Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 Finally sat my butt and started writing. Any tips on how much I should describe a character and how much I should leave it to the readers' imagination? It's more of a what will appeal to the readers than writing what I want to story. You should write what you want to :V Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
A L 217 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 You should write what you want to :V I'm so awesome I write what the readers want the main idea is to make them feel like I'm not trying to force my imagination on them. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 I'm so awesome I write what the readers want the main idea is to make them feel like I'm not trying to force my imagination on them.I prefer you forcing your imagination on me :VIt's not exciting if we know what is going to happen. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
A L 217 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 I prefer you forcing your imagination on me :V It's not exciting if we know what is going to happen. Nah I mean the description of characters and places. I suck at those. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 Nah I mean the description of characters and places. I suck at those.Right... Then..I want a guy as handsome as prince in fairy tale, as cute as a chick, as loyal as a dog, as naughty as a kitten, as sweet as a rabbit, as powerful as nuclear and as awesome as me. :V Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lovestruck 70 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 I miss you people :c Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Erza Scarlet 104 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 @AL- You should paint the scene on your readers' mind. Descriptive words are effective. Err, I don't really write, but if you're like going to narrate a story about a dog, specify it by using "Siberian husky", "Border Collie", "dalmatian" instead of just dog. Is that what you mean? XD Oh well whatever lol ROOOOOSEEEEE Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lovestruck 70 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 Yeeeessssss? ;o Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Erza Scarlet 104 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 Nothing! xP it's not like we didn't talk for a loooong time but I'm glad you're posting here again \o/ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lovestruck 70 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 It's time. For the awesomest Rose to spread her glitter on this thread And spam it with ENDLESS AWESOMENESS!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Erza Scarlet 104 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 BYE ROSE YOU'RE HALLUCINATING I'M THE MOST AWESOMEST AWESOMELY AWESOME HERE DID YOU GET THAT Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 Lol rose dear~! <3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
A L 217 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 I miss you people :c *waiting for ages for you to reply* but.............really glad you're still here <3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lovestruck 70 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 To reply what. Uh. Wait. I forgot :< @EZZY: That's right<3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ren-kun 50 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 Hi Rosie. But... I want to add everyone on Skype. :/ And coughs are the bane of my existence. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
A L 217 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 Hi Rosie. But... I want to add everyone on Skype. :/ And coughs are the bane of my existence. Feel free to add meh I don't have any guys in my contacts yet Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arima 58 Report post Posted April 24, 2013 I suffered bullying in the classroom..... I don't want to go for school.. Tomorrow ... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kaitou Kid Legendary Thief 197 Report post Posted April 25, 2013 I suffered bullying in the classroom..... I don't want to go for school.. Tomorrow ... What happened!? D:*hugs* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arima 58 Report post Posted April 25, 2013 What happened!? D: *hugs* *hugs tight* It was horrible what happened to me ... This week is just to do test, and I could not sleep well, I was just studying, and got the highest score ... Only when the teacher praised me, had some girls who said I should not be here (Here in Brazil ) and I heard it .. then started to speak badly of everything about me .. that I'm fat, boring, bad about my religion and all the people hate me .... Now I understand why no one smiled for me just ti say " Good Morning" But what I did for them? Just because I'm different? I do not understand .. ..... I could not stand, rushes to the bathroom to cry ... I do not know what I did to deserve .. I swear .. I do not know what to do to change that. [EDIT] I don't want cry anymore.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
snowflake 41 Report post Posted April 25, 2013 UUGH... I haven't been here for what seems like ages... So I had to figure out the password for the Internet in my aunt's house. Tooooo easy. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Erza Scarlet 104 Report post Posted April 25, 2013 @EZZY: That's right<3Thanks for believing But... I want to add everyone on Skype. :/Add me! \o/*hugs tight* It was horrible what happened to me ... This week is just to do test, and I could not sleep well, I was just studying, and got the highest score ... Only when the teacher praised me, had some girls who said I should not be here (Here in Brazil ) and I heard it .. then started to speak badly of everything about me .. that I'm fat, boring, bad about my religion and all the people hate me .... Now I understand why no one smiled for me just ti say " Good Morning" But what I did for them? Just because I'm different? I do not understand .. ..... I could not stand, rushes to the bathroom to cry ... I do not know what I did to deserve .. I swear .. I do not know what to do to change that.[EDIT] I don't want cry anymore..*HUGS* Nur, be strong. (Sorry that's all I can say >___<) but whenever you feel sad, just come on DCW and we'll all cheer you up! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maltavite 61 Report post Posted April 25, 2013 I want gaming PC. But I can't choose what's the best PC for me. Either ASUS' ROG (Republic of Gamers) or Alienware. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hobgoblin2012 49 Report post Posted April 25, 2013 *hugs tight* It was horrible what happened to me ... This week is just to do test, and I could not sleep well, I was just studying, and got the highest score ... Only when the teacher praised me, had some girls who said I should not be here (Here in Brazil ) and I heard it .. then started to speak badly of everything about me .. that I'm fat, boring, bad about my religion and all the people hate me .... Now I understand why no one smiled for me just ti say " Good Morning" But what I did for them? Just because I'm different? I do not understand .. ..... I could not stand, rushes to the bathroom to cry ... I do not know what I did to deserve .. I swear .. I do not know what to do to change that. [EDIT] I don't want cry anymore.. My full solidarity to you. I hate bullies. I really HATE THEM TO DEATH. The fact that they are underage and can't be harshly punished by the law makes them even more sadistic. I once read a real-life story about the son of a mafia boss being bullied to the point he tried to hang himself and is still in coma after more that 20 years. I wonder why didn't the father put a contract on the b@#$%^&s. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
A L 217 Report post Posted April 25, 2013 My full solidarity to you. I hate bullies. I really HATE THEM TO DEATH. The fact that they are underage and can't be harshly punished by the law makes them even more sadistic. I once read a real-life story about the son of a mafia boss being bullied to the point he tried to hang himself and is still in coma after more that 20 years. I wonder why didn't the father put a contract on the b@#$%^&s. Hating someone so much is bad for your health. But then again, just my opinion. The word 'unforgivable' doesn't exist in my dictionary. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hobgoblin2012 49 Report post Posted April 25, 2013 Hating someone so much is bad for your health. But then again, just my opinion. The word 'unforgivable' doesn't exist in my dictionary. It isn't so much about hatred as about the fact I am sorry for the bullied ones, in this case Nur. M. (I was bullied at school also). And I am not saying I never forgive my enemies, but that's only if they apologize and most of them don't give a damn what I think about them so it really makes no difference. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites