Kiel95 86 Report post Posted November 3, 2010 ok, so i have to write a 50,000 word story by the end of the month, and i don't want my friends or family to read it before i finish... i was wondering if anybody would be willing to read it and give me feedback on the story... now of course i'd prefer if it was someone i talk to regularly on DCW so i know i can trust them, but at the moment i just reaaaaaaally need an editor cuz i'm worried it's a terrible story... so if you're willing to help, please say so!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Southpaw 61 Report post Posted November 3, 2010 I won't be able to do anything new until after this weekend, but I've been a beta reader on ff.net for a while, and I have a friend who was also sending me stuff (although I gave up on his work because he didn't vary his sentence lengths enough [they were mostly too long], and used some older style sentence structuring that made it hard to just read without having to go back and re-read each line) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted November 3, 2010 when you are free to read, please tell me, i'm in need of an editor >.< THANK YOU!!!!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Luxuria 0 Report post Posted November 8, 2010 I want to read it (when it's in English)! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Southpaw 61 Report post Posted November 8, 2010 I want to read it (when it's in English)! um... I'm assuming it's in English, otherwise I can't help (I know bits of other languages, but I'm not fluent in any of them ) and I can start reading stuff this week, since the festival is over. you can email me chapters or send links by PM, or however works best Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monsi 51 Report post Posted November 9, 2010 I'll help you.Send me a copy of that to my Yahoo! email account. It's posted in my profile.Then, I'll give you a feedback in a few days. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emy Ulfsdotter 6 Report post Posted November 11, 2010 I might be able to help if you need any more helpers, just send me a message and I'll give you my email. What is the story about anyway? what genre? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
J3nny 22 Report post Posted November 12, 2010 I'll read too!!! but it need to be in english so i could help you with the editing part since engligh is my first language. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites