hopes 237 Report post Posted August 12, 2011 Yeah. Later. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Aeyra waited with bated breath for an alarm to sound as they opened the door, standing stock still for what seemed like an endless moment until she realized there was no alarm that was going to go off. Pyre and KKLT started running down the empty, silent corridor, their footsteps echoing through the halls, shadows racing across the white tiled floor. She hesitated before following them, wondering in her mind if this was a trap. Her iTouch out, tracking the positions of her friends, she strayed a foot or so behind the two girls in front of her. "That's funny," she muttered, eyes tracing the moving red dots, each labeled with a name. "It says Chelsea and Tsukiko are about to cross paths with us." It wasn't even a second past when the two sprinted in front of them, pausing when they realized who they were. "Aya-chan! Legend! Pyre!" exclaimed Chelsea, gasping for air. "You guys are here!" "What happened?" asked KKLT curiously, Pyre watching with quiet interest. "How did you guys escape?" "An FBI agent helped us," explained Tsukiko quickly, not caring to dwell on the details. "The important part is getting out now. I think we've alerted the guards." "You haven't," negated Aeyra, shaking her head numbly, trying to figure out exactly what was going on. "They're still all in the meeting room here. Except for this spare guy roaming the hallways." A sole blue dot was pacing through the hallways, heading in the direction of the presumed meeting. "And he's heading back." "Interesting." Pyre's eyes flashed with unreadable emotion. "Then we have to rescue Misaki while all of the guards are gone. Where is she?" "She's exiting the building. The person next to her has a blue dot. It might be the other Pyre." Chelsea and Tsukiko looked on in confusion. "What other Pyre? She's right here," pointed out Chelsea. "There's a second one," confirmed KKLT. "Aeyra's still trying to figure out which is which." "The blue dot is a mark of the Organization," stated Pyre, letting the words sink in, directing her gaze at Aeyra. "You think they could have switched the trackers, don't you? And that they know you have this map. You're tough to convince, aren't you?" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Wow. Nice writing Aya-chan!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Eh, I'll write a little too.... ---------- Misaki followed kaichou down the vacant hallways. Her mind was racing, trying to figure out what was going on. For one, she should have been saved by Legend and the others, and yet..... She was alone when she found her. And that feeling... She shook it off, trying to ignore her thoughts. Now wasn't the time to question it. They had to get out while they had the chance. But even so, her mind kept flashing back to when she woke up. ~~~~~~~ Misaki's head was pounding as her eyes slowly fluttered opened. The first thing she saw was a face, which she slowly realized to be kaichou's. "Kaichou," she asked quietly. She responded, "Misaki-chan! Are you ok?" She nodded slightly before making herself sit up. "What happened," she asked, "Last thing I remember was being knocked out..." She quickly filled in, "I saw you being carried away by a guard, so I shot him and retrieved you." "Is the guard...?" "He's probably dead by now." "I see...." She stood up and tried to walk before spots appeared in her vision and leaned against a wall. "Misaki-chan," she said, her voice filled with apparent worry, "Are you ok?" She reassured, "Don't worry, I'll be fine in a minute." Sure enough, the spots quickly faded and she began to walk. Kaichou grabbed her arm from behind and said, "Wait! Not that way." Misaki froze, a sudden chill running down her back. She felt sick to her stomach. Something was wrong.... "Misaki-chan?" She snapped out of it and replied, "Eh? Oh yes, um... Should I just follow you or...?" "Follow me. And here." She threw a gun to her. "You're going to need this." ~~~~~~~~~~~~ So now she was following her as fast as she could, her gun gripped tightly in her hand. She kept a lookout for guards, but there weren't any... "Hey kaichou," she asked, "Do you know what happened to the guards?" She replied, "Oh, they're in a meeting right now." "And how do you...." "Shh! Follow me, I need to do something first. Hide there," she commanded as she pointed to a spot. She nodded and hid where she was told. Kaichou walked up to a door and knocked. A man opened the door and asked something. A second later, she responded in a language she wasn't familiar with, though it sounded like Latin. She was permitted to enter and the door closed. A few minutes later, she came out and looked at a piece of paper. "Come on Misaki-chan, let's