Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 10, 2010 ok, so this is the last one i can put out today unless i find some time to write later... anyways, please enjoy ^-^ the tiniest bit of romance between shinichi and shiho is seen here. ~Tacticalwolf~ Akai studied her expression. He could tell that it was a painful thing for her to do. Her and Jodie went behind a clump of trees and everyone turned away. After wrapping herself in a blanket and pulling on Shiho’s clothes, she swallowed the pill. She bit into her jacket once again, her muffled screams filling her comrades’ ears. They hated that she had to go through this multiple times, so much pain, physically and emotionally. When she stumbled back over, she was leaning against Jodie for support and her face was pale. Shinichi was about to offer her something to drink, when Akai handed her some tea silently. It was a brotherly gesture, but a sharp stabbing pain that lasted for a second seemed to pierce Shinichi’s heart, and vanish. He had a confused look on his face, not understanding what the pain was. Color started to return to her cheeks as she finished the tea, and just in time to gear up quickly before the explosion. She was already wearing her camouflage cargo pants, boots, and black tank-top, but she decided to go without her black jacket. Then she pulled on a bullet-proof vest and all her gear. ~Tacticalwolf~ As soon as she finished, the last phase began. They stealthily moved through the forest in groups of 4. Shinichi, Hattori, Shiho, and Jodie were one group, but Ran tagged along with them. All of a sudden the headquarters came into view, just as the bomb went off. People were being shoved by the blast, some dying and some being heavily injured. As the dust began to settle the FBI moved in, just to raise the dust again. A large fire fight began as the two forces clashed. Ran stayed hidden in a tree, having given Shinichi her bullet proof vest and also since she was unarmed. The air was filled with the stench of burning hair and flesh, along with that of freshly spilled blood. The air was humid and the putrid smell mingled with it, allowing one to taste the foul air. As the dust settled and the five minutes came to a close, police sirens wailed and guns continued to fire. Not only were there gun fights, but hand to hand combat also was going on in some cases. It was as if hell had broken loose. Blood smeared all the trees and fighters, and corpses were trampled as the battle raged on. Finally the police had come and the FBI had come out victorious. As Jodie and Akai explained the situation, the others were fixing up the war scene and tending to the injured. Shinichi looked at Ran with a smile on his face. He was about to take a step towards her when both his step and smile faltered. He swiveled his head around in search for the strawberry blonde. Finally his eyes rested on a lone figure, covered in blood and dirt, mixed together. She stood on a hill and gazed at the stars that speckled the night sky. Most of the people there had already wiped off the blood and changed, but Shiho had refused. She closed her eyes and breathed in the murky air, practically suffocating her lungs. Yet she had no bitter feelings towards the air for stinging her eyes, nose, and lungs, but she was glad for it. Like most people there, her eyes were watering. Although the others’ eyes were watering due to the air, her eyes were watering for another reason, but nobody needed to know that. Shinichi couldn’t help but stare. He hadn’t had time to study what she really looked like in her true form. Her short strawberry blonde hair rustled in the wind as she removed the ponytail, and it flowed freely around her beautiful face, filled with sorrow. No matter how much blood, dirt, and clothes she wore, her figure was still visible. She was even more developed than Ran, with a much more seductive aura. Yet she seemed to have an air of loneliness surrounding her, which kept people away. This teen, only a year older than Shinichi, had no place to go. Now that the organization was gone and the antidote was complete, she no longer had a use. Shinichi blushed lightly as he studied her, but soon grew to be sad. He finally realized what Shiho had come to a conclusion about long before. She didn’t have a place anymore. As Haibara Ai she had friends and a foster father. As Miyano Shiho, she had no one and nowhere to go. Ran began to call out to Shinichi but stopped when she saw him walking towards Shiho. She only watched with sad eyes, not sure of what to do. Shinichi pulled out a handkerchief and surprised Shiho by wiping away some of the blood and dirt from her face. “What’s up Kudo-kun?” she asked calmly. “Come on, let’s get you cleaned up.” “In a bit. I’m busy right now.” “With what?”~Tacticalwolf~ She smiled mischievously. “For me to know, and you to never find out.” Her grin sent a wave of heat through Shinichi and he could feel the color rising in his cheeks. He was thankful for the darkness which surrounded them. He took her hand and pulled her down the hill. “Come on, let’s go.” She looked at him quizzically as if asking ‘Where?’ She knew she didn’t have a place to go, and the way he had said ‘let’s go’ seemed like there was something behind those words, other than, ‘Let’s go get you cleaned up.’ He looked away from her gaze, turning redder. Then he whispered, “Home.” Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mysterious girl 3 Report post Posted October 11, 2010 is shinichi going to take shiho to his house or agasa's i don't know but chapter 6 will answer my question! oh and nice moment between them! hope there will be more in the other chapters! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 11, 2010 ^-^ thanks, i try! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 12, 2010 error at the second line(her). so far, it is amazingly awesome. Better(sorry Kaoko) than her stories... