Cheesus 6 Report post Posted January 22, 2011 IS THAT A CONFESSION! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Officer Kaoko 142 Report post Posted January 22, 2011 As an outsider merely reading this thread, let it be known that I found a few holes in that deduction that still haven't been pointed out by anyone yet. Just sayin'. Wow, can you point it out, Crawler ? Just put it in the spoiler box. Also, I think Gin, when he started this case, he was only going to do a simple one and didn't think that you guys would deduce such amazing and complicated deductions ... What??! You thought Maurice died and went to heaven because of... MY SUPER KILLINGLY AWESOME COOKING~?!!! And that the knife was just a metaphor?! No way!! That was hilarious, LOL! That made me laugh (good emoticon catch)! You and Southpaw make a good team to kill Maurice Just imagined it and it was... awkward . IS THAT A CONFESSION! LOL! Lol, fun read. Too bad poor Maurice doesn't have a more prominent role than being the victim. And thanks for the emotion/emoticon layer Kaoko rofl. I think this would be one of the few fan-fics that you ever read! LOL ! And you're welcome . Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cheesus 6 Report post Posted January 23, 2011 Whodunit? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted January 23, 2011 Whodunit? Because Gin here is leaving DCW, we may never know... Because of this, if Gin does not post within 6 days, I will take over and post mine. -January 23, 2011. Deadline: January 29, 2011. UPDATE: Gin is not leaving. However, I wish that Gin would tell us...or eventually I will post my mystery... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Inspector Gin 45 Report post Posted January 25, 2011 (edited) A few hours later all the detective left and the family went to bed, but there was one who could not sleep so she decided to go for a walk in the garden deep in thoughts. She was sitting on a branch when she heard some footsteps approaching, she turned around to see the gardener walking towards her, she whip the tears from here eyes and put on a smile. Southpaw: what are you doing awake? Monsi: I heard some noise so I came to check it out. It seems that it was you. Southpaw: Oh …I still can’t believe that my brother murdered father. Do you? Monsi: Of course not. Southpaw: Who do you think did it? Monsi *puts a wide smile on his face and takes out a knife*: …It was me~ Southpaw was shocked for a moment. Monsi flew towards her with the knife in his hand, when one massive onion flew straight to his hand knocking the knife out. He turned around to see who it was… Blueberry: Mom, do it NOW! Southpaw shouted, ‘right!’ then kicked Monsi in his stomach, then he fell down to the ground in pain. “I finally understand that what all this about! You murdered my father and before he died he left a dying message saying it was his son, CarpetCrawler… he said it was him to protect him while the police find the real murderer! My father knew that I could take care of myself since I’m older and stronger than him. Blueberry, call the police at once!” Blueberry: Yes, MOM! ~half an hour later The police arrived and took Monsi away. And not long later, CarpetCrawler was released. At the mansion. Blueberry cried and said: I can’t believe that I just harmed an onion. Her father, detectiveRGB said: worry not~ we can get you more new onions. ~The end~ Edited January 26, 2011 by Detective Gin Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted January 26, 2011 Kaoko, are you going to improve this part too? :grin: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cheesus 6 Report post Posted January 26, 2011 i dont get the ending. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
blueberry 25 Report post Posted January 27, 2011 A few hours later all the detective left and the family went to bed, but there was one who could not sleep so she decided to go for a walk in the garden deep in thoughts. She was sitting on a branch when she heard some footsteps approaching, she turned around to see the gardener walking towards her, she whip the tears from here eyes and put on a smile. Southpaw: what are you doing awake? Monsi: I heard some noise so I came to check it out. It seems that it was you. Southpaw: Oh …I still can’t believe that my brother murdered father. Do you? Monsi: Of course not. Southpaw: Who do you think did it? Monsi *puts a wide smile on his face and takes out a knife*: …It was me~ Southpaw was shocked for a moment. Monsi flew towards her with the knife in his hand, when one massive onion flew straight to his hand knocking the knife out. He turned around to see who it was… Blueberry: Mom, do it NOW! Southpaw shouted, ‘right!’ then kicked Monsi in his stomach, then he fell down to the ground in pain. “I finally understand that what all this about! You murdered my father and before he died he left a dying message saying it was his son, CarpetCrawler… he said it was him to protect him while the police find the real murderer! My father knew that I could take care of myself since I’m older and stronger than him. Blueberry, call the police at once!” Blueberry: Yes, MOM! ~half an hour later The police arrived and took Monsi away. And not long later, CarpetCrawler was released. At the mansion. Blueberry cried and said: I can’t believe that I just harmed an onion. Her father, detectiveRGB said: worry not~ we can get you more new onions. ~The end~ now how did I get involved in this and lol Southpaw is my mom and RJB is my dad haven't I told you that I am not 13 but 31 ?!?! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted January 27, 2011 It is time to bring up a point. Monsi is the gardener. Monsi is the murderer. No one accused the gardener. However, Emily and I both placed him under suspicion because it is strange "to plant in the winter". Sadly, Emily eventually "lost" suspicion and I accused CarpetCrawler. How will we decide who goes next? Janken? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Orangeburst 19 Report post Posted January 27, 2011 Wow! This was fun...Next whodunit please...I'm just waiting...for...the...next...one...to...come...!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Inspector Gin 45 Report post Posted January 27, 2011 i dont get the ending. what don't you get? I'm more than happy to explain it to you. :grin: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Officer Kaoko 142 Report post Posted January 29, 2011 Kaoko, are you going to improve this part too? :grin: I don't plan to ... but if you insist ~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
blueberry 25 Report post Posted January 29, 2011 I don't plan to ... but if you insist ~ please do I want to see the onioned version Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Officer Kaoko 142 Report post Posted January 29, 2011 please do I want to see the onioned version LOL! Mmmm... I will see what I can do. I didn't know that you guys like the Onioned version . But I will see what I can do ~ Also, I laughed when I read that Southpaw is your mother ... and what's more ? RGB IS! YOUR! DAD ?!! You gotta be kidding me ! ... 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted January 29, 2011 LOL! Mmmm... I will see what I can do. I didn't know that you guys like the Onioned version . But I will see what I can do ~Also, I laughed when I read that Southpaw is your mother ... and what's more ? RGB IS! YOUR! DAD ?!! You gotta be kidding me !... I laughed too...but I was delusional then. I'm fine now. Also, Kan-chan, I accidentaly upped your post, but it was something I would do anyway... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Officer Kaoko 142 Report post Posted January 29, 2011 I laughed too...but I was delusional then. I'm fine now. Also, Kan-chan, I accidentaly upped your post, but it was something I would do anyway... Thanks a lot, Xtion-kun !! But what's up with 'Kan-chan' ? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
blueberry 25 Report post Posted January 29, 2011 LOL! Mmmm... I will see what I can do. I didn't know that you guys like the Onioned version . But I will see what I can do ~ Also, I laughed when I read that Southpaw is your mother ... and what's more ? RGB IS! YOUR! DAD ?!! You gotta be kidding me ! ... kao-chan how could you!?! just wait I am going to :mrgreen: just kidding Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted January 29, 2011 Thanks a lot, Xtion-kun !! But what's up with 'Kan-chan' ? Do you want me to call you Ka-chan (that was the nickname I was going to say...) :mrgreen: I will be posting the next mystery (whodunit)... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Inspector Gin 45 Report post Posted January 30, 2011 I will be posting the next mystery (whodunit)... We are waiting Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Inspector Gin 45 Report post Posted January 30, 2011 I will be posting the next mystery (whodunit)... We are waiting Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted January 30, 2011 We are waiting We are waiting You are waiting twice? Let me think a bit... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Inspector Gin 45 Report post Posted January 30, 2011 Oh, sorry about that.. :smile: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Orangeburst 19 Report post Posted February 1, 2011 Do you want me to call you Ka-chan (that was the nickname I was going to say...) :mrgreen: I will be posting the next mystery (whodunit)... Yay! The next whodunit! Waiting... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emy Ulfsdotter 6 Report post Posted February 1, 2011 I'm just curious, what was supposed to be the deciding clue? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tengaku squared 291 Report post Posted February 1, 2011 I'm just curious, what was supposed to be the deciding clue? I have yet to get that too: Nope...its not working...can't figure it out... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
