detective-db 16 Report post Posted March 19, 2012 One day, Conan had a walk along the streets of Japan. While walking, he noticed someone suspicious. A man wearing a black shirt with a black cape (i think it's called a tuxedo... "). Also with a black hat, black shoes and bringing a briefcase (leather... I think) which is obviously black. Because of his strange looks, Conan followed him. While following the man, Conan noticed that a small bottle fell from the briefcase so he ran and looked at it. Conan: -APTX.......... (BLA... BLA... BLA...) After knowing this, Conan gasped and decided to run to Prof. Agasa's lab... -o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o- Haibara: Sulfuric Acid....... mmmmmmm...... Oh my! This is the cure for the drug you took Conan... I THINK??? Conan: You sure? (still shocked) Haibara: Sort of... (still examining the bottle) Suddenly Conan ran and got the bottle away from Haibara's hands, ran to a room and without hesitation he drank it. Prof. Agasa (knocking on the door): Wait Conan! We are still not sure about the effects of it to your body... After Conan drank the substance, his body became hot... sweating... heart's pounding fast... Then, a high school student went out of the room... Haibara & Prof. Agasa: Shinichi! Shinichi: Woah! I miss this body... I'll just go and meet Ran Shinichi rushed outside... Haibara (still reading the bottle): Wait Conan or Shinichi, this substance... -o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o- Shinichi running fast towards the Mouri Detective Agency Shinichi: Should arrive there fast... Excited to see Ran with this... (breathes fast) original body back... When he arrived, he rang the doorbell & planned for surprising Ran Tensed... Nervous... Excited... Happy... Suddenly, the door opened... Shinichi: Sur... Ran: Hello Conan! You came back early and why are you wearing louse clothes??? Conan rushed to the room and saw his small body back... Because of this , he was shocked. Haibara: I wonder if he spent his ten minutes... WISELY!!! 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Silverbullet-kun 20 Report post Posted March 19, 2012 I love it. It is really funny +1 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AokoNakamori 24 Report post Posted March 20, 2012 really? i got lost, the story...eh. but the writing needs work. alot. i hate to be mean but i read novels and manga every day. so i know alot about story lines and writing structure i don't want to be mean ;.; i get in trouble for that alot Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
detective-db 16 Report post Posted April 11, 2012 Tnx! I'll do better next time... :-D :grin: :grin: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bicoy 0 Report post Posted April 13, 2012 nice! it's funny Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bicoy 0 Report post Posted April 13, 2012 nice! it's funny Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted April 13, 2012 Not sure what this is about. Actually, I got no clue what this is about. Also, what's with the spacing? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tomoyo15 4 Report post Posted May 26, 2012 Hahaha! That was so funny! :lol: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
