Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 31, 2010 It's longr than my conai story, but i don't know how to do love scenes between these two.. it's sort of hard... well anyways, do ejoy all yo shinran fans! Currently dedicated to Kaoko~chanand Shinichi Kodou One week ago the syndicate had been reprimanded and disposed of. Ai was allowed the information on the actual drug to create an antidote, and only the police, FBI, and a few select others, knew what the identities of the two shrunken teens were. “Kudo-kun,” Ai called over the phone. “Yeah?” he replied, holding the phone to his ear. “Come over.” “Err, can this wait? We’re eating dinner and then Ran is making me go trick or treating.” He could hear her sigh on the other end. “Kudo-kun, tonight is Halloween, I think you can put this night to good use. If you don’t come now, I won’t be giving you any candy or the ANTIDOTE if you don’t get yourself over here this instant.” At first Conan was going to shrug off her demanding tone, until he heard the word antidote. That perked his interest. “I’ll be right over!” he said enthusiastically. He hung up and basically sprinted out the door yelling, “See you later Ran-neechan, the professor needed me for something!” “Ah! Conan-kun!” she shouted. Before she could get a response, he was gone, flying down the streets on his skateboard. A few minutes passed and he was inside the professor’s house standing in front of Ai with his hand outstretched. Ai looked at him, click a button on her watch and said, “That’s a new record time.” “Whatever, just gimme the pill.” She sighed. “Calm down Kudo-kun, you’ll get it, just relax some.” He took a deep breath and Ai smirked. “Good, now, when you take it you will change immediately. I believe you intend to visit Ran immediately and tell her everything, meaning that I will be dressing as you… again. You’ll owe me big time for this,” she said sternly. Conan nodded his head vigorously, practically willing to sell his soul to the devil if it would get him the antidote. She plopped it down in his hand he took off to the Kudo residence. With a sigh she got up from her seat and walked to her room where she retrieved a Conan costume. At the Kudo residence, Conan went to his room and took the pill, immediately collapsing to the ground in pain. He groaned as pain seared through his body, and a scream ripped his mouth apart as his body started to steam and grow larger. Sweat dripped from his body and his breath came in ragged gasps. After a few more seconds of antagonizing pain, he stumbled to get up in his original teenage form. Slightly wobbly, he moved over to his dresser and pulled out some clothes and dressed. When he was done he finally had gained his composure and went over to the professor’s house to get Ai who had dressed as Conan. It had grown dark and little kids were running around, gathering candy from lots of houses. An idea popped in Shinichi’s head and he grinned. Then he turned to Ai who was staring at his face. She sighed, knowing what he would do. “Buy a cheap one. You’re not actually going trick or treating.” “I know,” he mumbled in reply. They went to a store really quick and bought a monster mask. Then the two walked to the agency together in silence. It wasn’t necessarily awkward though. The two had become practically best friends during that time. When they arrived they knocked on the door and Ran came to open it. Shinichi picked up Ai and held her as if she was a hostage. When Ran saw a ‘monster’ holding ‘Conan’ she immediately lashed out. Shinichi dodged saying, “Oi, oi, don’t go killing your childhood friend now.” Her second punch stopped in mid-air. “Sh-Shinichi?” she stammered. He pulled off his mask and said, “Yo Ran.” He smiled brightly at her. Tearing up slightly she showed an angry expression. “Put down Conan-kun. I don’t know who is dressing up as Shinichi, but you can’t fool me.” Conan looked at Shinichi. Then threw the mask that ‘Conan’ was wearing Ai said, “You shouldn’t have worn any mask. You’d have a better chance of living.” “Oi, Haibara, don’t make me sound like a girl.” “Oh? I quite like making you sound like a girl.” He grumbled. Ran looked at the two of them in confusion. Shinichi noticed the look. “Err, Ran, can we come in? I’ll explain then.” She bit her lip slightly and allowed them in. Kogoro was passed out on the couch and snoring loudly so they went to the detective agency to talk. They explained everything to Ran, down to the littlest of details. Ai pulled off her costume to show that she was not the little boy who Ran had been accustomed to living with, and Ran pulled at his cheek and hair to make sure it wasn’t some sort of mask. When the whole mess had been cleaned up, Ai noticed a change in mood. She pulled on her disguise and said, “I’m going upstairs to bed, I’ll be staying her for a while. See you a bit later.” The two watched her go, which made their nerves unsettle realizing they were alone. Finally they worked up the courage and both stammered, “I-I have something to say.” Both stopped and gestured for the other to go. “How about we say at the same time?” asked Shinichi. “S-Sure.”