IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted August 12, 2011 Well, I read the first and second chapters. It seems pretty good, but a little rushed, so you might want to slow your pace down and give more detail and description in it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Amaranth 52 Report post Posted August 12, 2011 Ok! Thanks a lot, IU! <this just means that I'll never be able to update my other fanfics.> *sigh* <To think that I originally intended for this to be a one-shot.> But you're right. I'll try to add more detail. I'll do my best to make this story special, because it's for Chels! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted August 13, 2011 Aw~ Thanks, Ama-chan. Really. <3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lia. 45 Report post Posted August 14, 2011 I loved the first two chapters! Keep writing! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Amaranth 52 Report post Posted August 14, 2011 Thanks for the encourgement, Lia-chan! I'll try to update soon! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 Oh, this is a three-shot? Didn't see that before. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Amaranth 52 Report post Posted August 18, 2011 Now you know Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted August 18, 2011 Yes... Yes, I do. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cindy-Chen 82 Report post Posted October 29, 2011 Whoa! Love both chapters. I like the 2nd chapter at the end. I can just imagine him thinking about laughs. :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