go." Misaki nodded once more before following her. After moving for a few seconds, she stopped. She turned around and said, "What are you standing there for? We got to move!" "Kaichou... Why were you allowed in that room? And what's with that piece of paper?" She froze for a second before answering, "They tried to replace me with a fake. Thankfully, I was able to immobilize her before she was able to get anything done. When I searched her body, I found that piece of paper. Don't worry, it's just a list of passwords. See?" She gave her the piece of paper. Like she said, on the paper was several phrases scrawled on it. She continued, "Since they don't know about the fake being immobilized, I'm taking advantage of that and pretending to be the fake. Understand?" She nodded once more, most of her doubt fading. Kaichou began to walk once more and this time, she followed without stopping. Not even once. --------- Ta da~. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Eh? I lied? :V I would more likely tell parts of the truth, then obscure a couple of details. Hmm. I can work with it though. As for the sheet of paper, that's not what I was thinking but it works. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 "Well, my friends have always called me stubborn," retorted Aeyra, eyes never leaving Pyre's. "We'll go and find them. We'll keep our weapons out in case we run into someone or if that Pyre happens to be in a... deadly mood. And you're going to be out in front." "Suit yourself," replied Pyre, shrugging her shoulders casually. This hadn't been exactly her plan... "You'll have to give directions though." "No worries, I'll be right behind you." Aeyra had the iTouch in her hands and her customized gun in the other. She'd made slight adjustments to improve aim, accuracy, and power, and even altered the bullets. It was small, but it had six shots and there were more cartridges in her pocket. "Currently, if we run, I think we'll catch up ten minutes. They've stopped walking, but they're outside the building." They rushed through the hallways, KKLT taking up the rear and watching their backs while they unwillingly paused at each turn to check if the coast was clear. Chelsea suggested taking out security cameras, but Aeyra said it was unnecessary. "They've probably known we were in here for awhile. No point." They emerged outside moments later, the two Pyre's eyes locking together. Flames seemed to spark as both lifted a gun. They spat. "You." Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Eh? I lied? :V I would more likely tell parts of the truth, then obscure a couple of details. Hmm. I can work with it though. As for the sheet of paper, that's not what I was thinking but it works. Sorry... Though I'm glad it works. ^^ What did you have in mind for the piece of paper? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 @Misaki-chan: Instructions and passwords in one, though it doesn't matter right now. Not when one of me might die. :V ------ "Stay back," IdentityUnknown cautioned to Misaki-chan, throwing out an arm as she glared at the other IdentityUnknown. "She's the fake," the second IdentityUnknown declared, glaring back. "Kaichou...what's going on?" Misaki-chan asked. Crap, IdentityUnknown couldn't help thinking. She's here. "You impostor," the other IdentityUnknown said through gritted teeth. "Take off that mask." IdentityUnknown's gaze was icy. "You've got no right to say that, when you're wearing one yourself." The other girls seemed unsure of what to do. Their eyes flitted back and forth between the two girls. "You won't pull the trigger if you're the true IdentityUnknown," IU2 smirked. "If you do, it's obvious evidence that you're not the real IdentityUnknown." "Oh yeah? Try me," IdentityUnknown said coldly. She shot the gun...at IU2's feet. "You've killed too many people. You've harmed my friends. I won't go as far to kill you, but trust me, I am perfectly capable of pulling the trigger." IU2 didn't even flinch. "See?" she said calmly to Aeyra, KKLT, Tsukiko, Chelsea, and Lia (I'm gonna pencil Lia in here since you didn't mention her before). "She's obviously a fake. Would the real IdentityUnknown do something so cruel?" What happened next was a blur. There was a blast of smoke (from who, it was uncertain) and there was a shout, "Aeyra! KKLT! Tsukiko! Chelsea! Lia! Misaki! Run!" ------ (A/N: This last bit is purely thoughts during what's happening, not specifying who from) "I thought she was dead." "Crap, it had to happen." "Perfect chance to complete the deed..." "Damn it, she has the upper hand in this situation..." "Now if there were only the two of us..." "Plan completely ruined...knew there would be a fake" "Need backup...if only I had time and it wouldn't seem suspicious..." "Only chance..." EDIT: Now you really have no idea who I am ...and I have to go. