Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 22, 2010 ok well..... sorry... they just seem to get shorter and shorter, but this is coming to and end, and the scenes are getting wilder and wilder and i can't just throw more than one part into a chapter... it just shouldnt be done... so here you are, a short chapter! She smirked. “Explanation? Isn’t it obvious? I’m not dead. I’m an actress. That’s that.” “That’s just it! Why aren’t you dead?” he screamed, exasperated and angry. Immediately he realized he had chosen the wrong words and regretted it. The smile left her face and her features hardened into an emotionless mask. “Sorry that I’m not dead. If you would prefer, you can pretend we never met. I’m doing that already.”~Tacticalwolf~ He had a sorry expression on his face as he said, “Miyano, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean it that way.” She sighed. “I know Kudo-kun, but it might have been better if you did. We could put this behind us.” “But I can’t forget you.” Shiho gritted her teeth. She decided. It was now or never, he had provided her with the perfect line to confess. She clenched her fists and opened her mouth to speak. Immediately she was cut off. Ran groaned and sat up. First she saw Shinichi and smiled, then her eyes landed on Shiho and widened. Seeing her shocked expression, Shiho said in a light-hearted manner, “Ah, Mouri-san, glad to have you back.” “M-Miyano-san? Is it really you?” “In the flesh.” “B-but we all attended your funeral!” “The casket was empty. Nobody looked inside right? You had a funeral for a casket.” She nodded her head. “Then why did you fake your death?” Shiho’s face softened, the way it did whenever she was talking about her feelings to another girl. “You know the reason. The same reason I didn’t go with the two of you on your first date.”~Tacticalwolf~ “Y-you mean… even after all this time?” “Hah, when you’ve fallen as hard as I have it’s hard to pull out.” A bitter smile crept onto her face as she said those words. “Don’t worry,” she continued, “I have no interest in taking away your most prized possession.” Ran blushed. Shiho smirked and said, “Oh yes, I’m quite sure Shinichi had wanted to ask you something.” Shinichi tensed as Ran’s expecting gaze turned back to him. He gulped and stammered, “I was w-wondering what you wanted for dinner.” Ran’s smile faltered, her expectations having been shot down. To make it worse, Shinichi grabbed Shiho’s wrist and pulled her away before waiting for Ran’s response. “What?” Shiho asked, annoyed at his rude behavior towards her and Ran. “What are you saying?” he seethed. “I thought you were going to propose.” He opened his mouth to protest, immediately shutting it since her words were true. “It’s best if we don’t talk until you’re engaged to Ran. She’s having a hard time because of your actions.” “But what about you?” As soon as the words escaped, he covered his mouth. Her eyes narrowed. “What about me?” she asked slowly, with a poisonous tone, dripping off every syllable. He licked his dry lips and swallowed, glancing around for a way out. Everyone was staring at them. “I-I mean…” he trailed off. “Why does it matter what I think? This has nothing to do with me.” “Yes it does,” he whispered. “Oh really? Do explain.” “Because,” he blushed slightly as he paused, “you like me.” She snorted at that comment, as if it was absurd. It hurt Shinichi’s feelings and slightly angered him. “What makes you think I like you?” she asked mockingly, as if he was crazy. Now, slightly louder, he said, “I know you like me!” “So what? Even if I did like you, why should that matter?” Now, fully angry he shouted, “Why does it matter? Because I love you, damn it! Is it that hard to figure out?!”~Tacticalwolf~ His eyes, Shiho’s eyes, and Ran’s eyes all widened at the sudden confession. It was dead silent. All had immediately ceased talking at the outburst. Ran’s heart practically shattered in two, and Shinichi sunk to the ground, emotionally drained. His hands gripped at the sand, as if he was trying to find a thread of hope, or a distraction, to remove his words that hung in the air, to help the two girls forget his words, even if only temporarily. Then the thread magically appeared in his fingers as a red charger pulled into the parking lot. Yukiko and Yuusaku stepped out of the car and into the dramatic scene, abruptly changing the mood. “Sorry we’re late Shin-chan! We had a few errands to run,” Yukiko called out loudly. Finally noticing the tense atmosphere, her smile fell. Apparently something in her plan had gone wrong. She hoped Shiho and Shinichi would become best friends again and stay in touch. Shinichi had been so down about her death so he hoped to make him happy. She didn’t realize that Shinichi’s feelings had shifted to the strawberry blonde, and that a simple relationship was impossible for them.~Tacticalwolf~ Big miscalculation on her part, and the tense atmosphere conveyed that to her. hope you enjoyed! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 Wooo! A story to read right after waking up! Thanks! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 no prob ^-^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 Amazing! The confession was really cool. And too bad for Ran... At least she still has Eisuke Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 lolz should i throw him in at some point lol jk!... or was I? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 Your story, your choice. But make sure that Eisuke doesn't have a crush on Shiho Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 like hell would that happen! nobody but shinichi can have shiho!!!!! oh and even if he had a crush on her i'd make him have a bigger one on Ran but i still don't know whether i should add him in yet Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shinichi Kodou 12 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 wooow!! that was shocking! lol never thought shinichi would act that way! brave confession. but still poor Ran i feel very sorry for her and i'm angry at Shinichi "idiot! you love Ran and not Shiho wake up!" lol anyway waiting for the next chapter, and feeling sad that chapters are getting shorter *sob* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 wooow!! that was shocking! lol never thought shinichi would act that way! brave confession. but still poor Ran i feel very sorry for her and i'm angry at Shinichi "idiot! you love Ran and not Shiho wake up!" lol anyway waiting for the next chapter, and feeling sad that chapters are getting shorter *sob* Shinichi likes Ran!? What da hell!? