Aeyra 260 Report post Posted May 23, 2011 Thank you to everyone! Bell-chan, thanks! *begins to munch* Aeyra, I like the critic, don't worry! If I only get praise, how will I improve? 1.) Proportions are so hard... -.-;;; Honestly, this is a lot better than how I used to draw.... 2.) I'm dunno... Sometimes they're green, sometimes they're blue. It's so hard to keep rack when Gosho is constantly changing it. 3.) I'll try. 4.) Bodies are so annoying sometimes, but people are the few things I'm good at drawing... 5.) It's so hard to get them the same size... >.< 6.) I'll remember that next time. Her eyes are always blue... The only thing people dispute is Heiji's eye color. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mabel 59 Report post Posted May 23, 2011 Her eyes are always blue... The only thing people dispute is Heiji's eye color. that's actually true! her eyes are blue... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted May 23, 2011 that's actually true! her eyes are blue... It might look green in 'weird lighting' but otherwise, they're blue. Maybe you got confused cuz of Cure-kun's drawings . He lost his blue colored pencil! (or so he said...) Heiji... Well in the manga and everything they're blue, but fans tend to color them green cuz they contrast with the other characters and it matches Kazuha... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted May 23, 2011 Hmm... Pretty good, but there's a couple of things you could improve on. 1. Her eyes seem a little big for her face. Her face needs to be elongated a little bit or else proportions don't work. 2. I think Ai's eyes (... homophones) are blue, not green. 3. Hair. It's much better than last time, but the right side still looks slightly off. I think that bit of hair sticks out more. 4. Legs. I think they're too long. The torso should be longer, and her lower legs shorter. Bodies are always difficult. XD 5. Eye placement. One eye is bigger than the other and they're not even... I'm trying to fix that problem myself. (why isn't this eye working right?! Argh! - that was yesterday...) 6. Collar bones. They shouldn't be that long. Usually people don't spread them out much farther than halfway to the shoulder. The rest is really good though... Your style is different from Gosho's but it's still quite nice. Keep practicing! (I hate being such a critic... ) ^ I agree with all of this. But it was much better than last time. Great job. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Forever Lost 55 Report post Posted May 23, 2011 Haibara's hair color and eye color actually change alot... They've been an aqua marine, blue, and now they're like this grey color.. and they've been every random color in between. Don't get me started on her constantly changing hair color. She's supposed to be more of a strawberry blonde but she's looked like a blonde for a lot of the series, then it changed over and over .. >.>'' Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted May 24, 2011 It can be so hard to keep track... >.< Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mabel 59 Report post Posted May 24, 2011 *Dreamily* Colors every where! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted May 25, 2011 It's a pretty rainbow! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Akazora 293 Report post Posted May 28, 2011 It's a nice drawing. The coloring is a bit messy, but otherwise good. The proportion is pretty decent. With practice you'll do great! Keep up the good work! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Akazora 293 Report post Posted May 28, 2011 The drawing is okay. Shinichi looks awkward and you didn't quite get the angle right. But otherwise pretty good. Practice makes perfect! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mabel 59 Report post Posted May 28, 2011 <-like that Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted May 28, 2011 Lol Bell-chan! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mabel 59 Report post Posted May 28, 2011 <-TRIED TO FIND EVERY LAUGHING ONE... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted May 31, 2011 I got the idea from Cure-kun's drawing, so thank you Cure-kun! Critic is welcomed, but don't be cruel! I hope everybody enjoys it! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anti-APTX4869 181 Report post Posted May 31, 2011 Woot! nice! looks like their roles changed... Shinichi <-> Ran Conan <-> Haibara Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kaRAN 10 Report post Posted May 31, 2011 nice Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
conankoibito 21 Report post Posted May 31, 2011 Nice Misaki-san! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted May 31, 2011 Nice! I love it! XD Guess it would be better if *female version shinichi* and *male version Ai-chan* had a less revealing smile >_< ---> I meant if they had a smirk instead of a smile But anyways... LOVED IT! XD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tna Uchiha 23 Report post Posted May 31, 2011 Haha~ very nice! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted May 31, 2011 WHOA, THE CONAN ONE FREAKED ME OUT FOR A MINUTE...kinda reminded me of myself when I was younger... XD But good job! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Balthazar Manfredie 226 Report post Posted May 31, 2011 nice Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mabel 59 Report post Posted May 31, 2011 Nice Misa-chan! But isn't *Conan*'s hair supposed to be longer...??? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aeyra 260 Report post Posted May 31, 2011 XD They're pretty good! *is too lazy to critique four separate people* Nice! I did one too, though, I didn't work hard on it at all (ten minute summary: *sketch* *sketch* Oh look, DC anime! *finishes up drawing, doesn't bother to ink properly or color or even fix things*) so it sucks... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted May 31, 2011 Thank you everybody! Nice Misa-chan! But isn't *Conan*'s hair supposed to be longer...??? Conan has his/her hair up in a ponytail while Shinichi's is down. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
