Misaki-chan 164 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 (OK, I have to ask: what exactly is happening? I am so lost.... @___@) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maltavite 61 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 [someone called FBI as Hunterz and Fyodor tracking Valther's gang. However, they are brought backup and they are threatened to open fire if their comrades was killed] Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sakila 88 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 (So half of my screen is completely marred. I only half saw Phi's post. This is ridiculous. BTW, You guys follow me if you want) "I'm sure we'll be fine." Sakila nodded towards Erru's general direction. "Go make sure she's safe, man." They parted ways. Sakila went in the opposite direction and slowly rounded the corner. She hoped the rest of her comrades were behind her. One of the kidnappers was running past the hallway. Sakila briefly recognized him as the man who'd been shaking Kosuke outside. She stuck out her foot, tripping him. She then hit the back of his head with the butt of the gun in her hand and used her glove to stab him in his knee so he couldn't easily run. She quickly gagged him and tied his hands up while he was still dazed. Pulling him up by the scruff of his neck she ordered him to walk. "You scream, I shoot," she said, shoving her gun against his head. Sakila continued towards the Southeast room Erru had told her about. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rukia Kurosaki 357 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 Erru frowned. There was one open option she was willing to take... "Fine, I won't aim this thing at you," she began, dropping her gun. "But there's one condition..." She glared up into the eyes of her enemy. "You let me take the hostage's place, and release him into custody of the FBI." She knocked Phi unconscious with her left hand and handed him over to her boss. "Take of of him..." Then she stared up at the kidnappers. "Do we have a deal, or am I going to have to open fire?" Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maltavite 61 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 "Oh, no no no, I didn't mean it like that!" frightened Raimir. Evan shouted, "Every one hour, I gonna execute every hostages unless you release Martin, Vickel and VhobiA's brother." Suddenly, Andrei appeared and he gave a speech, “Пришло время показать нашу истинную силу. Они недооценивают нашу решимость. Покажем, что мы не боимся их. Как люди, мы должны освободить наших братьев от ига иностранного гнета!!” (The time has come to show our true strength. They underestimate our resolve. Let us show that we do not fear them. As one people, we shall free our brethren from the yoke of foreign oppression!) his crew are cheer and Andrei added, “Наша кампания началась! Мы должны сокрушить врагов на куски, и мы можем освободить наших товарищей!!” (Our campaign was begun! We shall crush the ememies to bits and we can free our comrades!) shouted Andrei in speech. He show a BM-21 Grad in East Hook, his troop armed with PKP and FAD and wearing Hazmat suit. “Как я говорю, наш банды близится к своей цели, которой мы будем восстановить независимость некогда великой империи!” (As I speak, our gangs are nearing their objective, by which we will restore the independence of a once great empire!) Screamed Andrei as Highland, Narva St. and Fanteria cheer very loudly and fired their gun to sky. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rukia Kurosaki 357 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 Erru glared. "Better idea..." She raised her weapon and fired, hitting the hostage in the leg. As his injured leg buckled, she fired twice into the head of the man holding him, as well as the one to his left, and gave a hand signal. At this, the hostage rolled off the roof and fell, landing in the net she'd set up during her police fake-out. She ran over to him and aided him back to the barricade of cars, again lifting her weapon. "You want to play, you get a game." Her boss protested, "You're putting everybody here at risk with a stunt like that..." Erru replied with a laugh, "Well, he's safe, isn't he?" [bed time, back in 8-10 hours] Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maltavite 61 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 “This is it! Spin them up!” shouted Andrei as Evan, VhobiA and Valther executing the hostages outside and Andrei snickered, “Bad blood with bad blood, fool!" Raimir brings a guy, strapped with C4. Hidemi screamed in horror, "Ei-chan! You better don't hurt him!" Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lovestruck 70 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 ______________ Rose followed that woman who seems to be called Sakila into the hall, "This is getting boring, when'll the action start?" She stared at sakila and the evil man. "Right, Now." Someone came from her behind. grabbed her and aimed a gun towards her head. Rose didn't struggle. "Release the guy, I release the naughty pig-tails brat" Said the guy who was holding Rose. Sakila let go of the kidnapper. "Sakila, No" shouted Rose. Rose aimed her gun towards the man who was holding her and shot his left arm. "Serves you right, for messing out with me." She grinned. When Rose turned to see if the other kidnapper was still there, but he wasn't.. "I'm sure he'll get some back up and it'll be our end.." Rose said as if it was her fault. ~ [NPC ADD: Rose's friend, Tiffany.] Meanwhile, Back in the city. Tiffany got bored from waiting for Rose to show up it's not like her to be late, and she was supposed