Surprisingly, everyone in the room, including Krev and Brise, nodded in agreement. Meaning, there's a reason why they let me use the van. About the van, let's just say that I'm the only one who didn't ride the train and instead drove the van all the way to NJ so that we can go anywhere in case we need to. And in case you've forgotten already, I've been to NJ before so let's just say that I know my way around. And you didn't mention the time so I assumed it's already night time. Is it clear now? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted September 12, 2011 ]I know the thing you mentioned about Krev and Brise, but I think you missed this: Surprisingly, everyone in the room, including Krev and Brise, nodded in agreement. Meaning, there's a reason why they let me use the van. About the van, let's just say that I'm the only one who didn't ride the train and instead drove the van all the way to NJ so that we can go anywhere in case we need to. And in case you've forgotten already, I've been to NJ before so let's just say that I know my way around. And you didn't mention the time so I assumed it's already night time. Is it clear now? That's the reason I pointed it out. It just felt so OOC for them. They're on Chaos's team, and Chaos and Nero are 'in the room' and probably told them their decision. Nodding would be betrayal, you know? And even if they did want to save Pyre (which I doubt), they trust the judgment of their leaders more than us. They don't have anything turning them to us either, other than Nero and Chaos, so they wouldn't nod or show signs of agreement. And everyone includes Nero and Chaos. I can tell you they'll probably be playing a two player game with Nero's DS. Krev and Brise would be reading together. (aren't they sweet? I think so. XD) I guess the night time and van thing works, but another reason we abandoned the van was the noticeability factor.... Can we give it a paint job? That way, neither the Organization or the FBI can find us easily. Do something about the license plate as well- who cares if that's illegal. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted September 14, 2011 You know what, screw stupid double posts THIS TOPIC IS SUDDENLY UNACTIVE!!! I'm writing whether anyone likes it or NOT! And sorry Monsi, but I'm going to ignore the Krev and Brise helping thing. Because they wouldn't risk it. It's not in their nature... (because like it or not, they are all cold-blooded killers... They only feel guilt from time to time. Do you see them mourning the murders they've committed? No. They're not kind and compassionate I'm afraid. They're just very messed up teenagers with very serious issues. **************** "I'm really starting to wonder why we shouldn't just leave," muttered Nero darkly, playing Pokemon with Chaos watching over his shoulder. "I don't want to waste my time here. And besides, we don't even need them. They need us- and frankly, I don't give a shit that they do. We're playing this by our rules, and they don't like it. If I get restricted one more time, I'm leaving even if none of you come with me." "I'd come with you, Nero," assured Chaos, thinking the same things. It wasn't like if one of his group, his family, disappeared that he wouldn't try and save him, but he knew they'd never pull off such an idiotic and dangerous stunt. And if they did, they knew there would be nobody searching, kicking yourself out was kicking yourself out. Done. "I don't like it here either. I say we just get Krev and Brise, steal some car, take the credit card, and take the Organization down our own way. I've seen what you've been doing with that computer- we could do it. And it'd be much easier without us having to drag them along." Krev and Brise lay within earshot, silently flipping through the pages of one of their favorites, Romeo and Juliet, together, hands touching. They looked at each other chalkengingly, asking the other if they agreed with the two blond boys. Both cold, dark gray metal and golden-brown honey showed their consent- how would they possibly even consider staying? Chaos and Nero were like brothers, closer than brothers, and they all needed each other. Sure the two pairs were more tightly knot than the group itself, but they were still connected. If one person disagreed, they all did. And they usually thought the same ways. Aeyra laid on the bed restlessly, unable to sleep through the swathe of conflicting thoughts that threatened to swamp her. She couldn't but feel almost the same way as the Organization members- it was her selfish, achievement-centric personality, one that demanded the ability to be on top and reach a goal. Her goal was to defeat the Organization, otherwise she could never live the rest of her life in peace. It would be an impossibility. And she was swaying towards the side that promised better chances. Buy- the side on which she currently resides were where her weakening loyalties were, to these people she called her friends, but that was about it. She couldn't feel a family-like bond, the invincible thread that withstood all. Her love was rarely given and even more rarely shown. What to do? Right or wrong, victory or loss, friend or foe, where she felt she would fit in and where she was. She knew Nero probably wouldn't take her, but if worst came to worst and she made a decision, she would do everything in her power to make him. If she wanted something dine, she did it with her whole heart. She didn't think even her whole heart could help her win where she currently was. Life or death... So I can only hope I am forgiven in the end... *********** Yeah, that is my real personality. My unwavering loyalty applies to only a few select people in my life, like my brother, parents (sometimes. You know how parents are), my best friends (there are two/five. I'm trying to figure out if the not-as-close three are under my unswerving loyalty) I thought the Organization members would have to have that mindset to survive, goals come first, family next. Otherwise, they'd be dead. (AKA... If sorted into Hogwarts, they'd be Slytherins, like me. More extreme, violent Slytherins, but Slytherins. We're not Gryffindors, that much is for certain.) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted September 14, 2011 Great job Aeyra! XDXDXD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted September 14, 2011 Great job, Aeyra! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted September 14, 2011 Great job as usual!!!! Though I'm still not happy at the idea of them leaving... D: *sigh* The stories are starting to get a little side tracked >__< Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted September 14, 2011 It was never on track in the first place. :V Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted September 14, 2011 It was never on track in the first place. :V I'd have to agree with this :V Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted September 14, 2011 Great job as usual!!!! Though I'm still not happy at the idea of them leaving... D: *sigh* The stories are starting to get a little side tracked >__< Well, we aren't exactly showing them that we do a good job of things. And Nero and Chaos can be much too cocky for their own good, and they believe they can do their individual filds better than anybody else. And they don't like having their judgment disagreed with by an argument that simply wouldn't exist in their previous world. You know what I mean? Their characters are so complex... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted September 14, 2011 Well, we aren't exactly showing them that we do a good job of things. And Nero and Chaos can be much too cocky for their own good, and they believe they can do their individual filds better than anybody else. And they don't like having their judgment disagreed with by an argument that simply wouldn't exist in their previous world. You know what I mean? Their characters are so complex... Yea I get it... I know what you mean... But I am still not happy D: anyway... I can't really complain I'm also one who left. Nero shd get used to team work soon. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted September 14, 2011 He knows teamwork. He just doesn't lime working with people who disagree with him. He doesn't like our code of morals. *shrugs* I think he's going to leave. It's weird, but Nero and Chaos feel so alive in my head. I just listen to what they say and write it down really. XD I'm not even joking... So I feel weird when someone writes them OOC... because the Nero and Chaos start complaining. But they sleep most of the time, except when I'm reading/writing here. Funny, huh? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted September 14, 2011 When you really get into something to know a character...he or she really does become alive. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted September 14, 2011 Not really I know what you mean. I don't mean teamwork as in working with one or two more people I mean as in how to manage and work with all kinds of people Anyway... How you understand him may not be how others understand him... Though I have to agree that I feel closer to how you understand them. Not that I like thinking of them that way XD I tried imagining and it really does feel weird with them reacting some other ways XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