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 12, 2010 ahah, i did not catch that one, thanks ^-^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 13, 2010 No problemo Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Officer Kaoko 142 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 I feel sorry for Ran... you made her as an outcast... I didn't realise it till now that I liked her so much ... why? Nande, Tactic-chan? Why did you write Ran so poorly? Nande?! Watashi wa Ran wo daisuki desu kedo ne~ Doushite sonna koto?! Haha, fabulous, except that I felt sorry for Ran. Yes, you write really well. I love it! Now, for the next chapter~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 lol, kaoko~chan, just put up with it for a while, you will become happy later on Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 At ttw: +1 @ kaoko: no pain, no gain. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 also kaoko~chan, that also means that you just realized how much you love a character, before you had told me that you didn't really care too much but you decided to stick with shinran just cuz it was the main pairing... so i had really hoped this story would turn you conai.... but it may not happen now TT.TT Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 Yep. She was just making up reasons for why she is a shinran. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Officer Kaoko 142 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 No, no! I don't mean it that way! It's okay, I don't mind Shinichi-Shiho as the main pairing (in fact I kind of liked it). But, what I actually mean is... even though you wanted to remove Ran from Shinichi's love life, I was thinking you should do it... more smoothly. Rather than shooing Ran off... it made me kind of... I felt sorry for Ran... You get what I mean? Like, just make her fall in love with another guy and she is the one who will shoos Shinichi off... not him shooing her off. Uhm! It's hard to express it by words... so... Yeah... Ohohohoho! also kaoko~chan, that also means that you just realized how much you love a character, before you had told me that you didn't really care too much but you decided to stick with shinran just cuz it was the main pairing... so i had really hoped this story would turn you conai.... but it may not happen now TT.TT You tried to make me into ConAi fan?! You don't have to... because I am already supporting it in a way! Ohohohoho! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 24, 2010 just read the next chap... and so on... you'll see wut happens Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Officer Kaoko 142 Report post Posted October 24, 2010 just read the next chap... and so on... you'll see wut happens Yeah ! I would just do what you told me ! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 24, 2010 ^-^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 24, 2010 No, no! I don't mean it that way! It's okay, I don't mind Shinichi-Shiho as the main pairing (in fact I kind of liked it). But, what I actually mean is... even though you wanted to remove Ran from Shinichi's love life, I was thinking you should do it... more smoothly. Rather than shooing Ran off... it made me kind of... I felt sorry for Ran... You get what I mean? Like, just make her fall in love with another guy and she is the one who will shoos Shinichi off... not him shooing her off. Uhm! It's hard to express it by words... so... Yeah... Ohohohoho! You tried to make me into ConAi fan?! You don't have to... because I am already supporting it in a way! Ohohohoho! So..... It is alright for Ran to fall for another man and leaves shinichi But It isn't alright for Shinichi to fall for another woman and leaves Ran? What kind of logic is that??? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 24, 2010 lol, it's logic of a Ran lover Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 24, 2010 Hahaha... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Officer Kaoko 142 Report post Posted October 24, 2010 So..... It is alright for Ran to fall for another man and leaves shinichi But It isn't alright for Shinichi to fall for another woman and leaves Ran? What kind of logic is that??? Means... I don't have to feel sorry for Ran~ And Shinichi had fallen for Shiho instead, right? So, both of them broke up with each other, and we don't have to feel sorry neither both of them, since they both chose their own... Akhh! Too lazy to explain! You'll get what I mean... Heck! Just understand already, will ya? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 24, 2010 don't worry i understand, shinichi already would be breaking an's heart, so it's like their breaking each other's heart... ran has her bf tell shinichi off, while shinichi basically turns a cold shoulder on their love relationship... so basically it's neutral in the end Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 24, 2010 ???weirdo... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 24, 2010 its not really weird, it's like say IF you DID like RAN but you prefer the pairing of shinshi even though ran is your fav character, it's like you want to see Ran happy but you want to see shinichi and shiho together either way, so you don't want Ran to be unhappy so u want her to be the one to turn shinichi down than shinichi turn her down... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 24, 2010 I know! But that would make it look like shinichi ended up with shiho bcoz he had no other choice. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 24, 2010 no he fell for shiho, and ran fell for some other guy AT THE SAME TIME and they tell each other AT THE SAME TIME like literally, they both just blurt it out at the same time.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 24, 2010 That might be better for shinran fan but if you used that ending, it would change chapter 6 to the end. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
