Ran Moorie 17 Report post Posted December 4, 2010 Since the day Jodie, the FBI Agent, called about the opportunity to infiltrate and end the Black Organization Shinichi and Haibara are trying to think up a plan that will be the most effective. “Kudo-kun, why don’t you call Hattori Henji to come over and help us formulate a plan? We are kind of stuck here with nothing in our minds to help us,” Haibara suggested. Shinichi nodded in agreement and went to get his cell- phone to call Hattori. “Hello?” Hattori answered. “It’s me, Kudo Shinichi,” Shinichi replied. “Oh, good old pal and rival eh? What’s up?” Hattori asked. “We need your help to make an effective plan to infiltrate the organization,” Shinichi answered. “Okay! I’ll be on my way!” Hattori said. He then hung up and went to his motorcycle to ride to Shinichi’s house. Ding Dong went the door bell. Shinichi went over to open the door. “Hi, Hattori! What is Kazuwa doing here?” Shinichi asked. “Well, it’s a long story. To make it short, she just decided to tag along and see what’s going on,” Hattori replied. “What?! You think I just tagged along to see what is going on with the two of you?! I came here to Ran-chan! Not you two socializing!” Kazuwa screamed at the top of her lungs. “Okay, okay. Go on now and reunite with your friend Ran. Heh Heh Heh,” Hattori said. “Hmmph!” Kazuwa grunted and then left the house to Ran’s home. “Ah. Now since Kazuwa is not here any more, lets try to make up a plan,” Hattori said. “Okay. Here’s what we came up with so far. Since the building they will be meeting up at is the old ware house at Beika City, Ai and I had decided to come though the windows to get inside since the doors will all be locked or guarded,” Shinichi explained. “But how will we even reach the windows on the ware house? They’re way too high,” Hattori asked. “Yeah, how will we reach those windows? I never thought about that,” Shinichi said. “I have an idea! We will use the basement windows. You know those windows that are really close to the ground,” Hattori said. “Oh yeah, now I see what you are talking about. In the picture of the ware house on the computer, you could zoom in to see those windows on the bottom of the building,” Shinichi exclaimed. “So you see all of the police people and the FBI agents could go inside and surround them and arrest them for good,” Hattori explained. Shinichi nodded in agreement. Haibara sat there with her smile of satisfaction. While the two detectives were still making amends to their plan, Ran who is outside walking and hanging out with Kazuwa, accidentally heard Shinichi’s conversation which made her curious to see what was going on. “What are those two guys up to?” Ran wondered. She ran over to Shinichi house and decided to hide in the bushes to not be caught. After a while of hearing this conversation, she decided to wait until the next day to track them down and see what they are up to. “ I'm sure to find the truth behind Shinichi’s plan and mind once and for all," Ran muttered. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiel95 86 Report post Posted December 5, 2010 interesting... but do you think next time you can start a new paragraph each time the person talking switches? it gets kinda confusin otherwise... (but i can't wait for next part!!!) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HennyAng 4 Report post Posted December 5, 2010 getting more and more exciting... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HalfAngel 28 Report post Posted December 5, 2010 Waaaahhh~ I wanna know what happens next >.< Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scar Akai 65 Report post Posted December 7, 2010 Very fabulous... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
