Rachel Moore 8 Report post Posted September 14, 2011 so here is my ran drawing. This is the first time I tried to draw her but I think it's really bad XD. 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kim-Chan 41 Report post Posted September 14, 2011 I think it's good, it does need work, such as her head shape & body/face proportions. But I think it's fairly decent. Much better than my first attempt drawing Ran +1 rep Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lia. 45 Report post Posted September 14, 2011 Cute! But, is Ran wearing a hat or something? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted September 15, 2011 ^^ It's not BAD, but you can definitely do better. x) Personally, I think the face is a bit narrow...like it's not...a diagonal line all the way through..if you look at the Ran picture on your sig, you can see that it goes down a bit before it goes diagonally...do you know what I'm talking about? xP But yeah, it's good for your first Ran!! Keep it up!! xD 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fluffy Ears 70 Report post Posted September 15, 2011 +1 R3p@ the drawing and +1 R3p @ Wild-chan I totally agree w/ you! : ) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rachel Moore 8 Report post Posted September 15, 2011 thanks everyone! :grin: I 'll be sure to improve on it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fluffy Ears 70 Report post Posted September 15, 2011 Thats the spirit! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rachel Moore 8 Report post Posted September 17, 2011 Well here is my second attempt at drawing ran 4 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kim-Chan 41 Report post Posted September 17, 2011 Better, her face is still kinda angler, and her eyes are sorta big. It's very good, but another tip for you would be that her hair, you did a great job but her hair sorta looks like it was split in half, Ran's hair is split like 2/3 for one side and 1/3 for the other. I'm not so good at explaining it, but do you get what I'm trying to say..? Still, one rep for you~! Your improving every bit by bit ^_____^ And judging by the picture I'm guessing this was your reference? Maybe a bigger one, but I was sorta lazy to search for it so Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted September 17, 2011 Woo~! x) Nice! Better than the last! Yayy~! You improved! And like Kim-chan said, her head is still just a bit too....un-round. I mean they don't just go from one like to the next abruptly. Gahh, I can't explain this right! Dx Do you know what I mean though? Like....round the corners a bit. xP Also, her hair doesn't go up THAT far...xPPPP But still, great job, great improvement! x) +1 rep! x) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emiko Seiei 46 Report post Posted September 17, 2011 *clap clap* ^w^ very good job! nice improvement but yea like the the two above me said, the face still needs to be a little more round. :3 but i love your determination to do better. +1 rep Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AJ M. 204 Report post Posted September 17, 2011 I'd say you have definitely improved. Just watch out for the face angles, they tend to be too pointy (Ran's face should also be wider). And the eyes should be more proportional to the face, just a little bit smaller. But other than that, I like it and you have shown growth in your drawings. :mrgreen: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rachel Moore 8 Report post Posted September 18, 2011 Thanks everyone! I'm glad that i had improved! I'll be sure to keep on improving! :grin: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
angelranchan 56 Report post Posted September 23, 2011 nice rachel!!! atleast you really express your love(?) for ran Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
angelranchan 56 Report post Posted September 23, 2011 captured on mushoku right?? love it! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shinichi Kudo forever 11 Report post Posted May 4, 2013 aw haha itss cute! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheLover 4 Report post Posted July 14, 2013 it's good, I love it. Go ahead! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