to be here one hour ago She thought. Tiffany tried to call her again, yet the same response "The person your calling is---" Tiffany ended the call. Maybe I should call her parents and ask if she was home? She dialed Rose's house number, Rose's mother answered and said that Rose still haven't come back. That's odd, where is she then? Tiffany noticed that many police forces were on the street, the street which leads to Rose's favorite shops.. Don't tell me.. Tiffany ran to the street, "What's happening here?" She asked the cop. "Better stay out of this." Replied the cop. "But it's about my friend, she was gone missing since like 5 hours, and she's not answering her phone and besides she's not at home and we were going to met each other here since one hour." She replied in a loud worried voice. "Then, she might be kidnapped as well." He replied. "What are you saying? Why aren't you doing something?" she grew angry. "There's already some FBI agents taking care of this matter, we'll try to reach them and see if it was safe to send some back-up." Answered the cop. _____________ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 Okay, I'm here! Sorry I couldn't answer yesterday. Library computer didn't allow me to log in... But now I'm trying to continue. I just got a bit confused while reading but I try my best... -- -- -- "Sorry, but I still didn't catch your name." Tsukiko said politely to the girl who had been dragged off the room with her. Now they were running to some direction with another girl called Erru. "That's Ai." The girl answered not so politely. "Are you mad at me?" "Yes, problem?" "Maybe in future." "Tsk." "Would you two please stop that and speed up a bit?" Erru shouted. The girls shut their mouths in the middle of the argument and just glared each other. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 (Before anyone posts anymore, I would like everyone to post a clarification indicating where they are, what they're in the process of doing, etc. This is so we can see whether or not the storyline matches up before we confuse ourselves even further.) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maltavite 61 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 [Question: Could you update the Valther's bio? Nationality: Romania] Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PhiBrainChild 27 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 (Erru knocked Phi unconscious with her left hand and handed him over to her boss. "Take care of him..." That would be my current location and state.) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rukia Kurosaki 357 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 [i'm out front talking to the criminals... caused more trouble than help... ] Erru raised her weapon and leveled it at Raimir. "Let him go, now! Here's the deal, we'll release one prisoner for every hostage you spare and return to you, starting with Colt and Ram, who you can have right now if you return Hondou Eisuke to us." Without another word, she bolted forward, heading back inside. Damnit, I can't let this happen because of me! Erru sprinted through the building, heading straight to the stairs. She rushed up the flights, knocking anyone who got in her way over the railing. She knew they were all enemies who served the kidnappers, and she had to keep herself from turning back to take them down. Erru kicked in the door at the top of the roof, stepping out brazenly and shouting, "Alright, release Eisuke to me, and I'll go trade him for Colt and Ram. You can trust me that I won't cross you... In a matter this urgent there's no room for risks." [spaced it to try and make it easier to read. does it help?] Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maltavite 61 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 "What the? I wont exchange for that! They are dropping their flag*! Now i want you release Martin and Vickel* or face the consequences!" Raimir shouted. "Now for the second act..." he thought. [Dropping their flag: Betrayed (Mainly, this is for gang) Martin and Vickel: My previous fanfic character, Tracer of Smuggler] Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rukia Kurosaki 357 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 "When did they betray you? Ram and Colt are hostages... I knocked them out and tied them up. But if you don't want them back, I suppose they'll go to jail, and I'll interrogate them for everything they know about you guys..." She lifted her weapon, pointing at Raimir with it. Erru's face was blank and serious. "If you want the two you specified, you'll have to hand Eisuke over to me unharmed..." She took three steps forward, now standing a few feet away, and took out a transmitter. "Sir, they want Martin and Vickel... have them brought here." She looked at Eisuke, then added, "And remove and defuse those bombs. We can have those two you're after put on death row for their actions." She looked down off the roof at her boss and nodded, then looking at Phi. Sorry, I can't put a hostage or kidnappee in danger... She silently hoped everyone was okay and able to escape soon. She just had to keep them busy and try to get back as many hostages as possible through meeting as few demands as possible. "So, Raimir, is it? Will you take the trade of your two men for the safe release of this one kid, who isn't even FBI?" Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maltavite 61 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 [What happen to my gang? ] However, Raimir refused her demand and he snarled, "I want you to bring his family here, Jodie and Hunterz's boss! Now!" suddenly he muttered “Aw, s***! Now whole city gonna hunt me!” Raimir keeps his crew NOT to hut the hostages including Evan's Highland which he and Tudor is sneak into the building to aid Highland Mafia. