Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 31, 2010 i know that it's short, but i thought of a good idea to use for a halloween story, sadly for all us aicon fans it's a shinran story... anyways, do enjoy this extreeeeeeemely short story, if i feel like it i might add more later! “Conan-kun, Ai-chan!” called Ayumi, “Hurry up and let’s go!” The two shrunken teens sighed at the thought. They were being forced to trick or treat with the detective boys. Their plans of watching horror movies all night flushed right down the drain. Inside the professor’s house the two grumbled as they pulled on their costumes. Conan slipped on a pair of ‘furry’ gloves and boots and then pulled on a pair of ears and a tail. He ripped his clothes a bit and then placed in some sharp canines. Ai was in her room pulling on black clothes. She wore a black mini-skirt and a black tank-top and boots. Then she pulled on black cat gloves and black cat ears. When she walked down the steps, Conan couldn’t help but stare. Even as a child she looked great in those ‘revealing’ sort of clothes. “Pick up your jaw and let’s go,” she smirked. “You know that if I’m staring at you, a lot of guys will be staring at you as well?” “Well then, your job for tonight is to keep their eyes from landing on me, mmkay, Mei-tantei?” she asked with a mischievous grin. He blushed at her grin and that made her grin widen slightly. “My my, I’m surprised to see you blushing, even after we’ve been dating for a few months.” After turning ten in their child forms, they had begun to date. It wasn’t exactly public since even they weren’t sure of their future yet since the syndicate had yet to be removed. For now though, they could live as regular kids. “6 months,” whispered Conan. Before he said anymore Ai added in, “and two days.” He smiled, glad he wasn’t the only one who remembered the exact day the two had decided to date. She wrapped her arm around his and the two walked out of the house to join their kid friends. Immediately swarmed by the other three, the two were pulled apart by Ayumi and Mitsuhiko. The two teens sighed. ~Tacticalwolf~ Yep, it was just another date for the two with a little perk. Halloween and, of course, candy. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Officer Kaoko 142 Report post Posted October 31, 2010 Wow, nice short story! It's nice to think you would write a fan-fic about Halloween in Halloween. Amazing, even if it is short, I still enjoyed reading it. Haha, no matter what the story might be about, you'd always write about Conan & Ai romantic side. Ohohohoho! Your reward Kiel-chan: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 31, 2010 woohoo! i love you! that onion is freakin amazin! don't worry there's also a shinran halloween story! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shinichi Kodou 12 Report post Posted October 31, 2010 wooow! great one ..and extremely-short-but-extremely-joyfull as well as kaoko-chan said although its short its still enjoyable and good to read for halloween! and ... 6 months and two days? thats a long time thanx for sharing this keep ur good work up Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 small(short) but terrible(scary- awesome) NICE ONE!!! BTW, are you continuing your main story? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 yeah, but this month is gonna be hell since i got to write a 50,000 word story before the end of november, i wasn't allowed to start until today, so i'm going to be workin on it like crazy!!!!!!!!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 And couldn't just do it secretly...if you had known the topic... or have you not? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 its really a story i come up with completely... it's my own story, i already know the whole plot and the characters... we were allowed to plan as much as we wanted as long as we didn't start the actual story, and i have an idea... it'll be a sort of 'the start of a new atlantis' sort of thing... if you want to read it as i go, just tell me and i can send you guys the story as i update it ^-^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 Nah, you look busy enough... I don't want to put a burden on you. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 lol ok, but at some point, bout halfway through, i would like some editors if anybody would be willing... it may not turn out as well as my fanfics, cuz i hate having to come up with my own character personalities *sigh* i suck at it! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 Neh, you don't... your compositions is not bad... yuo just need to work on the characterizations... Which means that you should pick up some good novels and start reading.... lol Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 that's the problem... i can't find any good novels anymore...you have no clue how many books i've one through... and anyways, it's rare for me to find any book that i like... i'm still not even sure of the genre i like best.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted November 2, 2010 There was a series which my brother(HIGH SCHOOL) told me about which he claimed to have improved his characterization... Want the title? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted November 2, 2010 sure, and when you tell me the title, please tell the genre as well Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted November 2, 2010 Alright... I'll tell you tomorrow... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted November 2, 2010 lol, hurry i've started typing today!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bajune 0 Report post Posted November 21, 2010 i like the story even though its short ive enjoy it!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted November 21, 2010 i like the story even though its short ive enjoy it!! thnx ^-^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
