Ran's diary entries

[Ran Moorie 17]

Just a few entries from Ran's diary if she has one. :wink:

September 14

I can’t believe that I won the regional karate competition! Now that Shinichi promised me that if I won he would bring me to Tropic Land tomorrow….if he remembers of course.

September 15

Remembered how I said Shinichi might forgot that today he needs to bring me to Tropic Land? Oh well guess what…HE FORGOT. BIG TIME. And do you know why? It’s because he solved another stinkin case of his and now everywhere on the TVs is Kudo Shinichi this and Kudo Shinichi that. Not to mention that he was acting like a total idiot we his hardy har har laugh on his way to school and that he was talking about Holmes Holmes and more Holmes. I got super irritated. I mean who likes to talk about Holmes all day? (No offense to the Sherlock Holmes lovers in the world) Anyway he since he solved another case successfully it got my dad really mad. I told this to Shinichi who said it wasn’t his fault that he was a better detective than him. But I showed him to not to mess around with me cause I punched a stone pole and cracked it and that obviously shut him up. All the way to school he kept showing me his fan and love letters which caused me to get curious on whether he could just have on girlfriend. This of course just caused him to stare at me…..in a weird way not to mention that he accidently looked under my skirt. That got me really mad and of course after I hit him, he just laid on the ground with that smirk smile on his face.

September 16

I had a blast at Tropic land yesterday. Shinichi and I had as great time there. Sonoko said to me it was about time that you boyfriend asked you out which just made me cringe at the sound of that. While riding the Mystery Coaster a person was murdered there and Shinichi of course solved the case. It was a sad one where the victim’s old girlfriend was the murderer because he dumped her for another woman. She used the necklace he gave her as the murder weapon and planned going on suicide after murdering him. After that……oh it’s too painful to say. Shinichi left me that day. He ran off telling me to go home without him. I have a bad feeling that I will never be able to see Shinichi ever again. Once I got home my crazy drunkard father was getting high on his beer and made a big mess. Once I finished cleaning up I called Shinichi’s house, but no one picked up. I went over to his house since I was worried to death about him. I didn’t find Shinichi but I did find Professor Agasa and a cute little boy with glasses named Conan. Since Professor Agasa asked me if I could take care of him for a while I took Conan home with me because I agreed to do it. On the way I asked if Conan liked anybody and he said no, but I told him who I like. Surprisingly he guessed right on what person I like which is that deduction manic Shinichi. Once I reached home I felt like if Conan was my little brother.

[Lupin of the Heisei Era 248]

NICE!!!

[tengaku squared 291]

I have issues with using stinkin' with any character besides Heiji, because in most fanfictions, a western accent generally means Kansai dialect.

Pretty decent, though I think I caught a few capitalization and grammatical errors.