Rye 122 Report post Posted August 8, 2012 Sorry for the late update....I was busy with schoolwork and projects lately, so I had no time to resume writing. So, this is the fourth chapter, thanks for the great comments guys! http://www.detectiveconanworld.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/#EMO_DIR#/smile.gif KUDO SHINICHI AND THE BLACK ORGANIZATION : AMNESIA ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ CHAPTER 4 : THE CALL OF HELL ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Water ran from the faucet, as Ran was washing the dishes. She was smiling--she had no idea what was going on. As she held Conan's dish, it slipped from her hand and fell on the floor, broken. "AAAH!" Ran shrieked. "Oh...it's Conan-kun's dish..." Ran picked up the broken pieces of the dish. "Could it be something's wrong with him?" Ran spoke silently. "Hahaha..silly me...Of course he's alright.." Ran brushed off the idea. Yet she felt something was strange. Something...was wrong. Conan tried as much as he could to stay calm. Cold sweat dripped down his face, as Gin pressed the gun harder on his forehead. "You'll wake him if you do that, Gin," Whisky remarked. "Hahaha...Don't tell me what to do, Whisky..." Gin grinned. "Besides...HE'S BEEN AWAKE ALL THIS TIME!" A gunshot followed. The lightbulb above them broke, broken glass pieces showering them. Conan's eyes opened wide, fear consuming him. "So...the little monster, eh?" Gin said, grabbing Conan's hair and pulling it hard. "Tell me, kid," Gin spoke, pointing his gun toward Conan. "What is your connection with this woman?" Gin took out a picture of Sherry. Conan tensed. H-How did they...how did they know that?! Conan thought. There must be a way out, somehow. "ANSWER ME, BOY!" Gin shouted. "Be a good boy and answer...You don't want this to pierce through your brain, do you?" "B-But oji-san, who is that girl?" Conan replied in an innocent-like voice. Gin glared at him. "B-but, I don't know who she is!" Conan was trembling, but he managed to keep his innocent tone. "You won't answer, eh?" Gin said. "Well then...Whisky,give me the kid's phone." Whisky handed Gin the phone, and Gin opened it. "If you won't answer, then..." Gin smiled cruelly. Gin went through the contacts. There it was. Ai's number. "Now, let's see..." Gin clicked the phone number. It started to ring. "Let's ask her instead..no?" H-How?! Nervous thoughts passed Conan's brain. Haibara...don't pick it up...HAIBARA!" Ring. Ring. Ring. Ai's phone was ringing. "Hmm?" Ai muttered. She picked up her phone. Her eyes widened in surprise. "Who is it, Ai-kun?" The Professor asked. 'It's Kudo-kun," she replied. She answered the call. "Hello, Kudo-kun? Where are you? You didn't--" "Hello, Sherry," Ai turned pale. Her fingers trembled as she held the phone in her ears. Of course she knew the voice. It was his voice. "H-Hello?" Ai spoke, her voice shaking. Cold sweat ran through her forehead. I-It couldn't be.. She thought. "See here, Sherry, your little friend visited us...isn't that right, kid?" Gin spoke. "Haibara!" Conan's voice said. "Haibara, don't!" "Tsk...noisy brat, Vodka, cover his mouth," "If you don't come here, a bullet will pierce through your little friend's brain, DO YOU GET IT?!" Conan struggled as much as he could. Ai could hear his muffled voice. "H-ff-Haibara!" "So, you'll know what to do?" Gin asked tauntingly. "Yes," Haibara replied. "No! FF-Hai-HAIBARA! DON'T COME HERE! DON'T--" Ai hanged up. She knew what she should do. "Ai-kun, what--" the Professor spoke. "Hakase, speed up, please," Haibara replied. "I have to get to Kudo-kun immediately." Haibara's eyes were cold as steel. They showed absolution, fear. "O-Okay, Ai-kun, if you say so..." He stepped on the gas, the Beetle speeding closer and closer to the base. "Are you sure it will work, aniki?" Vodka asked. "Yes, of course," "But, is that girl really Sherry?" "Patience, Vodka. We'll know for sure...soon." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thanks for reading this chapter! Hope you like it! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ << Chapter 3 Please feel free to comment! 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheBlackTac 70 Report post Posted August 8, 2012 Buravo! *Claps* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rye 122 Report post Posted August 8, 2012 Buravo! *Claps* ARIGATO GOZAIMASU! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Vermouth-chan 3 Report post Posted August 9, 2012 Great story, Rye-chan! +1... Love it! <33 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maltavite 61 Report post Posted August 20, 2012 Good fanfic overall! I love it! Ari (OTTD) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
anniemay 2 Report post Posted August 21, 2012 I love the plot you have going! Please you must keeping going. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rye 122 Report post Posted August 24, 2012 Thank you! Thanks for the support! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miwako Sato 0 Report post Posted August 28, 2012 I like ... please update I can't wait !! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
