darkest absol 1 Report post Posted April 5, 2014 Just as the title says. I do art. The shoulders and face kind of feel off. Any input would be great! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
snowflake 41 Report post Posted April 6, 2014 -for the shoulders, what you could have done was moved the one on the left more to the right, that way it looks less like she's jerking it back or something. -for the face, I think starting the jaw higher up would have made her face smaller and more proportional. Also maybe move her eyes farther apart from each other and have the one on the right's tips with an edge rather than a straight line, maybe? I like the expression on her face, though. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nourov 4 Report post Posted April 15, 2014 Is this your first draw? well done You will need next time to draw the face more smaller so the eyes, nose and mouth become more closer.. And there's no problem in the shoulders, one is higher than the other but it looks good :3 Very excited to see your next draw, good luck ~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
