hopes 237 Report post Posted September 3, 2011 Alright. This is just a crazy idea that my friends and I had. Please... If you read this, and you like the idea, DO NOT COPY. So... We're not to sure about the setting and such, but we were thinking in a high school. There's a... Club? I'm not sure how to describe it. There's four members... (At least.) Ears: Male. (Well, he might change to female...) A person who is very quiet and always listens to others. He's the leader of the group. Very honest, understanding, I think you get the idea. Mouth: Female. A very loud, obnoxious, but lovable girl. She's out-going, fun-loving, and never shuts up. She loves to laugh and enjoy herself. Eyes: Gender Unknown. (We're not sure which gender yet...) A person with very large eyes, usually sparkling. Looks innocent, but actually is kinda evil and wants... Actually, we're not quite sure yet. But I think Eyes will be an antagonist, but possibly a good character at times. And I don't think the others know that Eyes is evil... Nose: Gender Unknown. Has a big nose (obviously... XD) And has an amazing sense of smell. Always sniffing things. (XD) Oh, and Nose might actually... Well, as a joke, we're thinking that Nose smells. XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD These are just some of the draft ideas for a short and fun manga idea. Just the out-lining. Nothing's set in stone... Oh, and three (possibly four) of us are working on this. Ears is being co-drawn by my two friends and I'm drawing Mouth. (I'm most like her...) Nose and Eyes were both going to be drawn by each of my friends, but I have a new friend who might draw one of them... Who knows? Anyway, that was our idea. Please tell me what you thought~!! XD But seriously, DON'T TAKE THE IDEA. Thanks. 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sherlock Lupin 41 Report post Posted September 3, 2011 I want to give you a rep for the sheer awesomeness of this idea, but I have to wait until tomorrow... sucks. I want to hear more about this later,so keep me posted, Aka-chan! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted September 3, 2011 Are those names nicknames? What's the plotline? :is curious: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted September 3, 2011 Same question as Aeyra. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted September 3, 2011 Well... We're still brainstorming. We have to talk about the plot line... Apparently, those are nicknames... XD They have real names. (We're still thinking... ) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted September 3, 2011 Well, my only comment that it seems to be quite similar to Hetalia. I'd suggest you add in other elements to differentiate lest it becomes too similar. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted September 4, 2011 I know.... That's the problem. But, we do have a few ways to change it to make it original. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted September 4, 2011 I wonder how you'll make it work... ... To me, it sounds kind of like Special A. (though I've only read like-6 chapters of that manga...) I was going to say OHSHC, but that's all males except one girl. (but they all think she's male.) They sound like an unlikely group though... I'd like to know what bonds them together. Childhood friendship? (though then Eyes's antagonist personality would seem slightly out of place) Or for personal benefits? (OHSHC) To be honest, I can't really glean much of a potential storyline from your details, and I'm too tired to really try and think of possibilities myself. (just came back from an Asian party... I played Manhunt and hisdtwenty, thirty feet up a tree. ) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted September 4, 2011 ...Wow, Aya-chan. Wow. Hm... I dunno. There's definitely going to be more to the plot, but this is just the basic idea. But nothing's ever completely original... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted September 4, 2011 ...Wow, Aya-chan. Wow. Hm... I dunno. There's definitely going to be more to the plot, but this is just the basic idea. But nothing's ever completely original... Is the 'wow' for climbing up a tree? (it's a very good hiding spot... The seekers walked right under me... Mwahahahahaha...) Yeah, nearly everything's been done at least once. It's hard to think of new ideas... Looking at your idea, for some reason, I thought of a spy group of sorts, with kid's having special abilities. XD Like, Eyes has super good vision, Mouth is extremely charismatic and can make people do almost whatever she says, Nose can sniff out weird things (like bomb squad dogs!), and Ears has super hearing. That's just what I thought of when I read it over the first time. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hejle 20 Report post Posted September 4, 2011 Sound like a good idea to me... But what about thinking up another (permanent) antagonist. And again, what kind of club.... Personally, I think it should be a political club... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted September 6, 2011 Wow, interesting idea. XD But, I think our idea is that they're simply a study group in high school. Mouth (Not her real name) needed help and asked Ears. Eventually, they all end up working together. Mouth comes up with these nicknames for them and then calls the group "F.A.C.E". (Maybe the letters of the names?) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted September 6, 2011 Wow, interesting idea. XD But, I think our idea is that they're simply a study group in high school. Mouth (Not her real name) needed help and asked Ears. Eventually, they all end up working together. Mouth comes up with these nicknames for them and then calls the group "F.A.C.E". (Maybe the letters of the names?) Maybe because all of those, um, senses are located on the face? So are these protagonists hopeless at school minus one, or is it just Mouth who needs help? What kind of plotlines are you using for a study group? :Aeyra's idea of study group is finishing problems, sharing answers, and leaving: <- No joke either... That's my friend's and I's idea of a study group... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Amaranth 52 Report post Posted September 7, 2011 *runs outside screaming that Chelsea and Aeyra are awesome* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted September 7, 2011 *runs outside screaming that Chelsea and Aeyra are awesome* O.o Why? What did I do? XD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted September 7, 2011 Maybe because all of those, um, senses are located on the face? So are these protagonists hopeless at school minus one, or is it just Mouth who needs help? What kind of plotlines are you using for a study group? :Aeyra's idea of study group is finishing problems, sharing answers, and leaving: <- No joke either... That's my friend's and I's idea of a study group... Moho's idea of a study group: Trying to work together on problems the group was struggling as, but end up getting off topic on some topic like Obama or how fast the heart can beat without literally burning out. :V Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted September 8, 2011 Moho's idea of a study group: Trying to work together on problems the group was struggling as, but end up getting off topic on some topic like Obama or how fast the heart can beat without literally burning out. :V Me and friend: Wanna work together? :does not talk to the other for as long as it takes to finish: Okay, answer check time! :just about everything is correct: See ya tomorrow! (my schoolwork is that darn easy... Competitions are harder.) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted September 8, 2011 Me and friend: Wanna work together? :does not talk to the other for as long as it takes to finish: Okay, answer check time! :just about everything is correct: See ya tomorrow! (my schoolwork is that darn easy... Competitions are harder.) *group is working* One guy: Hey, did you hear about *such and such*. Another guy: Yup. And everything goes off topic from there. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted September 11, 2011 Well, we've brainstormed a bit more... We have a better idea now~!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Amaranth 52 Report post Posted September 11, 2011 *group is working* One guy: Hey, did you hear about *such and such*. Another guy: Yup. And everything goes off topic from there. *nods* In the study group I'm used to, everyone does everything but study. @Chels-chan: What? Share it with us!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted September 11, 2011 I will when I have time... Gotta go now!! I'll tell later!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
