IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 Nah. Too blunt. Plus, Vermouth is somewhere else. Not to mention Anokata...I think I'll stop here before I give away everything. I advise you to give me more ideas! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sayomi 17 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to maybe get a piece of Gin's past in? (if he's there guarding/torturing Shinichi). He could be about to do something to hurt Shinichi then gets a vision of the same thing he watchdd happening to someone he lost :3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to note that it may be a bit late for this chapter, but I might include it in the next. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sayomi 17 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to have Vermouth going somewhere in order to prepare a safe place for Shinichi to escape to after he gets out. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to note that TT_TT Pages quit on me so I have to rewrite the entire chapter (4000 words!) and the chapter's uploading may have to be pushed back even further. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sayomi 17 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to use Microsoft Word next time :3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to note that I don't have Word...I'll use OpenOffice instead... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sayomi 17 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to use whatever will store your chapters safely :3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rye 122 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to stop bothering IdentityUnknown. (No offense) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to tell me if you have a fanfic account. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sayomi 17 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to accept my apology for bothering you :3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hopes 237 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to know that JULIA is sitting next to me. :3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to tell us WHO JULIA IS! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sayomi 17 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to know Julia is Chelsea's friend (I know this from her fanfic) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise YOU! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sayomi 17 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to advise me on something random. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you AGAIN! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted April 15, 2011 I advise you to accept my apology for bothering you :3 Accepted. I'm almost finished! And I saved it this time. I advise you AGAIN! I advise you to be more creative. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted April 16, 2011 I advise YOU! YOU! YOU! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted April 16, 2011 I advise you to stop repeating yourself. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted April 16, 2011 I advise YOU AGAIN! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted April 16, 2011 I ADVISE YOU TO STOP SAYING THE SAME THING OVER AND OVER AGAIN!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted April 16, 2011 I advise you to stay calm. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IdentityUnknown 216 Report post Posted April 16, 2011 I advise you to say something else. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted April 16, 2011 I advise you not to say that. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