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rukia Kurosaki 357 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 [gang's still here. She's addressing you, kinda ignoring the other guys, cuz you have the hostage she wants freed] "No way, bastard. You touch them, and I'll shoot you." Erru looked at Raimir coldly, stating, "How about this, then? You hand him over to me right here, along with the others, and we'll drop the case for three weeks and let you get out of the country with all your buddies from jail. One thing: You may not harm any of the kidnapped, hostages, or my coworkers and their families. Does that work, or do I need to take him from you and tear up some more of your grunts?" Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maltavite 61 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 [Off for one hour for GTA Modding Enjoy!] "If you are going shot me, my crew is ready to execute them. Now do that they someone will assassinate someone" Raimir demanded, still hold Eisuke as hostage and aim down his FMG-9 into Erru. Meanwhile. (Still the Furher's room) Vlad remembered, "Listen, some of the hostage are sick. If this condition still happen, we can't do the second 'act'" "But now Raimir are pinned!" Gunsche shouted. "Calm down! I have a idea.." Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rukia Kurosaki 357 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 Erru took a step closer to Raimir and pressed her gun to his collar, grabbing Eisuke with her free hand. "Sorry, but I can't let you boss us around..." She swept the gun up and twisted it, effectively holding Raimir in a chokehold with the weapon, and grabbed Eisuke, shoving him toward the door. Erru used Raimir as a shield to protect him as she led the hostage to the stairwell. After checking that it was clear, she shoved Eisuke toward the lower level, watching him run. With a sigh, she smiled and tightened her hold on Raimir. "Hondou-sama asked me to protect him, and I don't go back on my word." She watched as Hidemi ran into the building and secured her brother, bringing him to the FBI hold. "Oh, and, I cut the power on those bombs, by the way, so you have no ace." She dropped Raimir to the ground. "So, do you want to take a peaceable offer or am I going to have to take all the hostages by force? 'Cause if you harm any of them, none of you will be leaving this roof on your own legs." Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BK201 31 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 [apparently I'm tied up by the kidnappees how very ironic =X] Ram was just silently watching the scenes before her. But when she figured out that the intruder was trying to negotiate, she just can't help it. She laughed out loud, in a mocking way. Those who heard her, (the others are too busy watching the exchange between the FBI and the org to notice) stared at her as if she was going insane. "Do you really think that the org would honor your wishes?" she scoffed. "You guys make me laugh. The org doesn't need 2 members like us who have just been outed by teenagers. They have other members out there. And we are better off dead for them. I have a feeling that that's coming soon." A loud gunshot echoed, and they saw Ram's shirt rapidly drench in red blood. "See?" she whispered weakly. "They just did." and Ram breathed her last. [just killed my character by the way. =X] Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rukia Kurosaki 357 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 [You can become of of the NPCs on the roof now, if you still want to post. Apparently there are a lot... I only shot 2, and Raimir's still commanding the rest...] Erru heard the shot and glanced toward it to see Ram fall. That's my fault...I should have given her one of the bulletproof vests I gave the others..... "You bastards! Shooting your own! You have no honor!" She pointed her weapon at Raimir, who was still on the ground. "I'd shoot you, but I don't owe you anything..." She swung her weapon, knocking him out with it, and pointed it toward the others. "Who wants to give me the hostages?" Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tsukiko 73 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 (Oh, I'm even more confused now. I guess that's because of all these npc's...) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PhiBrainChild 27 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 (@BK201 that's too soon!) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maltavite 61 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 [Action/Reaction {Eh, since when I shot Ram ?!}] "Not so fast..." shouted Evan as he aim his PKP Pecheneg as Tudor and his gang pinned Erru down. He also brought Hidemi and Eisuke back to the roof. "What the hell are they doing here" Raimir thought. Raimir then stand up, wield his Desert Eagle and aims into Erru with one hand, snorted "Thanks, now i gonna to recall my demand! I have a important thing or these families die, understood?" Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rukia Kurosaki 357 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 [someone else shot] Erru struggled under the grip of the enemy, jabbing her gun right back up into the chest of Raimir. "You shoot me, I'll return the favor," she said, hooking a foot behind one man's leg and tripping him. "Let those two go, now!" she shouted, struggling. "You better not touch them!" Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
