Black Demon 466 Report post Posted August 5, 2011 Disclaimer: I do not own Detective Conan nor the characters. Everything belongs to Gosho Aoyama. Special thanks to Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief for helping me come up with the names (I've already used Shinichi Natake's in another fic). Btw, since this fan-fiction is not so short, I'll post all of the parts in one thread for convenience... --------------------------------------------------------------------------- PART I The Moon shines its last cold light, as it slowly fades behind the black clouds. Hehehe.... When every beings and every movements blends in with pure darkness. At last, after all these years... The time for vengeance has finally come... Deep within the far wood, crimson and devilish flame keep blazing as the wind howls in horror. Laugh while you can... Your little happiness will soon be over... The cloaked grinning stranger throws two photographs into the fire. It has begun... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA....... The fire that rise from Hell.... * * * 7 o'clock in the morning. The lovely young girl shakes her father's arm and yells in desperateness. "Dad. Wake up already, it's 7 now..." Mr. sleepy detective slackly opens up his eyes. He yawns and looks at his daughter, while still lying on the large bed. "Uh... Honey, daddy's really sleepy. Is something important ?" The girl scowls as tears in her eyes begin to shed... Suddenly, his beloved wife, who's now in her thirties, from outside the room rushes in. "That is not very nice, darling ! Yesterday you promised that you'd take her to Tropical Island, have you already forgotten?" The handsome detective immediately gets up as if he has just remembered something. He holds his crying daughter's hands. "Just kidding... Hihihi... Can't believe the dear daughter of the famous Kudou Shinichi can fall into such joke that easily... Now get ready and wait for daddy in the car, OK ?" Right after her daughter smiled in relief and ran off their room, Ran gives her husband the famous death-glare while he's still awkwardly rubbing the back of his head: "Nice safe !" * * * The famous Kudo family has now arrived at Tropical Island. This very place is probably the most memorable for both Shinichi and his wife... Time is fast when you're not thinking about it. More than ten years have past since that destined event, but Shinichi can still remember his date with Ran clearly, as if it only happened yesterday... The roller coaster, the murder, his supposed last words with her, and The two men in Black. He can event point out the exact place where he was attacked and poisoned by Gin and Vodka... They are just memories, and he knows that he has to move on and overcome it, but they're simply something that he is never going to forget... However, the Black Organization is completely gone. Everything is now over. After the epic showdown with The men in black, Shinichi has been known as one if the world's most famous young detectives for his credit. He eventually married Ran and have a daughter with her. From then on, his career is just getting better and better. His name as a detective has been more and more well-known, and became a serious threat for the criminal world... As for his personal life with Ran, he can say that he's overly satisfied. * * * After riding the good old roller coaster, the two Kudos decide to rest and find a good place for lunchtime, but Megumi-chan, their energetic 7-year-old-daughter still wants to play more... Sometimes, Shinichi can hear people around him comment and compliment about his deeds (or his handsomeness). Many crazy fan girls even run towards him and ask for signatures and photographs. Just like the old times, which only seems to get on Ran's nerves. "Oh no... I think I've dropped my wallet somewhere..." Megumi suddenly screams in surprise when she realizes that her pocket is empty. Ran sighs: "Megumi-chan, what have I told you about putting a small wallet in such big pocket ?" "But big pockets are cool... Anyway, it's probably dropped when we were riding on that roller coaster. I'll go and find it right away..." "Alright, I and your dad are gonna wait at that mini-restaurant over there, just don't get too close to the coaster !" Ran recommends and begins to walk away with her husband... * * * It's just been less than five minutes but Shinichi already sees his daughter enter the restaurant. "I'm baaaaaaack...." Ran cannot hide her surprised look. "Wow... It was really fast, Megumi-chan." "Yes, I thought that I'd gonna have to search for hours, but then that kind boy ran towards me and asked if I was searching for a wallet..." Smiles Megumi. She then sits down near her parents and continues: "He said that he had found a strange wallet lying on the road, which really is my lost wallet... That boy is really cute and he says that he's 7 years old, just like me." Shinichi teases: "Oh really... ? Sounds like the beginning of a 'good friendship'...", and whispers to Ran, "just like you and me..." Ran's face turns red while Shinichi just keeps on asking: "But isn't that odd ? When someone introduces their age but not their name..." "He did tell me his name..." Megumi talks as she opens the menu... "... His name is Edogawa Conan..." (to be continued) 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rukia Kurosaki 357 Report post Posted August 5, 2011 It's cool. The last line had me thinking Shinichi was going to have a WTF? face. Awesome job. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Black Demon 466 Report post Posted August 5, 2011 It's cool. The last line had me thinking Shinichi was going to have a WTF? face. Awesome job. Thanks ! I'll keep updating this fiction Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lovestruck 70 Report post Posted August 6, 2011 Very good! The afterlife of shinchi and ran marriage! So u really believe they will end together.. I believe too! Anyway it's not the topic.. I like ur story so much better then mine "-.- Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Black Demon 466 Report post Posted August 6, 2011 Very good! The afterlife of shinchi and ran marriage! So u really believe they will end together.. I believe too! Anyway it's not the topic.. I like ur story so much better then mine "-.