AiSuigetsu 110 Report post Posted August 6, 2011 sry to shinran fans out there for the horrible shinichi and ran plz, plz, plz give advices also, some parts of the drawing are from my own imagination so they may be ugly original: drawing: 4 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vi Graythorn 50 Report post Posted August 6, 2011 its really good but vermouth's eye r a bit small, and her head is a little more tilted +1 rep Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rukia Kurosaki 357 Report post Posted August 6, 2011 I like how you did her hair and clothes. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AiSuigetsu 110 Report post Posted August 6, 2011 its really good but vermouth's eye r a bit small, and her head is a little more tilted +1 rep omg thank u! ur like the only person who gives me advices... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted August 6, 2011 Wow!! Nice. That's a cool picture. Vermouth's eyes do seem a little small, and Ran's left eye seems little too big. That's all I see. LOVE IT!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sherlock Lupin 41 Report post Posted August 6, 2011 I'd give you a rep, but I've apparently run out of reps for the day. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AiSuigetsu 110 Report post Posted August 6, 2011 I'd give you a rep, but I've apparently run out of reps for the day. so had i, so had i Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Patronus Charm 53 Report post Posted August 6, 2011 green button alert... :mrgreen: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Black Demon 466 Report post Posted August 7, 2011 Again... I'm speechless Though Vermouth's chin is a little pointy Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Moonlight Magician 98 Report post Posted August 7, 2011 Yeah as everyone said...the left eye was small...but the hair and clothes are really good! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lupin of the Heisei Era 248 Report post Posted August 9, 2011 wow! you are truly an artist. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kleene Onigiri 42 Report post Posted August 9, 2011 Her head is a bit "stretched" to the upper right. And either the nose is a bot "too small" or you rearrange the eyes. The left eye needs to be a bit more to the left. In the original, you can see that the eye almost touches the edge of the head. Also, the nose is between the eyes. If you continue the line of the nose (upper part), in your picture, it would hit the eye XD In the original, it doesn't. So if you mahe the eye smaller or "push it more to the left", it should be better XD The right eye needs to be a bit "longer" in the width. Usually, you have 1 eye space inbetween (roughly). If you compare it with a straight line down to the mouth, the eye in the original would touch the edge of the mouth. In your pic it's not touching :V This sounds harsh ^^" I'm sorry D: But it's nice The face, especially in this angle, is hard D: I have problems with it too >.< Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mia Ehru 11 Report post Posted August 10, 2011 it's awesome one +1 was yours 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kuroba Kudou 5 Report post Posted August 10, 2011 It's amazing! 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sherlock Lupin 41 Report post Posted August 10, 2011 I would give you a rep, but I've apparently run out...Sorry! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anti-APTX4869 181 Report post Posted August 10, 2011 Amazing. I love it. +1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sherlock Lupin 41 Report post Posted August 12, 2011 Now I can give you one! A rep for you! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vi Graythorn 50 Report post Posted August 12, 2011 omg i realize i 4got 2 give a rep r4u Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildheart888 170 Report post Posted August 15, 2011 Niiiiice!! Love it!!! xDD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheBlackTac 70 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 Awesome! +1 Reputation. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheBlackTac 70 Report post Posted August 17, 2011 That's really good. + 1. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AiSuigetsu 110 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 please don't ask me why it's blue, lets just say one might sometimes find oneself in a situation in which u can't find ur pencil right when ur about to shade... think what you want, the answer is always maybe so, some obvious problems: THE DRAWING IS BLUE, shuichi's mouth is horrible, HIS left eye sucks, and akemi is not looking at you (haha) any other problems, please point them out P.S. the drawing is very off centered EDIT: P.S.S.(or P.P.S. can't remember) their faces are not shaded cuz that would make them look blue 5 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Moonlight Magician 98 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 You pinpointed all already and Akemi looks like a 40 year old. Where's my Yukiko? +1 I run out...I'll try later. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AiSuigetsu 110 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 ahh, so you still like yukiko better, well she was a favorite of many (in my drawings) akemi looks like a 40 year old? oh no! \o/ perhaps it was her long face well anyways its okay that uve run out, i haven't, and i just gave u one XD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Moonlight Magician 98 Report post Posted August 20, 2011 ahh, so you still like yukiko better, well she was a favorite of many (in my drawings) akemi looks like a 40 year old? oh no! \o/ perhaps it was her long face well anyways its okay that uve run out, i haven't, and i just gave u one XD <3 Yukiko yeah it's the face that's why she look like an old. Oh thanks even though I wasn't the one who draw that. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