~Tacticalwolf~ They counted to three and both blurted out, “I love you.” It became deathly quiet, and both were blushing furiously. Then, they slowly lifted their heads and their eyes made contact. Shinichi leaned towards her hesitantly. Then he whispered, right before his lips brushed up against hers, “Happy Halloween.” hope you liked it! 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Shinichi Kodou 12 Report post Posted October 31, 2010 YYYAAAAAAYYYY I LUV U KIEL-CHAN!! still didnt read the story but the tittle is getting me super excited SHINRAN XD anyway i'll give my opinion once i finish reading thaaanx for sharing this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted October 31, 2010 lawl ok, i guess i'll dedicate it to you and Kaoko~chan for now! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shinichi Kodou 12 Report post Posted October 31, 2010 lawl ok, i guess i'll dedicate it to you and Kaoko~chan for now! AWWW really thannnnx btw its amazinggggg!! and cute! not too romantic though..but still, i luv it btw i came acroos a spelling mistake i think it should be here and not "her" but its okay for sure i enjoyed this one and now gonna read the conai story ^,^ thanx again Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 AWWW really thannnnx btw its amazinggggg!! and cute! not too romantic though..but still, i luv it btw i came acroos a spelling mistake i think it should be here and not "her" but its okay for sure i enjoyed this one and now gonna read the conai story ^,^ thanx again lawl ok, i know it's not too romantic... but i'm not necessarily sure how to make it romantic between those two... for me it doesn't feel natural sorry Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
syllablebray23 0 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 wee ~~ I'm so loving it ~~ I'm inspired to create a fanfic ~~~ ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 wee ~~ I'm so loving it ~~ I'm inspired to create a fanfic ~~~ ^^ make one make one! i implore you to make one! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HennyAng 4 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 I really Love it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 Nice! It is a wonderful story, though it feels a bit rushed. BTW, I don't really get this sentences: Then threw the mask that ‘Conan’ was wearing Ai said, “You shouldn’t have worn any mask. You’d have a better chance of living.” “Oi, Haibara, don’t make me sound like a girl.” Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 whoops, sorry about that... it wasn't supposed to be threw, but through... as in like my hand went through the screen door when i punched it yeah, so he was talking through the mask... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 Owwww... I though that Ai took of her mask and later on in the story, she did it again and so I was like WTF!? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted November 1, 2010 lol i can see how that would be confusing XD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bubbles 0 Report post Posted January 15, 2011 beautiful! love your story Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted January 15, 2011 beautiful! love your story thnx ^^ you must be a shinran fan since i don't think you've read the shihoxshinichi one yet... or was it aicon... well its been a while since i read my own story so i can't even remember XD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted January 15, 2011 Great job! However confusing it was, it was a great pleasure to read. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted January 16, 2011 Great job! However confusing it was, it was a great pleasure to read. sorry if it was somewhat confusing >w< i tried my best to make it easy to understand... if you read it over again, ususally u'd understand it cuz you notice more and you've had more time to digest the info Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Orangeburst 19 Report post Posted January 17, 2011 That was AMAZING! Like! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted January 17, 2011 That was AMAZING! Like! thnk you <3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted January 19, 2011 sorry if it was somewhat confusing >w< i tried my best to make it easy to understand... if you read it over again, ususally u'd understand it cuz you notice more and you've had more time to digest the info I read it over again...stil a bit confusing. I read at about 50 words/second, so maybe that's why? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted January 19, 2011 I read it over again...stil a bit confusing. I read at about 50 words/second, so maybe that's why? maybe XD point out the confusing part and i'll try to explain (umm don't say the whole thing... i'll have to shoot you then XD) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted January 19, 2011 The whole thing... No, maybe it is because it is clumped into one very large paragraph... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted January 20, 2011 The whole thing... No, maybe it is because it is clumped into one very large paragraph... hahaha, actually its not XD the problem is that the indents of the paragraph didn't copy in... so... yep... it camme out without indents.. and i'm too lazy to go back and indent every paragraph XD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
