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女の子の感じるを気にしない

たからあなたがとても危ない

同じ運命を持ち出したんだ

悲しくてちょっと寝てなる

Is japanese alright?

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  On 10/4/2011 at 10:48 AM, conankoibito said:

女の子の感じるを気にしない

たからあなたがとても危ない

同じ運命を持ち出したんだ

悲しくてちょっと寝てなる

Is japanese alright?

Could you translate that please? (:

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^ Agrees! ^__^

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Spring comes and rejoice was sung.

The little one opened his eyes while the day's still young.

The sun was early and it was still cold,

The little one and his grandma watches the miracles unfold.

The birds begin to sing, the fields give the smell of spring,

Oh what joy and happiness the cooling breeze bring~

But bliss is nothing but a moment of happiness

For a storm always follows after a state of calmness.

Suddenly, roars of intruders echoed the fields of green

The little one was afraid, it was not like anything he had seen.

They trampled the earth and filled the air with fear

Grandma comforted the little one saying, "I'm here... I'm here..."

But the monsters were getting closer and closer,

and so close before they even realize.

The little one then saw the four wheeled monster

with a claw so large in size.

The sky turned grey and the atmosphere was intense...

As four men came down with huge jagged stuff on their hands.

Grandma couldn't move and the little one too...

And the men came closer and closer, oh what shall they do?

The sounds of screeching rang through the air.

They were hurting grandma and they didn't care!

The little one was crying and watched helplessly

But what could he do? For he was only a seedling and grandma a tree.

The last few moments before grandma collapsed, she took a final breath.

And told the young one she loves him dearly, before her death.

The roar of thunder is now loud and clear.

The little one's cries, now no one can hear.

He tries to reach out to his grandma and stop them from bringing her away.

But they couldn't hear anything he had to say.

The rain fell hard, as though the sky was crying.

But this time, he had no grandma to shield him.

The hopes turned to despair, happiness to sorrow.

What the future holds, the little one doesn't know.

But he knows his grandma loves him, and wants him to grow.

So even if it hurts so much, he'll still look forward to tomorrow...

-------------

Gosh... This turned into a poem... <_< *sigh*

Sorry about that... I was suddenly... ahhh nevermind... >__<

Just...hope someone likes it >__< (Not exactly a poem person)

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  On 10/4/2011 at 5:53 PM, Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief said:

^ Agrees! ^__^

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Spring comes and rejoice was sung.

The little one opened his eyes while the day's still young.

The sun was early and it was still cold,

The little one and his grandma watches the miracles unfold.

The birds begin to sing, the fields give the smell of spring,

Oh what joy and happiness the cooling breeze bring~

But bliss is nothing but a moment of happiness

For a storm always follows after a state of calmness.

Suddenly, roars of intruders echoed the fields of green

The little one was afraid, it was not like anything he had seen.

They trampled the earth and filled the air with fear

Grandma comforted the little one saying, "I'm here... I'm here..."

But the monsters were getting closer and closer,

and so close before they even realize.

The little one then saw the four wheeled monster

with a claw so large in size.

The sky turned grey and the atmosphere was intense...

As four men came down with huge jagged stuff on their hands.

Grandma couldn't move and the little one too...

And the men came closer and closer, oh what shall they do?

The sounds of screeching rang through the air.

They were hurting grandma and they didn't care!

The little one was crying and watched helplessly

But what could he do? For he was only a seedling and grandma a tree.

The last few moments before grandma collapsed, she took a final breath.

And told the young one she loves him dearly, before her death.

The roar of thunder is now loud and clear.

The little one's cries, now no one can hear.

He tries to reach out to his grandma and stop them from bringing her away.

But they couldn't hear anything he had to say.

The rain fell hard, as though the sky was crying.

But this time, he had no grandma to shield him.

The hopes turned to despair, happiness to sorrow.

What the future holds, the little one doesn't know.

But he knows his grandma loves him, and wants him to grow.

So even if it hurts so much, he'll still look forward to tomorrow...

-------------

Gosh... This turned into a poem... <_< *sigh*

Sorry about that... I was suddenly... ahhh nevermind... >__<

Just...hope someone likes it >__< (Not exactly a poem person)

*tear*

And now........

The little one grew

And grew some more

Walked past a sunrise and

waiting for whats in store

He knew he fly! His wings unfurling

grandma's voice in his ear, saying....

Child! You will know.

When you groooowww up.

That this world its a cruel, hard place......

Oooohh....child! Dont give up, though

You can still find the winds that try to blow you away........

So go. On. Breathe. Fly.

You will be able to reach the skies....

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[Child]

Someday

I hope to find my dreams

Someday

I hope to spread my wings

Someday

Somedaaaaayyyyyy..

[Grandma xP]

Someday

Upon a shooting star

You'll find

Who you really are

And you'll

You'll beeeeeeeeee.....

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And i promise that i will always be there.

Even if the world is drenched in blood.

And i promise that i will never give up

Even if the heavens drop from above......

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So there's no reason

to feel upset

No reason

to cry over silly things.

No reason

to hurt yourself

ever again~

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  On 10/4/2011 at 4:55 PM, Anime Girl 4 Eva said:

Could you translate that please? (:

hahahahaha....ok,look ,but it is not really rhyming only it does when japanese

_____________________________________________________________

You do not care to girl's feeling

So you are very dangerous

I brought you up the same fate

Will sleep a bit sadly,

(dana~)

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  On 10/6/2011 at 11:02 AM, conankoibito said:

hahahahaha....ok,look ,but it is not really rhyming only it does when japanese

_____________________________________________________________

You do not care to girl's feeling

So you are very dangerous

I brought you up the same fate

Will sleep a bit sadly,

(dana~)

Thanks! But you can post in romaji, rite? Its just that it comes up as boxes on my screen.....

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I'd rather see you smile

Because the world seems to brighten

Don't wanna see you cry

'Cuz I feel a pang inside

I just want to sit here

Holding you forever

Because when tomorrow ends

Dunno if we'll still be together...

So I'll take this chance to say

Even if you've heard it a million times

That I love you more than you or me

Can seem to comprehend

And when I say those three words

It's not out of habit

Or to make some conversation

It's because I truly mean it...

But if the unthinkable should happen

And we go our separate ways

Just know I'll love you forever

Forever and for always...

P.S. Are we just going to have one gigantic song or are we going to end it someday?

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  On 10/10/2011 at 6:51 PM, IdentityUnknown said:

I'd rather see you smile

Because the world seems to brighten

Don't wanna see you cry

'Cuz I feel a pang inside

I just want to sit here

Holding you forever

Because when tomorrow ends

Dunno if we'll still be together...

So I'll take this chance to say

Even if you've heard it a million times

That I love you more than you or me

Can seem to comprehend

And when I say those three words

It's not out of habit

Or to make some conversation

It's because I truly mean it...

But if the unthinkable should happen

And we go our separate ways

Just know I'll love you forever

Forever and for always...

P.S. Are we just going to have one gigantic song or are we going to end it someday?

I really have no idea.....

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Ooooooohhhhhhh....

 

Forever and always will love you

If we ever are separate

Don't u worry, because I know

We can meet again

Together we can show

We can show the world

That we will always be together.

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I don't know anymore what this song is about,

But hey don't pout

Always, there will always be

A brighter tomorrow for you and me

Even if my messages won't send

We'll still be together till the end

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