- Thanks, and I think your story is pretty good too It's much better than my very first fan-fiction (not this one) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Black Demon 466 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 Note: Sorry for not being able to update this fiction for a while I'm kinda busy with other projects Anyway, here's part 2 of the story. And yeah, sorry for my lame English. If you see any vocabulary/grammar/spelling mistake please correct me As for the story, I will be very grateful if you guys comment about it and give advices ... Also, this part is not actually that short as it seems, at least in my language -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- PART II Shinichi almost spits out the water right after his daughter finishes saying so. Ran's eyes are roundly opened as she keeps looking at her husband, while the young Megumi doesn't understand what's going on... "What did you say, Megumi-chan ? What did you say his name was ?", Shinichi repeatedly shakes his daughter's shoulder and asks as if he's yelling. "H-he said... his name was Edogawa Conan. There's no way I could be mistaken...", answered Megumi with a confused look, "but Dad, what's wrong about that ? Do you know him or anything ?" Shinichi, as usual, quickly remains his calm even when he himself doesn't have any logical explanation. He also remembers the fact that Megumi-chan doesn't have any idea of who "Conan" really is, so perhaps it will be better if it remains that way... "A-ah... No... It was nothing... I just get excited about his name. Guess his parents are also interested in mystery novels like me..." Megumi says and continues to search for foods in the menu: "Yeah... I think so too..." Shinichi sits still and begins thinking about the situation. Let's see... If I don't count my parents, Professor, Haibara, Heiji and a few other people, only Ran and I should know about my secret. More than ten years ago, my mom disguised as Conan's mother and pretended to took me with her, not only to lie Oji-san and the kids*, but the whole world. Therefore, it wouldn't be unusual if someone saw us as two separate persons, thus "borrow" Conan's identity. But there is something that I don't understand... Meanwhile, Ran is staring quietly at her husband... * * * The sky sheds its cool tears as an end to the exhausting day. Ran turns off the table-lamp and gently kisses on her daughter's forehead. She then slowly walks off and closes the door... "Is she asleep ?" Ran is surprised to realize that Shinichi is standing next to her. "Yeah... It's a good thing that we managed to get home before the rain. She seems to be really tired after a whole play-day..." "Want to drink something ?" Ran opens up the bottle of wine and sits down with Shinichi on the kitchen table. She fills the glasses of both hers and her husband's. Shinichi takes the wine and sits quietly for a moment, thinking about something... After a few seconds, he asks: "What do you think of what Megumi-chan said this morning ?" Ran smiles as she doesn't really know which emotion is the right one to express right now: "I don't know... Maybe it was just another person with the same name..." Shinichi slowly sips his glasses and stares directly at his beloved wife with a serious look, which only makes Ran realize that things are not that simple. "At first I thought of that too, so when you went to the restroom, I decided to ask Megumi-chan about his appearance for confirmation... And I got a shocking answer..." Ran keeps getting more and more anxious because she doesn't expect, or more correctly, want to hear Shinichi's final words. "That boy has dark hair, wore big glasses. He was wearing a blue suit and short pants. And Megumi-chan said that she likes his red bowtie..." Ran suddenly stands up with a extremely shocked face. "So does it mean.... that someone has been taking Conan's identity for some unknown reasons ?" Shinichi also stands up slowly and takes his wine with him. He approaches the window, where the only scene is the raining night. "For now, I still need more clues for any conclusion. But don't you find anything strange ? More than 10 years have past, Ran, 10 years ! Whoever is behind this, either that they know my secret or that they are a total idiot !" Ran's eyes turn round again. She unconsciously covers her mouth. "Yes, the boy whom Megumi-chan saw was only 7 years old..." * * * Detective Mouri's Office. A rainy evening prevents the old famous Kogoro from going to play the Mah-jong game with his neighbors. He ends up drinking beer and lying on his desk, drunken, despite the Yoko Okino live-show. The 60-minute-program has just ended while Kogoro is still drooling all over the desk. It is the time for evening news. [...]This afternoon, an Inspector from the Gunma Police District was found dead inside his house. According to the Police District, the victim is Inspector Yamamura Misao. The cause of death was not detected.[...] (to be continued) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- * Kogoro and Detective Boys. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lupin of the Heisei Era 248 Report post Posted August 27, 2011 good job! keep it up! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rukia Kurosaki 357 Report post Posted September 2, 2011 No. You killed Yamamura! DX Oh yeah, which Fic did you use my names in? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Black Demon 466 Report post Posted September 3, 2011 No. You killed Yamamura! DX Oh yeah, which Fic did you use my names in? Spoiler: I'll kill more... I used your names in another horror fan-fiction, however I'm afraid that it will take me forever to post it =___= I'm really busy at the moment =_= Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rukia Kurosaki 357 Report post Posted September 5, 2011 Don't worry about it. ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cindy-Chen 82 Report post Posted October 29, 2011 Whoa! This is really good! Please keep writing! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