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shinichi Kodou 12 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 Shinichi likes Ran!? What da hell!? yeah! he loves her! they were suposed to get engaged but all of the sudden shinichi changes and shifts his emotions "out loud" and that got me angry at him i want him to be with Ran ..but still this story is amazingly awsome and i do loovvve it though i'm a ShinRan Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 Believe me. Even if they get maRried, they will divorce... I guess Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shinichi Kodou 12 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 Believe me. Even if they get maRried, they will divorce... I guess sorry but seems like i didnt really get it.. by the word "divorce" do u mean shinichi and Ran or Shinichi and shiho? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 Shinran of course. Shinichi will always be loyal to ai Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shinichi Kodou 12 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 by being loyal he should actually be, to his childhood friend and love interst ai just jumped out of nowhere! Ran and Shinichi are just cuuute together SHINRAN FOREVERR!!! okay i think i went off topic we are here to tell Tacticalwolf-chan how much we love her story and not to discuss shinichi's married life + Tacticalwolf-chan is a Conai i think it would be kind of offencsive if i keep saying such things after admitting i lovvvve her story (which is a Conai story) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 shinichi will be loyal to her as a friend. a friend. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shinichi Kodou 12 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 shinichi will be loyal to her as a friend. a friend. Should Shinichi and Ran get divorced just for Ai??? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 lawl, you guys love to go offtopic! anyways, it's fine that you wish it was a shinran story, but i mean, i hinted in previous chapters that shinichi might not really love Ran, so this wasn't exactly out of nowhere... and also, don't forget that this is years later.. i'm just sort of having trouble trying to find the right emotions sometimes for the characters >.< I mean, obviously gosho hasn't posted anything like this before! oh yeah, and if you think about the recent london case... then you'll remember that shinichi grabs Ran's hand and says something about his feelings... that pissed me off.... but either way, he did bravely announce them... but i liked it when ai was scolding him hehe... that was funny... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shinichi Kodou 12 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 lawl, you guys love to go offtopic! anyways, it's fine that you wish it was a shinran story, but i mean, i hinted in previous chapters that shinichi might not really love Ran, so this wasn't exactly out of nowhere... and also, don't forget that this is years later.. i'm just sort of having trouble trying to find the right emotions sometimes for the characters >.< I mean, obviously gosho hasn't posted anything like this before! oh yeah, and if you think about the recent london case... then you'll remember that shinichi grabs Ran's hand and says something about his feelings... that pissed me off.... but either way, he did bravely announce them... but i liked it when ai was scolding him hehe... that was funny... loool yeah! when shinichi talked about his feelings to Ran back then,, he didnt piss me off he made me PROUD OF HIM anyway sorry for going offtopic again.. btw i still respect that u are a conai and its normal for u to ryt stories abt conanxai ..i admitt they are AMAZING so keep it up please Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 sure, don't forget, i do take requests and write stories according to requests (i am on backorder, lawl, but i am slowly getting them done... if you do want one, i just don't know when it will be finished, but i will try to get it done asap) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shinichi Kodou 12 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 LOL yaaay thanxx but as far as i knw ur too busy these days and i dont want to add more stress to ur work so..its up to you i dont wanna be mean Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 But it would be cool if gosho made shinichi holds Ai's arm and propose her after she scolded. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 that'd be hilarious, but i'd love it! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shinichi Kodou 12 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 " she scolded"??? she doesnt have to because the already belong to each other! let Ai find somebody else and leave them alone its their life why is she ruining it oopps im talking to 2 conai's here i think they're gonna break my skull Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 Then why don't ran do that. She can just piss off and go find eisuke and get lost. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 23, 2010 exactly! there's no reason for such a crybaby to take the obviously BETTER couple apart! ai and conan have already gone through so much more than shinichi and ran... and they havn't even known each other for half the time shinichi has known Ran! also, ai knows conan better! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