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Aeyra stumbled blindly through the smoke, hearing gunshots fire almost right next to her, and panicked, ducking down to the ground, mind whirring. This has to be the fake. In the smoke, there's no way Pyre would fire. She could hit one of us. Aeyra lunged at the silhouette in front of her, feeling the immediate retaliation as she was pressed to the ground. Reacting fast, she whipped to the side, aiming a kick at the fake Pyre, who she could now see through the dissipating fog, was pointing a gun at her. Aeyra's hands were on her gun as well, and she saw everybody frozen in various positions. Chelsea was a few feet behind her, having ducked as well after hearing gunfire. Misaki-chan was on the ground, having just dodged a bullet fired at her. KKLT was helping Lia and Tsukiko away from the building, and Pyre, the real Pyre, now had her gun aimed at her imposter. The atmosphere was boiling over with tension, two guns aimed at the fake, but the imposter was more experienced than them by far. The fake gave a sly cat smile, knowing nobody would harm her while they believed a friend to be threatened. Without shifting her gaze or hand, she said, "This game of charades is over. We have you all trapped. Run, and I shoot. Try and shoot me, I shoot." With her other hand, she took out her phone and dialed a number. "It's over," she declared into it. "We win. Send out the guards." Placing the phone back into her pocket, she examined them all. "You're not bad fighters you know, and you're smart too. We've always been looking for some smart young agents to train, those who could become like me. I'm a valuable agent, indispensable, and I got here very much like you. They wanted to kill me, but I foiled their plans over and over until they offered for me to join. It's not as bad as it seems. All the money, glory you could want. All you need to do is obey," she purred, giving a victorious grin as the guards came out the door. "You'll all have half an hour to make a choice. Have fun in a cell." Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Wait, what happened to me? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Wait, what happened to me? Sorry, I'll fix that. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Wow. So now we're being forced to work as agents? Reminds me of my story... Oh, and Aya-chan, I like it. Nice and evil. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Sorry, I'll fix that. Thanks. By the way, I like it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 YES!! :twisted: Seriously, are we going to be evil or what? If we all become evil, then who's going to rescue us? Sayomi? Cure-kun? Wildheart? Monsi? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Depends on what we want to do. Personally escaping would be too repetitive, and being double agents sounds dandy to me, of course, each person can keep their own loyalties secret to make it more fun. > Who's writing next? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 I think Moho. He's been here a while... Yeah, joining sounds good. :twisted: (We've escaped too much...) Who wants to join Them? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 :evil grin: You'll have to wait and see, won't you? It just depends on what scenario we get plopped in... BTW, do you have time to read that next chapter yet? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Eh... Shoot. Sorry, Aya-chan... I don't think I'll have time. Is tomorrow okay? I'M SO SORRY!! FORGIVE ME!! And seriously, I want to be evil now... :twisted: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Eh... Shoot. Sorry, Aya-chan... I don't think I'll have time. Is tomorrow okay? I'M SO SORRY!! FORGIVE ME!! And seriously, I want to be evil now... :twisted: Me too.... :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO~~~!!!!! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Aeyra stumbled blindly through the smoke, hearing gunshots fire almost right next to her, and panicked, ducking down to the ground, mind whirring. This has to be the fake. In the smoke, there's no way Pyre would fire. She could hit one of us. Aeyra lunged at the silhouette in front of her, feeling the immediate retaliation as she was pressed to the ground. Reacting fast, she whipped to the side, aiming a kick at the fake Pyre, who she could now see through the dissipating fog, was pointing a gun at her. Aeyra's hands were on her gun as well, and she saw everybody frozen in various positions. Chelsea was a few feet behind her, having ducked as well after hearing gunfire. Misaki-chan was on the ground, having just dodged a bullet fired at her. KKLT was helping Lia and Tsukiko away from the building, and Pyre, the real Pyre, now had her gun aimed at her imposter. The atmosphere was boiling over with tension, two guns aimed at the fake, but the imposter was more experienced than them by far. The fake gave a sly cat smile, knowing nobody would harm her while they believed a friend to be threatened. Without shifting her gaze or hand, she said, "This game of charades is over. We have you all trapped. Run, and I shoot. Try and shoot me, I shoot." With her other hand, she took out her phone and dialed a number. "It's over," she declared into it. "We win. Send out the guards." Placing the phone back into her pocket, she examined them all. "You're not bad fighters you know, and you're smart too. We've always been looking for some smart young agents to train, those who could become like me. I'm a valuable agent, indispensable, and I got here very much like you. They wanted to kill me, but I foiled their plans over and over until they offered for me to join. It's not as bad as it seems. All the money, glory you could want. All you need to do is obey," she purred, giving a victorious grin as the guards came out the door. "You'll all have half an hour to make a choice. Have fun in a cell." "Tsk..." Pyre clicked her tongue. "You don't have to wait for half an hour. I'll give you a decision now." *BANG*! A shot rang through the air and the fake Pyre fell onto the ground with a shocked look on her face. "No... way..." She tried to lift the gun but before she could, it went limp. A guard had just fired the shot. Everybody turned their head towards the door confused and to their surprise, the guards were actually Monsi, Sayomi and Lia's friend... and one more person... The person who fired the shot. The unknown person pulled off the hood covering the face. Light gradually shone onto that person's face. Everybody's eyes widened in horror. "Hi girls. Missed me?" the unknown person smirked as though everything's already been planned out. Straight away, everyone's gaze turned to Pyre, who seems to be frantically suppressing her grin. "WHAT THE HELL'S GOING ON?!" ----------------------------------- :P :twisted: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Darn it! Now we can't be evil DX!!!! *mehr* ... Whatever, what's been written has been written I guess... @Chelsea- Sure, I was just curious. I just want feedback. I'll write a little... Aeyra stared with her mouth gaping at the dying imposter, this having been the first death she'd actually seen firsthand (and conscious of it...). A pool of blood was forming under her body, the crimson spreading through her clothes, limbs splayed, the light in her eyes starting to fade away. It was worse because she looked exactly like Pyre, and for a moment Aeyra couldn't help but wonder if her presumptions had been wrong, if the one dying was her friend. It wasn't, but she couldn't tear her eyes away. "Aeyra," said KKLT, helping her up to her feet and steadying her as Aeyra wobbled from shock. "You don't have to look if you don't want to." A conversation was starting between the unknown person and Pyre, the real one. The man pulled down his hood and grinned. It was Mark. Everybody (except those who had come with him of course) were surprised, and cautiously welcomed him. "It's only going to be a few moments before real guards come," announced Mark, drawing out his weapon. "The meeting room was about five minutes away. Is everybody ready to run? No stopping if someone gets captured, and don't be afraid to fire back. This is war, and it's their lives or ours." "Ready," they chorused in unison, taking out their guns and sprinting towards where they knew the van to be. It wasn't there. "Oh shit..." muttered Aeyra, hearing footsteps behind them. "They're here! Just make a break for it!" Gunfire ripped through the air, and Aeyra felt a bullet chip her in the leg, causing her to fall. Chelsea and Misaki were also hit, and the guards swarmed them in seconds, dragging them back to the building after quickly disarming them. Looked like they would have to make the choice. ******** I chose us three because we wanted the choice to be evil. No saving us, we'll have fun with double agents of good and evil stuff. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Darn it! Now we can't be evil DX!!!! *mehr* ... Whatever, what's been written has been written I guess... @Chelsea- Sure, I was just curious. I just want feedback. No being evil! (Or so I say after killing a person ) :twisted: :twisted: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Damn... I REALLY wanted to be evil... WHY KAITOU?! WHY?! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Damn... I REALLY wanted to be evil... WHY KAITOU?! WHY?! Take another look at what I just wrote. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
